[Implemented]Doggie Snausages v2 + Gil (Canine Cuntboy)

[Etis]

lol ya'll are squabbling over the lore of this item and series stuff while I'm over here like "I'm just really just excited for multi-tits"

It's serious business here. :catbert:

 

[JDeko]

i really take this all too serious as if Ausars at large don't like this item in-universe I can't get over the fact it'd be kinda OOC for my Steele to take it.

 

[Trogdor]

lol ya'll are squabbling over the lore of this item and series stuff while I'm over here like "I'm just really just excited for multi-tits"

You'd prefer everyone wrote in different directions and nothing interconnected, or worse, we had contradictions? That wouldn't make for a very good story.

 

[Etis]

i really take this all too serious as if Ausars at large don't like this item in-universe I can't get over the fact it'd be kinda OOC for my Steele to take it.

Steele, even if half-ausar, is much more human by upbringing. And with father like their, should be much more open to changes.

 

[JDeko]

yeah, but what if your Steele is kind of an Ausar-weeaboo that is fixated on their Dogness and over-compensating?

 

[Trogdor]

yeah, but what if your Steele is kind of an Ausar-weeaboo that is fixated on their Dogness and over-compensating?

Well, like I said earlier, just because there are protests and attacks doesn't mean "Ausars at large don't like it". It just means some of them don't like it.
I don't really understand your issue; you seem to contradict yourself. If your Steele is a super conservative Ausar, and super conservative Ausars don't like canine tfs... then your Steele wouldn't be, as you describe, 'fixated on their dogness'.

 

[JDeko]

Fair enough

 

[Etis]

yeah, but what if your Steele is kind of an Ausar-weeaboo that is fixated on their Dogness and over-compensating?

Dogness? Ausars are just posers. Go to the true furry side!

 

[JDeko]

Dogness? Ausars are just posers. Go to the true furry side!

I've barely gotten to the point where I can look past the furriness of full-furs to still enjoy sex scenes with them, I don't think I'll be having any fursonas any time soon ^___^;

 

[Trogdor]

I've barely gotten to the point where I can look past the furriness of full-furs to still enjoy sex scenes with them, I don't think I'll be having any fursonas any time soon ^___^;

Count yourself fortunate, then, that most of the game's races are humans with animal parts tacked on. I'm in much the opposite situation. People have criticized Mass Effect for, despite having a galaxy's worth of genetic diversity to explore, most of its races being pretty much humanoid (Esp. the Asari). Well, Mass Effect's got nothing on TiTs in that regard But I still find the whole thing highly enjoyable, despite this.

 

[JDeko]

Count yourself fortunate, then, that most of the game's races are humans with animal parts tacked on. I'm in much the opposite situation. People have criticized Mass Effect for, despite having a galaxy's worth of genetic diversity to explore, most of its races being pretty much humanoid (Esp. the Asari). Well, Mass Effect's got nothing on TiTs in that regard But I still find the whole thing highly enjoyable, despite this.

You had your turn in CoC, now it is time for the humanoid lovers to be the majority xD

 

[Etis]

You had your turn in CoC, now it is time for the humanoid lovers to be the majority xD

Even in CoC furries were not in such overwhelming majority.

 

[Karretch]

Count yourself fortunate, then, that most of the game's races are humans with animal parts tacked on. I'm in much the opposite situation. People have criticized Mass Effect for, despite having a galaxy's worth of genetic diversity to explore, most of its races being pretty much humanoid (Esp. the Asari). Well, Mass Effect's got nothing on TiTs in that regard But I still find the whole thing highly enjoyable, despite this.

Hanar on elcor action? :3


@JDeko the point Trogdor is making is that too much is humanoid. Furries are humanoid, hence the commonly used "anthro" to indicate basically humans with animal features. Explaining this in this community feels weird.

 

[treatedfae]

You'd prefer everyone wrote in different directions and nothing interconnected, or worse, we had contradictions? That wouldn't make for a very good story.

Nah, I'm just pointing out how I'm super easy to please. I'm glad there are people out here who know enough lore though for quality control lol. 

 

[Trogdor]

Hanar on elcor action? :3


@JDeko the point Trogdor is making is that too much is humanoid. Furries are humanoid, hence the commonly used "anthro" to indicate basically humans with animal features. Explaining this in this community feels weird.

I'd be happy enough with furries, but some more non-humanoid aliens would be pretty welcome too. At least a furry is different enough where you can look at it and say 'yup, that evolved as a separate species on a different planet from humans'.


A thought just crossed my mind: I don't think we have a single instance of a non-human alien (like a Leithan or Ovir or something) taking gene mods to become more or completely human.


@treatedfae it's not just the knowing, it's the caring enough to put the time and effort into talking about it and forming persuasive reasoning.

 

[Karretch]

A thought just crossed my mind: I don't think we have a single instance of a non-human alien (like a Leithan or Ovir or something) taking gene mods to become more or completely human.

I don't think there's any non-human-at-all that fits that bill either. Sure, plenty of humans gone one way or the other, but none gone towards human. We just that boring and I don't blame them.

 

[TheInfamousImmortal]

Count yourself fortunate, then, that most of the game's races are humans with animal parts tacked on.

Not gonna lie, I have the exact same thought. And I really HATE that is what some of the race's really are, just humans with a few animal parts or alien parts and are called an alien race.

the point Trogdor is making is that too much is humanoid. Furries are humanoid, hence the commonly used "anthro" to indicate basically humans with animal features.

To me, the term 'Anthro' means a bipedal animal with human-like intelligence.


Like the one in the middle of this picture -> https://i.redditmedia.com/19_UC-EaiGvo87MAF-CdSORmnw2t2a1HVwqeG7xaaWg.jpg?w=1023&s=73bfc03564e47c912446fbdca7eb9219

 

[Kesil]

"Anthro" comes from "anthropos", which ironically means "human". But someone decided that anthropomorphic was too long of a word and decided to roll with it. In that sense, every figure on that picture is "anthro-pomorphic" figure. Properly speaking, three of them would be an anthropomorphized version of a wolf. Just like "taur" means "bull", a female naga is a nagini and an alicorn is the horn of an unicorn, furry fandom can be quite funny at times.


It's just too bad we're not getting aliens in an aliens game because, hey, how could we muster and, gasp, screw them?

 

[Karretch]

It's just too bad we're not getting aliens in an aliens game because, hey, how could we muster and, gasp, screw them?

No tits? No ass?? No recognizable genitalia?!? What how where??!?1


But yeah, I agree. And when it's talked about the weak-sauce argument that I hate is brought up: It's not easily recognizable. Yeah, yeah, simple porn game, simple fap. But can't really go anywhere else.

 

[Nik_van_Rijn]

It's just too bad we're not getting aliens in an aliens game because, hey, how could we muster and, gasp, screw them?

Saddest part is: the game alludes to their existence on several occasions, but we haven't interacted with them and probably never will.


Back to them rails: Canid morphs are long overdue and I'd be very pleased when this TF will make it, especially if the subspecies portion will remain in one form or another.

 

[Lashcharge]

Well to explain the reason why I went this way with the lore, is because of the story bible. It directly states that there are lots of legal battles(or wars) over between lots of super-corps, but that concept is never truly explored in the game. It's just a background note to explain why Steele Tech is a small super corp. I wanted to bring that concept to the forefront with this set of items with a lot of damage to most involved beings. Changing that to Ausar being offended, would feel weak and not enough to break a supercorp

lol ya'll are squabbling over the lore of this item and series stuff while I'm over here like "I'm just really just excited for multi-tits"

Dogs have multinipples. Which is why I added multi-tits to this item.

 

[Trogdor]

Saddest part is: the game alludes to their existence on several occasions, but we haven't interacted with them and probably never will.


Back to them rails: Canid morphs are long overdue and I'd be very pleased when this TF will make it, especially if the subspecies portion will remain in one form or another.

Well, we do have a few weird things. The Orryx, the weird tripod bartender, the Raskvel, Siel, whatever Gene is supposed to be (I forget what his race is even called). But I think we could definitely do with more Hanar, Elcor, Keepers, Rachni, and...whatever that planet-wide subterranian mind-controlling plant monster from ME1 was. Those kinds of things. Imagine a world inhabited by subterranean plant creatures miles wide, and part of them emerges from the ground for.. reasons.


Unfortunately, at this point, to suddenly go in that direction would make the game feel like it turned on a dime and fell into the hands of a different developer; you don't really want the first 3 planets to feel one way, and then suddenly on the next world most of the animal-humans are gone and replaced by very alien aliens. That would be a major shift in tone that a lot of people probably wouldn't like. So we'd have to take baby steps.

Well to explain the reason why I went this way with the lore, is because of the story bible. It directly states that there are lots of legal battles(or wars) over between lots of super-corps, but that concept is never truly explored in the game. It's just a background note to explain why Steele Tech is a small super corp. I wanted to bring that concept to the forefront with this set of items with a lot of damage to most involved beings. Changing that to Ausar being offended, would feel weak and not enough to break a supercorp

Then you'll need to change the circumstances of the legal battle. A consumer protection agency taking a corporation to court is not going to ruin the corporation financially; a judge is not going to inflict punitive damages so great that the corporation is ruined - thereby putting everyone the corporation employed out of a job. That would be far more harmful than whatever imagined harm the corporation inflicted with its careless marketing campaign.


The prosecution would need to be another corporation, claiming copyright/patent infringement and thus seeking damages due to lost sales. Further, Bluecrab's lawyers and management would have to be incompetent to buy the rights to a product which gets them into so much legal and contractual trouble. And yet, Steele Tech conveniently doesn't have any of these problems.

 

[Lashcharge]

Change this:

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]This product was originally created by Wolf&Castle Inc., but, because of later advertising campaigns that encouraged teenagers to take this transformative as a form of rebellion against their parents, the corporation was set with lengthy and expensive court proceedings that eventually drove it to bankruptcy. To pay off their debts, the patents for these transformatives and their variants were sold to the Bluecrab corp. However, because of the contracts they had with their xeno-geneticists and contradicting copyright laws of several different governments, this only resulted in more expensive and lengthy court battles where Bluecrab fought for what they bought. Only recently, when the Bluecrab corporation filed for bankruptcy after some intentionally self-destructive actions by its own CEO, did the battles over copyright begin to die down, long after any of original complainers had died.[/SIZE]


[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]Only the original product survived these court proceedings intact, being bought by Steele Tech and sold as a remake. The other variants were split into various copyrights that Steele Tech can't buy, either because those who own them don't want to sell or have been bought by competing companies that didn't want the full product to be sold. Steele Tech occasionally releases promotions where parts of these variants are sold in the same package as the remake.[/SIZE]

to this(along with some corrections on the codex):

[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]This product was invented by Wolf&Castle Inc., but due to industrial espionage the Bluecrab corp copyrighted and released the product first. Wolf&Castle launched an internal investigation to search for the source of the leak, but was unable to find it for several years as the product grew in popularity and profitability. When they did find the leak and brought it to justice, Wolf&Castle set their sights on regaining control over their stolen property by bringing Bluecrab corp to court. Both corporations fought fervently through lengthy and expensive court battles, which lasted for several years. Even Wolf&Castle's eventual bankruptcy did not stop the legal proceedings as the descendants of the xeno-geneticists continued to fight for it.[/SIZE]


[SIZE=14.666666666666666px]But, after a series of intentional extremely bad investments, the CEO of Bluecrab Corb bankrupted the company, only then did the battles over copyright begin to die down, long after any of original claimants had died. Most of the original patent survived these court proceedings intact, being quickly bought by Steele Tech and sold as a remake. The derivative products were not so lucky as Steele Tech only managed to get bits and pieces of the original formula, either because those who own them don't want to sell them, or they have already been sold to competing companies that didn't want the full product to be sold. Steele Tech occasionally releases promotions where parts of these variants that they managed to purchase are sold in the same package as the remake.[/SIZE]

Is there any problem with this version Trogdor?


Also adapted the Doggie Snausages ear transformation to make it the same as the one Jacques added.

 

[Etis]

The subset of the playerbase that wants crazier alien designs would have to meet writers halfway. Humanoid anatomy is always going to be present in the majority of races. Always. Mammalian traits like breasts of some form, phallic arrangements, internal wombs and vaginal arrangements, and stuff like that are going to be common. Being mammalian doesn't necessarily make something an uncreative or unbelievable alien design, either. A great many earth animals have mammaries in some shape or form, as well as penises and vaginas that follow the same basic logic as human genitals, because that's what nature determined was the best way to make babies and care for babies. There's reason to believe that real-life aliens may have similar anatomies if they evolved on Earth-like planets or in Earth-like conditions. Which, given what we know about physics and the narrow conditions in which carbon-based life can be sustained, seems pretty reasonable. Encountering an alien race that looks and behaves in a manner similar to humans is just as likely, if not more likely, than finding some crazy Tholian-esque race.@Lashcharge: Doggie Snausages has more lore than pretty much any other TF in the game save the Treatment. Even stuff like Gush and Dumbfuck only have short little blurbs about what they did to the market and consumers when they came out. Don't be afraid to generalize some of your lore a little bit if you feel like you need to. It seems the  focus of this project would be to get a TF out there, so don't get too hung up on the little stuff. Unless you're planning some broader story arc involving this and the lore it establishes, I suppose.






 

The convergence is a thing, but don't overestimate it. Animals with humanlike reproduction system are usually quite closely related to humans. Suddenly. I know that it is unlikely that we'll find a writer who could do it right, but I don't see any fundamental reason to entirely dismiss the very idea of totally alien aliens.

 

[Krynh]

 If they're truly Alien (and not humanoidish aliens) [although I suppose space elephants?] would we be even able to communicate? Different perceptions of time or just how their brain processes stuff. 

 

[TheInfamousImmortal]

I'm all for more alien designs, just as long as it isn't described as an unholy abomination looking thing for the sake of being alien.


Also, I'm ok with that Tholian design. It's not off putting at all, kinda reminds me of the Queen of the Lake.

 

[TheInfamousImmortal]

but more that they have a crystalline biology and can't survive in temps other than nearly 500 Kelvin

Dear lord! I was talking about the appearance of them that I didn't mind, but that biology is insane. So are they basically walking superheated sentient crystal's?

 

[Ethereal Dragon]

Dear lord! I was talking about the appearance of them that I didn't mind, but that biology is insane. So are they basically walking superheated sentient crystal's?

try reading the wikia page MP linked for the tholians

 

[Lashcharge]

So, with the exception of some details I finished the third part of this project: Gil, the Doberman/Canine Cuntboy.


He wants you to buy some limited edition snausages so he can change his body in the name of art and will pay, one way or the other, for you to get them for him.


There's some things about him and his background I would like some feedback on:

1. His Dad's band name needs a name, and I'm not sure what to call them. This name, for now, would just appear on his shirt.
   
2. Need to name the art movement he follows. This art movement encourages everyone modding their bodies until they have their customize perfect self.
   
3. His last names is Tunes because his dad changed his name to be more artistic/musical. Would it be better to keep this name or change it?
   
4. Maybe change his fur pattern? It's based on Doberman, Rottweilers and Beaucerons, but there's a lot of customization on those breeds.
   
5. I described his starting snout as "elongated" to be more similar to a Doberman. Should I keep this or change it to a more generic one.
   
6. I described his vagina as swollen a lot to remind that he is a canine-morph. Should I keep this or change it to a more generic vagina or just tone down usage of swollen(which I probably need to do anyway)? Either way he would be pretty wet and tight.
   

EDIT: Also a big heads for IVIysteriousPerson for giving one good look at this project and the three gdocs and caught a lot of mistakes in them.

 

[Emerald]

I completely forgot this was still being worked on. I'm more excited for Gil than anything else atm. A cuntboy character isn't something I expected to be written in the game, but definitely not unwelcome. More guys to bang are always something I look forward to, even if he doesn't have the right lower bits. In fact, that's what makes him even more of a treat, a REALLY rare treat actually, because I'm pretty sure that aside from Ben, you NEVER see another cuntboy in the game at all.


I read through his doc for the first time, because I'm not exactly one to not spoil myself when it comes to submission docs. It looks pretty good thus far in my opinion, though I can't really give TOO much help with it because I'm no writer, most I can give is support. But I'll try when it comes to actual feedback. >w>'.
But regarding the 'swollen' adjective, heh yeah, I think toning it down is a start. You don't have to use it all the time when describing a canid pussy. Words like puffy too seem good, and heck I'm pretty sure lots know what a canid pussy looks like if they've seen enough anatomically correct furry porn (I have, but I get it that his lower lips are swollen, which brings me to my next point). Though sometimes maybe you don't even need the adjectives. Much like how the PC's dick isn't descripted with complex nouns all the time. It gets.. uh.. 'echo'-ish after a while of repeating it over and over again. Sometimes 'canid pussy' or just 'pussy' is good. I'm fairly certain once someone see's he's packing a canine vagina they don't exactly need to be reminded over and over about it, they'll know it's there, they'll know he's anatomically correct.
Also, I caught sight of Misty bringing up the virginity bit. I feel like as long as you don't make it.. well.. 'graphic' so-to-speak, don't mention the blood bit directly, and you should do alright with that bit.
To give Misty an example (As she said if there's similar examples already in then game then you're probably good), JimT did it with the Vanae Maiden when you have vaginal sex her and that got in just fine.

Gonna add the quote from the Vanae Maiden's scene from my own play-through because I really like being specific when it comes to quotes apparently:

You feel a warm trickle down your bright red, animalistic shaft from her deflowering as she wraps her arms around your neck. 

Ofcourse that was back then, but it still is within the scene today, I didn't see anyone complaining about it here or in the old forums either.


I didn't see the 'Doggystyle' part of Gil's doc before the edit, so I dunno what it said before. But your new edit addressing Gil's virginity is pretty similar to this. It doesn't address the blood directly, but it's vague, and yet it's still enough to let you know you're dealing with a virgin there.


Just thought I point it out. That was pretty much the main thing that caught my attention within the doc. But all in all, I like him. c: