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Finished up my current plot commission so expect a lot of Stella/Siegwulfe work this week along with CoC2 stuff! Then Lund, of course.
He is a sexy, albeit slightly racist doggo. Then again, would you really be super welcoming to an Alien that just walked into your house like that? I don't know if the intention was for Lund to be a douche or not, but it's the tiniest bit understandable that he's bitchy and guarded at first. And breaking him isn't really a punishment when he loves it so much x3
On a side note I'm doing some sex scenes for the stocky, fluffy male mechanic for fen. I think he is going to be extremely divisive...
Well, I'm intruiged :3c
Nice work on Lund by the way! Pushes a loooot of my buttons just right.
Requestin' flavor text from Zephyr if you've knocked up Ellie.
Cute idea btw. I'll get to it when fen's actually put the stuff in.
Ye it is. Well, "planet". Zheng Shi station, a base on an asteroid.
Ha, did you play Urbolg's stuff or did you see the post about the milodan? Either way it's because nobody else writes males. Fen commissioned me to write Lund just because Kor'gii Hold didn't have any males. Then I wrote two(!) milodan males for the siege event because, again, they're male and nobody wants to write them. This time we're just getting ahead of the curve.
I used to complain about how noone cares about male characters but at last I finally see the truth: they just have to be fluffy
Fluffy guys are great, and I'm talking about Urbolg, I really hope that leads somewhere bad-endy in the future, the combat loss bad end is cool but I don't like that it gives you a pussy and such. At the very least I hope Fen wants to commission more of him, it's fantastic ;=;
They're elite grunts. I wrote one of them to have a few bad ends based on height/taur-ness and the other to only have one.
I'll be writing more Urbolg, but not until next week. I have a lot to do atm. Expect another 2 or 3 different sex scenes.
Do you intend to make a voluntary submission bad end like Lund's or just more sex? Honestly he might fuck you harder than Lund and he's a dad. Nobody could last that long, especially if he gives you the collar.
When it comes to writing main plot things, the first thing you should do is spread the appeal wide. You want at least one scene to appeal to the audience, regardless of who they might be. For instance, not everybody will go for calling Urbolg daddy (in fact I'd wager most people won't). The only reason I included such a niche thing is because he's a short, gruff male furry, which cuts down on his potential audience a LOT and makes the relative % of people who might be into that go up, since I think something like 75% of the playerbase won't want to do any of his scenes at all. This is why a lot of NPCs just have vaginal/anal/oral options.
Also I think Fen would probably be a little mad if he was like "can I get you to do these Urbolg scenes" and I handed him back a 10k word bad end when he's already written one
Yeah I understand that he needs some broad appeal stuff, though I'm not really sure what you would add, you can already get fucked in your hole of choice if you have a pussy and suck his dick plenty between that (Maybe getting him into taking or just licking his hole or something?)
I was mostly just asking if you think that would ever be an option, commissioned by somebody else or otherwise. If you somehow haven't noticed, I like bad ends with Steele as a fluffy dude's bitch
That's usually a turn-off for me, but Ciaran kinda made me wanna call him Daddy so maybe it can work.
This is the opposite of Oedipus in several ways, one being that it's a father figure, not a mother, and the second being that it's not your actual father, just a bed-name.
I suppose it's a surrogate negative Oedipus complex?
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