Typos and Etc
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In the character description, it does not handle multiple tails correctly in all places:
"A tapered, prehensile tail, almost as long as you are tall, swings behind you like a living bullwhip. Softly rounded at its tip, it quickly increases in girth closer to your body - almost as thick as your waist at its widest. The luminous silver scales sheathing your hefty tail’s length merge seamlessly with those of your lower back. "
All of this is describing a singular tail; my Steele has 4 tails.
However, the very next line gets it sort of correct:
"When aroused, the tip of each one will open to reveal a cat-penis."
This at least is indicating more than one tail.
"A tapered, prehensile tail, almost as long as you are tall, swings behind you like a living bullwhip. Softly rounded at its tip, it quickly increases in girth closer to your body - almost as thick as your waist at its widest. The luminous silver scales sheathing your hefty tail’s length merge seamlessly with those of your lower back. "
All of this is describing a singular tail; my Steele has 4 tails.
However, the very next line gets it sort of correct:
"When aroused, the tip of each one will open to reveal a cat-penis."
This at least is indicating more than one tail.
Not so much a bug or typo as an observation: In the new Vermillion content:
"If the sense of freedom you feel when you pilot the Liberator is akin to flying, you can understand her gleeful reaction."
I would think that since my Steele is Gryvain, she would already know what flying was like because she can actually fly.
"If the sense of freedom you feel when you pilot the Liberator is akin to flying, you can understand her gleeful reaction."
I would think that since my Steele is Gryvain, she would already know what flying was like because she can actually fly.
Minor typo in Vermillion:
Feeling mischievous today, you rub your shafts’’s end
doubled apostrophe - what a catastrophe!
Feeling mischievous today, you rub your shafts’’s end
doubled apostrophe - what a catastrophe!
More Vermillion:
“What are you waiting for? I too need to be praised and worshiped,” you grumbles before giving her rod another wank.
s/grumbles/grumble/
“What are you waiting for? I too need to be praised and worshiped,” you grumbles before giving her rod another wank.
s/grumbles/grumble/
maybe link these two sentences with a hyphen or ellipses or something, and place "and" in front of "youve", and well as maybe changing proved to proven. as it is now the second sentence is a bit redundant.
Hopefully all fixed for the next release.
All tail descriptions on the appearance screen should now have singular and plural variants.
Hopefully fixed by determining all the changes first, then printing them on the player's turn instead of printing them as the changes happen (which may lead to inconsistent text appends).
This variant is for if Steele does not currently have wings. If your character had wings before, then there isn't really a way to track that.
I may need a save file to see this, but I couldn't find anything in the code that could result in an extra line break at the end of the message.
Does this help?
Use Laquine Ears on a character with a penis, then sleep until you get the length increase.
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My Steele has wings; indeed just a few turns previously was flying (in combat). In fact, my Steele has had wings since character creation.
Edit: save attached.
Okay, I think I see where the issue can arise. If the change falls outside of a certain size range (too small with less than 7 inches ending; or too big with over 48 inches starting), the message could fail to print and leave only the new lines behind. It will be fixed for the next release where it will only print a new line if there is a valid message to print.
Thanks. It seems the issue lies with the inline text parser. I couldn't get the parser to output the right text (it's probably reversed, but the parser is supposedly being used correctly--just not giving the right output), so I'll leave the parser alone since I'm not too familiar with how to fix that at the moment. Instead, I just hard-coded what it was intended to be instead of using the parser and it outputs as it should now. The change should appear in the next release.
Sydian Cuntboy battle:
Steele is flying (still shows green butterfly), and yet:
"The Sydian drops to all fours and skitters over your prone form!"
Later, in the victory vaginal scene:
" “I could leave you full of offworlder offspring.” It’s an empty threat of course, but you don’t intend to pull out: he won’t know. "
I don't know why this would be an empty threat; my Steele is so virile she could impregnate a rock from orbit. Maybe the test is incorrectly checking fertility rather than virility?
Steele is flying (still shows green butterfly), and yet:
"The Sydian drops to all fours and skitters over your prone form!"
Later, in the victory vaginal scene:
" “I could leave you full of offworlder offspring.” It’s an empty threat of course, but you don’t intend to pull out: he won’t know. "
I don't know why this would be an empty threat; my Steele is so virile she could impregnate a rock from orbit. Maybe the test is incorrectly checking fertility rather than virility?
Related but different: Sydian male:
You launch into the sky. You are flying!
Taking advantage of his size and strength, the male grabs you by the shoulders and leans into you, the foot long feelers on his head tickling wildly at you.
Seems odd that he can launch a melee grappling lust attack at a flying character.
You launch into the sky. You are flying!
Taking advantage of his size and strength, the male grabs you by the shoulders and leans into you, the foot long feelers on his head tickling wildly at you.
Seems odd that he can launch a melee grappling lust attack at a flying character.
Shalin Shaman:
Tease attack against her:
You slip off your suit of gray goo armor and hardlight anti-grav thong and cock your hips to one side, letting the girl-cum gushing from between your thighs speak for itself. [...]
The Shalin Shaman licks her lips in anticipation, her hands idly stroking her own body. (L: +59)
Then she reacts as though it were a conventional attack:
The moment you aim your attack at the shalin’s humanoid torso, she’s on the move. She sweeps herself around like a flamenco dancer, bringing one of her great red wings up and deflecting the blow away with it.
Perhaps she should react differently to a tease attack? Maybe shielding her eyes from the attack with her wing?
Tease attack against her:
You slip off your suit of gray goo armor and hardlight anti-grav thong and cock your hips to one side, letting the girl-cum gushing from between your thighs speak for itself. [...]
The Shalin Shaman licks her lips in anticipation, her hands idly stroking her own body. (L: +59)
Then she reacts as though it were a conventional attack:
The moment you aim your attack at the shalin’s humanoid torso, she’s on the move. She sweeps herself around like a flamenco dancer, bringing one of her great red wings up and deflecting the blow away with it.
Perhaps she should react differently to a tease attack? Maybe shielding her eyes from the attack with her wing?
for the perks heavy weapons and low tech solutions, i reccomend changing the wording from "Increases damage from" to "Increases damage of", as that wording is much more clear. same goes for similarly worded skills
