There could still be reasons you could have her in a scene at Hawkethorn, such as her visiting her family (or kids) at the time
Clementine Pregnancy Expansion [Summitted]
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That sounds great, but I'm not sure how it would work. Maybe both women drag the PC on a date? Clementine hanging out with other people would really build her character, but I don't think a threesome would fit Clementine's nature (I could be wrong about this, not to mention all the preg variations). Plus, I still have to get all my work reviewed.
This does sound fun. I'll message you about it when I get done editing my main doc.
I just finished editing/going through suggestions. I'll start adding dark knight/bimbo parsers whenever I get the chance.
Before the main doc can be reviewed, I have to get a sex scene approved first. So I decided to remove the mating press scene and submit it separately. If anyone is willing to help with the expansion. Please visit the mating press doc first so the review can go over more smoothly.
Coc2: Clementine Mating press scene
Thank you for the support and have a wonderful day!
Before the main doc can be reviewed, I have to get a sex scene approved first. So I decided to remove the mating press scene and submit it separately. If anyone is willing to help with the expansion. Please visit the mating press doc first so the review can go over more smoothly.
Coc2: Clementine Mating press scene
Thank you for the support and have a wonderful day!
The CoC2 wiki page for Clementine surprisingly has some Dark Knight and Bimbo examples in it (which a lot of pages don't).
They're just little changes that would show up in her Appearance, but could be helpful. Also, one of the options not to Cuddle has a [silly] practically ordering the reader to select the Cuddle option instead.
I will make a note for any spots I (meaning it's just one person's opinion) see that might have a spot for a DK or Bimbo blurb, but ultimately some will just be silly thoughts I had while reading and should be considered before blindly accepting them.
[eyeshifts]
The Parser documention is also a good place to get some parser examples when needed.
Got through the first sex scene of the Pregnancy expansion. Started on the single Mating Press doc.
Made a suggestion or two... three at the most, I'm sure.
Mostly, I'd have suggested not making three or four different copies of the scene for each pregStage, but instead using one as a template and just adding in the differences. You'd have a lot more parsers in there (but you can use the Highlight option to put each one in a different color for ease of reference). However, since you already have them all written out at this, probably be just as much work to consolidate them now, the only issue being the extra time to read through duplicates of a scene and also have to correct grammar or misspellings and such shared between all of them.
I'll try and read through more later on.
Made a suggestion or two... three at the most, I'm sure.
Mostly, I'd have suggested not making three or four different copies of the scene for each pregStage, but instead using one as a template and just adding in the differences. You'd have a lot more parsers in there (but you can use the Highlight option to put each one in a different color for ease of reference). However, since you already have them all written out at this, probably be just as much work to consolidate them now, the only issue being the extra time to read through duplicates of a scene and also have to correct grammar or misspellings and such shared between all of them.
I'll try and read through more later on.
My apologizes, I wanted to make sure each pregnancy stage had content and each scene had distinct variations.
Your help is much appreciated. I'll go through all the suggestions whenever I get the chance.
Finished the Mating Press document. I made notes on any typos, suggestions, or likely spots to input some magicock or dark knight parsers.
Aside from that, it tends to burn out editors when they have to not only reread sections after corrections, but have to reread (nearly) identical sections, which tend to have all the same typos and issues and such. Obviously nothing to be done about it here, but just saying having one section with
'You reach and press your hand to Clementine's [clementine.pregStage 0 2 3 4|trim|slightly-curved|full and rounded|impressively gravid] tummy.' will save you both cash, and editor burn-out (and keep the sections consistent in case an error isn't pointed out in the third mirror section like it was in the first two times around).
Anyhoo, I hope it helps. Let me know if you need another look through.
I know the reason. As an editor who gets anywhere from $0.01 to a jaw-dropping $0.02 a word (usually $0.015) depending on document length and technical/lore/rules knowledge required, I am just saying that while making duplicate sections as opposed to a template section with [pregStage] parsers just used for the variants might seem easier to read and see the difference, it'll save you lots of money, like... maybe even $10. You can use the Highlight Text option to set the different parsers off in color to make them easier to ... well... parse.
Aside from that, it tends to burn out editors when they have to not only reread sections after corrections, but have to reread (nearly) identical sections, which tend to have all the same typos and issues and such. Obviously nothing to be done about it here, but just saying having one section with
'You reach and press your hand to Clementine's [clementine.pregStage 0 2 3 4|trim|slightly-curved|full and rounded|impressively gravid] tummy.' will save you both cash, and editor burn-out (and keep the sections consistent in case an error isn't pointed out in the third mirror section like it was in the first two times around).
Anyhoo, I hope it helps. Let me know if you need another look through.
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Read through the new, condensed Mating Press document. Much shorter and a lot less hunting and searching through identical sections to correct typos or grammar, just within a single parser. I noted any typos, grammar, and a few suggestions. Some is opinion, just one person's. Others may disagree.
Just doing a quick update, as it's been way overdue. The mating press scene has been accepted and is ready to code.
I'm currently working on the doggystyle scene and will submit it soon. After that, I just have to fix all the parser issues in the main doc, and hopefully, I can wrap up this expansion.
Thank you for all the support and help (especially to Ace Hangman and A1teros, they have been a massive help), have a wonderful day and be safe!
I'm currently working on the doggystyle scene and will submit it soon. After that, I just have to fix all the parser issues in the main doc, and hopefully, I can wrap up this expansion.
Thank you for all the support and help (especially to Ace Hangman and A1teros, they have been a massive help), have a wonderful day and be safe!
Unfortunately, I'm extremely sick right now. However, this has given me a lot more free time, so instead of tossing and turning in bed, I decided to fix the main doc.
Most of the parsers should be fixed, italics/bold text removed, and I did proper indenting as well. There are surely some issues, like spaces that need to be removed and other grammar issues. But hopefully, well after a year of starting this expansion, it's finally close to being done.
If you wish to take a look at the doc, please feel free to. Any help with editing or grammar is much appreciated.
Clementine Pregnancy Expansion
Thank you and have a wonderful day!
Most of the parsers should be fixed, italics/bold text removed, and I did proper indenting as well. There are surely some issues, like spaces that need to be removed and other grammar issues. But hopefully, well after a year of starting this expansion, it's finally close to being done.
If you wish to take a look at the doc, please feel free to. Any help with editing or grammar is much appreciated.
Clementine Pregnancy Expansion
Thank you and have a wonderful day!
On a side note, if all this goes well.
What kind of content would you folks want from me?
I have two current ideas. I'm not sure if it's allowed, but I'll just air out my thoughts.
The first idea is a half sheepfolk, half Boreal Elf character that moves into Hawkethorne after the events of the winter city.
The second idea hit me after I saw a piece of art that really inspired me. I would like to write a follower/summon character that resides in the PC's soul. A tall, semi-ethereal woman with a mysterious past. Her body fused with a thick suit of armor. (Yes, this is just an excuse to write a tall sexy woman in armor because I find that hot.)
I know it's really weird and I don't have much hope of either idea being allowed, but after writing for Clementine for so long. I really need something else to refresh myself.
What kind of content would you folks want from me?
I have two current ideas. I'm not sure if it's allowed, but I'll just air out my thoughts.
The first idea is a half sheepfolk, half Boreal Elf character that moves into Hawkethorne after the events of the winter city.
The second idea hit me after I saw a piece of art that really inspired me. I would like to write a follower/summon character that resides in the PC's soul. A tall, semi-ethereal woman with a mysterious past. Her body fused with a thick suit of armor. (Yes, this is just an excuse to write a tall sexy woman in armor because I find that hot.)
I know it's really weird and I don't have much hope of either idea being allowed, but after writing for Clementine for so long. I really need something else to refresh myself.
Eh, the ethereal part is what makes the idea unique. It also gives me an excuse to keep the characters' armor on during more intimate moments.
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Congrats on getting scene into the game - now I really want to see your expac in game.
Umm... You get what you pay for?
Also, I haven't seen it 'in action' yet. I have the Steam version, or maybe I haven't triggered it yet in game. I certainly hope OreoLuma's effort is well-received. They've certainly put a lot of work and determination into it and been very receptive to others suggestions and thoughts.
After a long time, I finally got a scene in. It feels weird to actually have my content in the game. I hope everyone enjoys it.
Sadly, the mating press scene is somewhat incomplete, as its chalked with a lot of lengthily preg parsers. So the full extend of the scene can't be seen.
I'm still making small additions to the main Preg doc but that and a doggystyle scene (also full of preg parsers) I wrote are both awaiting review. Really stressed about that, hope my content is good enough to get in game.
Thank you for the support, especially Ace hangman and A1teros. They have really helped improved the quality of everything I wrote.
Also, a massive thank you to the artist I commissioned art from a while back.
Sadly, the mating press scene is somewhat incomplete, as its chalked with a lot of lengthily preg parsers. So the full extend of the scene can't be seen.
I'm still making small additions to the main Preg doc but that and a doggystyle scene (also full of preg parsers) I wrote are both awaiting review. Really stressed about that, hope my content is good enough to get in game.
Thank you for the support, especially Ace hangman and A1teros. They have really helped improved the quality of everything I wrote.
Also, a massive thank you to the artist I commissioned art from a while back.
I still quite enjoy the mating press scene!! Good work man!! I'm excited for when the rest of the pregnancy content can get into the game. This character and Gytha are the ones I've most been hoping to finally have pregnancy content for.
Well this was quite the surprise. You're one of few people who have actually commented about (and liked) my mating press scene. I'm glad you enjoyed it and it means a lot.
The main pregnancy doc is still in review que with another scene I wrote. So it's gonna be a very long time until I hear back from the devs. In the meantime I've been writing my own sheepgirl with AceHangman.
While the writing style may differ from the source, I think it's still a fun scene. And it's not like anyone else is putting the effort in to writing this content. If a person doesn't like a scene, they can just not use it, or pitch their own.
I enjoy Clementine becoming more openly lewd during the scene and begging to be bred. In done ways it is in character, in other ways it shows her being more open to the player now.
Probably only thing off could be referring to her as Clem. It just sounds weird.
Otherwise stick to what you're doing, I'm guessing you and the people working on this have been pouring over her original scenes to better emulate the style or the Speech of the character.