Typos and Etc

XBoxMaster131

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ok, since you didnt clse the thread im just going to assume you intend for me to keep posting stuff in it, but let me know if thats not the case.

anyway....


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XBoxMaster131

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bit of an oversight with the frostwyrm eggnancy, as my character here was already lactating prior to getting knocked up


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Bast

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When using a horse dildo or the Kingo Mino one, anal variant, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence:

"Your patience evaporates against the bowel-consuming pressure this bestial pole provides, and you start fucking yourself like a horny stallion with a mare a heat."
 
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Bast

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When giving the Hyrax Raider Lactaid and titfucking him, second to last paragraph, last sentence:

"The poor boy couldn’t possibly predict what’s about to happen. His eyes go wide while his mouth fills far beyond capacity. jism flows out of his flooded fuckhole like water from a broken dam, soaking the sand below him until it almost turns to mud."
 

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Fixed for the next release. Corrected capitalization for other instances of cum, girl-cum and milk parsers.
 

Theron

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The sight of it, however, fills your mind with bestial cravings, such as the desire to relentlessly fuck and breed.
The two end up on their sides after a not-so gentle push, embracing the other and mashing jizz-flecked lips together, the debauchery agitating your urges. Hiking their legs up, you jam the cock-head of your hard, feral prick against their honey-slick nethers and sample the coaxing heat of their paired libidos, letting each alien cunt suit itself for looming penetration.
First sentence should either have an extra line break or be part of the next paragraph.
 

XBoxMaster131

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maybe add a comma after purrs

Her companion’s dusky and voluptuous, with feline ears and tail. She pats the smaller girl’s head reassuringly, while her sultry-sweet voice purrs “You’re Captain Steele, aren’t you?”
 

XBoxMaster131

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missing quotation mark

Oh hey,” you say, “my girlfriend Ardia’s from there.”
 

XBoxMaster131

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inconsistency here. cobalt is a shade of blue. maybe change to "ruby" or something like that.


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XBoxMaster131

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missing capitalization


she loves girldick too much to stop,” Shierra giggles, jiggling your over-full tummy.
 

XBoxMaster131

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Bit of an issue with Shierra & Farine. their propt is covered up by the huskar twins' when they get on their break.
 

Bast

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King Mino dildo usage, second to last paragraph:

"If you could see, you might have had some warning that your equine tool was about to erupt. Instead, the waves of jizz splattering into your soft, flat chest, neck, face, and white goo-hair tell you exactly how how much you love getting buttfucked. Your fat, equine phallus hoses out your wasted seed in the sluttiest, sloppiest way possible, and you’re too blissed out on anal to try to avoid it. In fact, you quite enjoy massaging it into your smooth fair skin."

how how
 

Bast

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Bullstud poster spacing errors:

"A poster of a very fit bullstud hangs on the wall. He seems very proud of his muscular endowments - and some other kinds as well.Paige is fond of whispering “Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.Celise sometimes spaces out looking at it - the dick particularly."

"Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.You spot Eitan"

"Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.Azra goes"

Only with these characters. It's fine with Shekka's, Gianna's and Azra's reactions.