27, 28? I find it difficult to envisage somebody younger than that owning a shop. Obligatory "She's technically not my character" qualifier.
Huh, this really adds to why Sera fits as a dom for Steele and why the reversal is such an involved process, there is a significant gap in terms of age and maturity there. It's possible for them to own a shop younger than that but it'd have to be an inheritance or a savant doing it, otherwise they would likely be overwhelmed.
The Bothrioc are done matey, or at least as done as I dare to render them at this stage. Thank you for reminding me to update my Commissions doc though.
Sera the Broodening is also more or less done now, pending some signing and sealing. Thanks as ever for all the kind words and comments everyone - maybe it was naive of me, but I didn't expect this project to get as much attention as it did.
I've read the doc finally (Been busy with a lot of other things)...and wow, just wow. I'm not a fan of fen dom for personal reasons (not knocking it, just putting it down to trust and control issues.) but you have managed to do something very, very impressive as far as I'm concerned: Get me from "Yeah she'll be fun for my fem/herm character but I won't play it
just to interact with her like that." to "Her content is worth getting invested in. She's someone my fem/herm Steele finds trustworthy." Going to leave some comments here and there on the doc for feedback purposes but basically, the moments when Sera drops the act and just reacts or cares really does more to show who she is as a person than a dozen scenes...even if her new selection of nicknames make me chuckle.
The scenes in the Nursery are also very solid and evocative when applicable, even with the rather dry if accurate digs at Steele. (I cracked up at the repeat naming aside, gotta love the snark.) although the visit really,
really hit you and also, to me, give a basis for why Sera would accept Steele as an owner beyond the plot reasoning and her own desire to see if Steele is strong/controlled enough.
I in no way blame you for stopping at age 5 for the sprogs, as I think that if someone plays for more than 5 years on TiTS, especially now, DM gonna go "You reached 5 years and time stopped bitches!".
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facepalm, yup, kid is Sera's alright and knows who's the sub that's for sure