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New Lund comm WIP. This time you're the one breaking him in. Here's an excerpt.

“It doesn’t fit,” he whines quietly, turning his head away.

You break out in laughter at his dissatisfaction. “Hahaha! Just don’t get hard, silly boy. It’ll fit fine over your sheath and it looks great on a little bitch like you. Oh, and if I catch you not wearing it…” you add, winking at the korgonne, “I’ll punish you. Here, turn around.”

Disgruntled, he turns around, following your orders even in the midst of his disapproval. You have to admit - his athletic, muscular build has given him a fucking amazing ass. The way the back of the thong disappears between his bubbly asscheeks is mesmerizing. The longer you look the harder you get, your breathing getting faster until you notice Lund is looking back at you, totally transfixed by your rapidly stiffening cock as it surges with blood.

“Alright,” you say, taking a step forward with a smile. “I guess I should reward you for being such a good puppy and wearing the right clothes.”

“Ah ah,” you say, stopping him from pulling his newly acquired underwear down. “Don’t take it off. Just pull it to the side like my good little slut.”

With some difficulty owing to its tight fit over his cock and balls, he reaches back and pulls the thong’s string to the side, allowing you access to his warm, inviting asshole.

“Good boy,” you purr, standing behind him with your cock in hand. “Gooood boy… now spread your legs a little and bend over at the waist, pup. Keep your back straight.”

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So now that I've finished the Zephyr comm and I have the Lund comm under way, coming next will be a Stella comm and yet another comm I can't talk about. I also have a far-off 20k word comm to do with KiroQuest! Dunno when that'll actually happen but it's in the queue and I've scribbled a bit about it.
 
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Noob Salad

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Sekrit commission?!
 

Xeivous

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Breaking Lund is looking amazing already.

Also Kiroquest is chugging along? That's interesting. Though less interesting than how you've become some sort of money-powered porn typewriter.
 

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New Lund comm WIP. This time you're the one breaking him in. Here's an excerpt.



:catte:

So now that I've finished the Zephyr comm and I have the Lund comm under way, coming next will be a Stella comm and yet another comm I can't talk about. I also have a far-off 20k word comm to do with KiroQuest! Dunno when that'll actually happen but it's in the queue and I've scribbled a bit about it.
Fantastic. Did the commissioner ask for the thong thing or was that your natural plan?
 

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Kiroquest!? What! :eek:
 

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New Lund comm WIP. This time you're the one breaking him in. Here's an excerpt.



:catte:

So now that I've finished the Zephyr comm and I have the Lund comm under way, coming next will be a Stella comm and yet another comm I can't talk about. I also have a far-off 20k word comm to do with KiroQuest! Dunno when that'll actually happen but it's in the queue and I've scribbled a bit about it.
KIROOOOOOOOOOOOO!
 

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Fantastic. Did the commissioner ask for the thong thing or was that your natural plan?
He asked for something sluttier than a loincloth and I ran with the thong idea 'cuz dressing up your dogboi in a thong is cute.

Also Kiroquest is chugging along? That's interesting.
Kinda. Fen has me commissioned for it, but he hasn't gotten to writing the big parts yet. He's got the overall idea skeleton and stuff though - I'm always on him to write more of his own ideas because he writes well and his content is fun, but there's unfortunate sacrifices you have to make when you're the primary reviewer and coder.

Sekrit commission?!
It's another fenco plot thing, like the last one.


re: writing output, I'm having a lot of fun with it. Paying for rent and groceries by writing smut is working out pretty great so far, though it's only been a couple of months (wow how time flies). This is basically my dream job and life situation right now, so I'm really happy with how I'm doing. If I could work the rest of my foreseeable life like this (albeit being paid more, and on a more stable basis) that would be The Dream. It's lucky I live in NZ as a USD is worth about 1.4x here.

Ha ha, while we're talking about output, I've updated the Breaking Lund doc. Now featuring actual penetration! Also I've been tapping away at the shemale 'taur in a bank thing bit by bit. When I brought it up to Fen initially I said "it'll be really basic, no more than 2.5k words" and it's currently 5k. :rolleyes:
 

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Lund's first breaking him in scene is done. Will be moving right along to his second scene then Stella stuff when it's done.
 

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There's a paragraph in the new Lund thing that randomly cuts off like you forgot to finish it. It's the second one after the first Next prompt, just in case you missed it!
 
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Damiekinz

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Also I hope the thing he gets custom made is a jock :p
 

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There's a paragraph in the new Lund thing that randomly cuts off like you forgot to finish it. It's the second one after the first Next prompt, just in case you missed it!
Oops! Fixed, thank you. Weird, could have sworn I actually knew that and put something there. Might have re-pasted a document the wrong way or something.
 

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I probably should have done this way sooner but I just threw up a bunch of my abandoned projects on Patreon. To start off with (it's not all of them, I have fucking hundreds of pages of them if I could be bothered looking) it's

1) Alaya, a bounty hunter companion I started pecking at when I first came back from my hiatus. I would actually still like to do this at some point because a vanilla female human companion is, ironically, basically unheard of. COMES WITH FREE JETBIKE
2) Two girls you meet at a bar who are friends
3) Submissive content for Haley (32 pages of content nobody cares about!!! wooee)
4) A concept character for a game I never bothered making past the introduction because text rpgs in c# are annoying, Cyande (surprise she's a dryad)
 

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Hey, if I theoretically planned on throwing money your way, how much would it cost to work on that Haley content? For whatever reason, she’s one of my favourite characters and it saddens me to see her with so little content...
 

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For whatever reason, she’s one of my favourite characters and it saddens me to see her with so little content...
Congratulations, this puts you into a club of like 3 people!
I'd have to get back to you on this with an actual number, and it would depend on if I cut the crew member thing or a whole bunch of other portions out. I would be really happy to work on my own character though (especially Haley, the dryad already has like 12 scenes) so I'll take a serious look at the document whenever I wake up this morning and think about practicality.
 

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I think Beatrice might be the only vanilla human female in game you can sex. There is Beth but you don't do anything with her. And cousin if they are female also but that doesn't really count imo.
 

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Hey, if I theoretically planned on throwing money your way, how much would it cost to work on that Haley content?
I can do the last sex scene in ~800 words and the loss scene in <2000. The new greeting scenes to accommodate for losing/winning are probably <500. All up I think I could get it done within 3500 words or less, which is 63 bux. It could be put into the game at that point, and any content beyond that would come under the future projects/endgame bit, which is something I'd definitely like to do but has almost no content established for it. So that would be an actual project.

I think Beatrice might be the only vanilla human female in game you can sex. There is Beth but you don't do anything with her. And cousin if they are female also but that doesn't really count imo.
Pretty much. Obviously in a somewhat-furry text RPG there'll be some bias, but it's actually pretty crazy how little human female content there is. That was also my motivation for writing the bar girls, I think (can hardly remember). I just thought having a character that wasn't immediately receptive to a relationship and was also a female human was a niche that people probably wanted but hadn't talked about much.
 
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Damiekinz

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Lund's second 'breaking him in' scene is done. It was a lot of fun to write! Stella is already underway.
You don't allow edit suggestions so I'll say it here, you forgot a } bracket at the end of “{No punish/Master won’t need to punish me?”
 
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