I really like what you've got here - I played through Trixy's side earlier and was very impressed. I'm on the free version, so any criticism I have to offer has likely been addressed in the Patreon version.
One bit of advice I'd like to say: make sure there are enough options for players to go to either world but still get the appropriate result with the characters. If, say, you want to be a real asshole to Keith but still take Trixy's side that day, you should be able to do that, or if you want to get with Sophie but side with Mara. It seems like it's pretty well balanced so far, so you may have already thought of this, in whoch case keep up the good work.
Looking forward to playing Mara's side later!