any chance the corrected text finds it's way into the next version?
and could you perhaps put the meeting scene with evangeline in the online doc so i can correct it?
Yes they would be included in next version.
On meeting evangeline scene yes I would put it back there. It was earlier looked over by other people but since you meantion it it mean something can be still changed. So it would be today or at least tomorrow put it there.
As Liadrit said aside rework of ascension that I DO work alongside fenrir TF (weel good thing since it makes me not feel burnout of keep working on one thing for hours day by day) will also due to need of giving certain charming kraken lady place to live and fight PC added three near areas. Beach (find during Desert exploration) that will have for now just slight stronger group of demons that PC can find in desert too (they goes by name of oasis demons enc I think ^^) and gorgon (she would be mostly feel like fighting naga but with slight bit of her petrification gaze mixed in), Ocean (Liadri personaly made scylla enc) that req. getting boat (I feel will make it easier to not play around with making it either having boat or some aquatic animals body parts from TF items - it does slight complicating fights intros when PC can be found by enemy in two different ways so why make thing comlicated) and lat location Deep Sea (here as meantioned before Kraken Lady, which is of the Venus size, will sit awaiting all those OP PC to wrestle over Sky Poison Pearl she hold (that pearl is quite interesting artifact so PC should at some point make a trip to get it
and once again Liadri hand written kraken normal enc).
Not sure where of those 3 locations but will also make sure shark girls showing up to try beat PC and...VC got new possible enemy enc after PC clear Phoenix Tower... so all of you should quest who that new enemy should be (it's not a bird, not an airplane but is surely on fire most of the time
).