On the Tutorial page their is a typo in the third day section. In the first sentence it states "On the evening of their third say" instead of day.
Whoops, good spot on that, fixed. Thank you!On the Tutorial page their is a typo in the third day section. In the first sentence it states "On the evening of their third say" instead of day.
I think pursue works better here....marks the beginning of the Champion's quest to purse her.
Probably assess.The Champion can only place a comforting hand over her shoulder as they asses the temple.
they're or maybe they are.The cloven woman purrs that their finally awake...
I would use to....and she advises them to try a close their jaw as to make...
Either a plate or plates (without the leading a).Garth returns with a plates of food,
Damn, I missed a couple of typos in my draft sweep. Thank you very much for informing me of the typos and they have now been fixed!Thank you Libelous for creating and updating the tutorial. I gave it a read and I think I found found a few typos:
The very first line:
I think pursue works better here.
The Ancient Temple -> Combat Victory:
Probably assess.
Kasyrra:
they're or maybe they are.
I would use to.
Wake Up:
Either a plate or plates (without the leading a).
That's what I found. Thanks again for all your work on the wiki.
Oof thanks again for the spot, I added "as she rests a comforting hand" to avoid a double set of "and"Thanks again for the amazing work on the wiki. I read through the latest update to the Royal Amnesty page and I think I've found a small typo. In the Meeting with the Baroness section at the bottom in the Comfort tab it says ...and glances around for anyone watching as rests a comforting hand... I think the word in bold should be and.
-Addition of Kalysea's bust to her page
-Update of Version History
-Addition of the new companion set Powers [Argent Smite, Banishing Light, Dawn Lance, Floral Grace, Seal of Light, Searing Aegis, Vestal's Embrace]
-Continued work on the Etheryn page
--implementation of Infobox V2
--shifted Etheryn's mechanics to a new section to make it easier to see in the table of contents (previously under Interactions, now under Special Mechanics)
--rework of First Encounter, addition of Introductions section (slightly modified from Royal Amnesty), Normal Interactions table rework + Talk section skeleton (no scene summary yet)
Note that there is a disclaimer on said page as the page itself is still a WIP
I can't say for absolutely certain, because they don't say it explicitly (nor do I think they need to, since the scene is written strongly enough to tease it), but in the first scene, Ogrish does say he and his wife have gifts, come see them... then in the next scene Ivris is giving you gifts and they're making the sappiest banter between each other. After the second pet name between them, it even started to penetrate my own skull. "Oh Oggy!" Oh, Ivy!"Ogrish and Ivris are a couple? I did not know that.
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Yep, you got that right Partner! Every non-sexable npc is like a personal insult to me! (with very few exceptions). Bite me!What's that, people aren't attracted to the PC? Of the horror!
Putting aside the joke about how and what she could see in her situation, there are plenty of people who didn't see Champion before he came to the Marches and it didn't stop them from getting intimate with him. I'm not saying she should fall in love with Champion and the fact that she's married to Ogrish doesn't hurt either, he's a good man. It could be a fun threesome.Besides, how could she ever want to be lovers with the Player, she has never seen the player before
Ah with the recent content makes sense because laughably, my knowledge mostly extends to the pages ive updated. But thanks, I'll look through that section for Ogrish's content in a bit.This seems a bit paltry to mention, considering all the work and updating going on, but I don't see a Family or Relatives listing for Ogrish. I know he has a wife though, not sure on children yet, since they've only been together about a year.
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Actually, moving on to the next scene... It almost seems like Ogrish and Ivris are married, at least the way they're talking to each other. This probably isn't news to anyone else, I just didn't see it noted in either of their wiki entries (unless I am reading their interaction way wrong).
This seems a very recent addition, part of getting Cait's new Vestal Raiments, so that's probably why.
if you say "his pic has just been bothering me" because it's still a placeholder in the wiki, that's been fixed now. His content is still outdated thoughJust gonna throw this out for anybody working on the wiki, not directed at any individual but Vitruvius. Know he's not that important his pic has just been bothering me for awhile
Nah it's all good, I did honestly forget since he's a character I have completely not touched on yet.Thanks, he's a minor character but I noticed the place holder and then couldn't not see it when the other characters were getting their pages updated. Stupid I know.