Clementine Fisting

SnoopSloth

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I'm probably doing this wrong, I'm new to editing here, I apologize. But,

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The circled sentence seems unfinished and there seems to be a first tag missing since it cuts off and goes in to her fantasizing of the memory, then, "You want to do that again?!"
 

shovelry

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I'm probably doing this wrong, I'm new to editing here, I apologize. But,

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The circled sentence seems unfinished and there seems to be a first tag missing since it cuts off and goes in to her fantasizing of the memory, then, "You want to do that again?!"

That's part of a "first" parse, it begins some ways above that.
 

Ace Hangman

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Very evocative. I feel sorry for the innocent girl but... I am also a deviant pervert (allegedly).
I probably would have added in some [dcb] or [pc.isDK] and had her being more aggressive, calling them pervert or deviant.
Maybe add in a little more about how tight she is as the fist went in.
 

shovelry

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Very evocative. I feel sorry for the innocent girl but... I am also a deviant pervert (allegedly).
I probably would have added in some [dcb] or [pc.isDK] and had her being more aggressive, calling them pervert or deviant.
Maybe add in a little more about how tight she is as the fist went in.
Yeah, it felt a little mean at times, which is why I wrote her insisting you continue. She’s just so cute when she acts like she didn’t enjoy herself but can’t bring herself to say no.