I've slogged through 28 pages to hopefully ensure that I contribute something at least a little different
[so many pages of no to bestiality/watersports] Remember just say no and the Harkness test.
So enjoying game so far, the Map is good I like the explore mechanic and the waystone thing good idea
Double thumbs up that Brint is the second addition to your party I like the balance there
[if you allow femming companions you should also consider butching up options for the broadchurch]
Things I would like to see:
It has previously been stated that the PC wishes to save everyone from the impending corruption so
A redemptive route- when a Pure PC fights any of the corrupt bosses/mini-boses and defeats them there should be an option to try and save/purify them.
I am not saying it should always work, heck I could see the odd one ending in a bad/good ending, but the option should be there
Relationship score
FoE did this well forcing you to earn trust through a number of small actions often over a period of time, to reach a point where you were trusted enough to unlock the next level. It made you pay attention to the clock and organise your day around when people were available. So that you might spar with A in the morning, try and catch B in a bar at lunch, help out in C's shop in the afternoon, go grind some monsters in the evening and back for last orders and a booty call before falling asleep and doing it all again the next day . It just feels a natural way of doing things
About 20 pages back Some one was asking about the female equivalent of blue balled
In my Grannies day {WW2 when there was a distinct lack of men} they would use the phrase "nearly healed" as in "OO it's been so long I'm nearly healed"
and I have read a medieval manuscript in which it describes "Widow's Ague" whose symptoms included "excessive frequenting of public houses" and "consorting with strange men in a lewd manner" it had a two page spread on the treatment with wood carved illustrations. The mid wife is instructed to administer regular and repeated clitoral massages until the symptoms subside.