This was so so charming! Thank you for writing so much for Clem, i love the way you write her. it seems youre rewriting/changing some things? Either way, I hope it'll make it in :3
Clementine Pregnancy Expansion [Summitted]
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Thank you for the kind words, they mean a lot.
My apologizes for the confusion, I'm rewriting the entire doc. It seems you just now read my expansion for Clementine, after I've rewritten most scenes. Before, the end product was rushed and very sloppy. Currently, I'm rewriting the "sleep with" scenes and after that I will be tackling the sex scenes. Sadly, it will still be awhile till I'm satisfied to resubmit for review, but please keep an eye on this thread. When I'm done with rewriting and editing the toolbars, I'll ask for some kind forum members to look through the doc. Giving me some help with editing and criticism.
Again, thank you for the kind words, it really means a lot. Have a wonderful day and stay safe.
I apologize for the lack of news. I've sadly been busy with important matters this entire month and unfortunately getting sick as well. Looking at the recent patch notes, Clementine has gotten a new scene (congratulations to the author!). I was planning to have a cowgirl scene in my doc but I will have to greatly change this now.
I will not lie. I'm deeply stressed out. I've been working on this doc for the past year and I really don't want it to be in vain. As of now, I will be putting all my effort into getting the doc done and resubmitted.
Again, my deepest apologizes for the lack of news. Many people, not just on this forum, are very excited to see this expansion get in. I don't want to let everyone down. Have a wonderful day and stay safe.
I will not lie. I'm deeply stressed out. I've been working on this doc for the past year and I really don't want it to be in vain. As of now, I will be putting all my effort into getting the doc done and resubmitted.
Again, my deepest apologizes for the lack of news. Many people, not just on this forum, are very excited to see this expansion get in. I don't want to let everyone down. Have a wonderful day and stay safe.
Quick Update: I've rewritten all the "sleep with" scenes and I've gone through the doc and fixed/improved the tooltips. Hopefully, it looks much better now.
The next things I have to rewrite are all the sex scenes and the post sex scene. Unfortunately (only for me) Clementine now has a cowgirl scene, so I've decided to change my cowgirl scene to a pregnant version. Which is disappointing because that's my favorite position and I was really looking forward to rewriting it. Maybe in the future I'll write a rough version or something.
Another thing of note, my friend (the artist) has agreed to do a recommission. They will probably message me in mid July or so. Fingers crossed they are still up for it, but I was wondering if anyone could give me some pointers about commissioning pregnancy art. They would like some pointers and tips on how exactly to draw pregnancy stuff. As they are still new to this kind of stuff.
I'll try to get another update out soon but there is a lot of stuff for me to rewrite and I still have no idea if I'm doing the Parsers right. I've just been winging it, anytime I ask for help I get ghosted and the online parser tester doesn't work for me.
Regardless, thank you for reading and have a wonderful day!
The next things I have to rewrite are all the sex scenes and the post sex scene. Unfortunately (only for me) Clementine now has a cowgirl scene, so I've decided to change my cowgirl scene to a pregnant version. Which is disappointing because that's my favorite position and I was really looking forward to rewriting it. Maybe in the future I'll write a rough version or something.
Another thing of note, my friend (the artist) has agreed to do a recommission. They will probably message me in mid July or so. Fingers crossed they are still up for it, but I was wondering if anyone could give me some pointers about commissioning pregnancy art. They would like some pointers and tips on how exactly to draw pregnancy stuff. As they are still new to this kind of stuff.
I'll try to get another update out soon but there is a lot of stuff for me to rewrite and I still have no idea if I'm doing the Parsers right. I've just been winging it, anytime I ask for help I get ghosted and the online parser tester doesn't work for me.
Regardless, thank you for reading and have a wonderful day!
Quick Update: I've rewritten a few scenes, improved some others and finally after a year of working on this doc. I added a proper introduction to the beginning.
I wrote a new sex scene, Mating press and added preg variations. I also tried to rewrite and improve an older scene, but I'm not too happy with the end result (the scene involves a heavily pregnant clementine waking up the PC and riding you until the sun rises). I'll look back at it when I'm done with the other sex scenes.
Some appearance descriptions of the different stages of pregnancy were updated and slightly changed.
A small introduction was added to the beginning of the doc. With details on how to contact me and a content warning.
This was simply a quick update and just letting everyone know I'm still working on the doc. Four more scenes and I'll start asking for proofing reading and edits before resubmitting for review. No updates will come for a while. I just wanna get these next scenes done with. Unless I'm able to commission art. Thank you for reading and have a wonderful day!
I wrote a new sex scene, Mating press and added preg variations. I also tried to rewrite and improve an older scene, but I'm not too happy with the end result (the scene involves a heavily pregnant clementine waking up the PC and riding you until the sun rises). I'll look back at it when I'm done with the other sex scenes.
Some appearance descriptions of the different stages of pregnancy were updated and slightly changed.
A small introduction was added to the beginning of the doc. With details on how to contact me and a content warning.
This was simply a quick update and just letting everyone know I'm still working on the doc. Four more scenes and I'll start asking for proofing reading and edits before resubmitting for review. No updates will come for a while. I just wanna get these next scenes done with. Unless I'm able to commission art. Thank you for reading and have a wonderful day!
Wow this has really come along, 80+ pages? It seems better already even as it's not done being edited yet, great stuff!
Edit: “T-Thats not the point! You’re still playing with magic to satisfy your weird degenerate fantasies!” amazing call out, 10/10
Edit: “T-Thats not the point! You’re still playing with magic to satisfy your weird degenerate fantasies!” amazing call out, 10/10
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Errrr, I'm hoping something like this will only be under the "Silly mode". Spoils the immersion a bit, for my taste.