Typos and Etc
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ok, since you didnt clse the thread im just going to assume you intend for me to keep posting stuff in it, but let me know if thats not the case.
anyway....
anyway....
bit of an oversight with the frostwyrm eggnancy, as my character here was already lactating prior to getting knocked up
When using a horse dildo or the Kingo Mino one, anal variant, 4th paragraph, 1st sentence:
"Your patience evaporates against the bowel-consuming pressure this bestial pole provides, and you start fucking yourself like a horny stallion with a mare a heat."
"Your patience evaporates against the bowel-consuming pressure this bestial pole provides, and you start fucking yourself like a horny stallion with a mare a heat."
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When giving the Hyrax Raider Lactaid and titfucking him, second to last paragraph, last sentence:
"The poor boy couldn’t possibly predict what’s about to happen. His eyes go wide while his mouth fills far beyond capacity. jism flows out of his flooded fuckhole like water from a broken dam, soaking the sand below him until it almost turns to mud."
"The poor boy couldn’t possibly predict what’s about to happen. His eyes go wide while his mouth fills far beyond capacity. jism flows out of his flooded fuckhole like water from a broken dam, soaking the sand below him until it almost turns to mud."
maybe add a comma after purrs
Her companion’s dusky and voluptuous, with feline ears and tail. She pats the smaller girl’s head reassuringly, while her sultry-sweet voice purrs “You’re Captain Steele, aren’t you?”
missing capitalization
“she loves girldick too much to stop,” Shierra giggles, jiggling your over-full tummy.
Bit of an issue with Shierra & Farine. their propt is covered up by the huskar twins' when they get on their break.
It's was actually the vending machine. Hopefully fixed for the next release.
King Mino dildo usage, second to last paragraph:
"If you could see, you might have had some warning that your equine tool was about to erupt. Instead, the waves of jizz splattering into your soft, flat chest, neck, face, and white goo-hair tell you exactly how how much you love getting buttfucked. Your fat, equine phallus hoses out your wasted seed in the sluttiest, sloppiest way possible, and you’re too blissed out on anal to try to avoid it. In fact, you quite enjoy massaging it into your smooth fair skin."
how how
"If you could see, you might have had some warning that your equine tool was about to erupt. Instead, the waves of jizz splattering into your soft, flat chest, neck, face, and white goo-hair tell you exactly how how much you love getting buttfucked. Your fat, equine phallus hoses out your wasted seed in the sluttiest, sloppiest way possible, and you’re too blissed out on anal to try to avoid it. In fact, you quite enjoy massaging it into your smooth fair skin."
how how
Bullstud poster spacing errors:
"A poster of a very fit bullstud hangs on the wall. He seems very proud of his muscular endowments - and some other kinds as well.Paige is fond of whispering “Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.Celise sometimes spaces out looking at it - the dick particularly."
"Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.You spot Eitan"
"Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.Azra goes"
Only with these characters. It's fine with Shekka's, Gianna's and Azra's reactions.
"A poster of a very fit bullstud hangs on the wall. He seems very proud of his muscular endowments - and some other kinds as well.Paige is fond of whispering “Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.Celise sometimes spaces out looking at it - the dick particularly."
"Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.You spot Eitan"
"Kiro’s is bigger,” on her way by.Azra goes"
Only with these characters. It's fine with Shekka's, Gianna's and Azra's reactions.
