Balak's Submission Hub

Discussion in 'Event Submissions' started by Balaknightfang, Aug 27, 2018.

  1. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    Hello! I'm Balaknightfang, a longtime fan who's been considering writing bits and pieces for a fenco game for a while now. With the release of CoC2, I decided to finally give it a shot. After pitching my first idea to Savin and being given the go-ahead, I've been working on my first real project, which I feel has finally reached a point where I feel comfortable putting this up with a link to the project.

    Current Project(s):
    Goblin Codex [Editing]
    Nelia - Goblin Shopkeeper [In progress]

    Finished Project(s):
    Lupine Scouts [Implemented]
    A Witch's Touch - Halloween Dream [Implemented]
    A Witch's Touch - Female Version [Implemented]
    Manticore Nip TF [Implemented]

    If you have any advice, comments, criticisms, etc, please feel free to comment in the doc, in this thread, or message me here or on discord.
     
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  2. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    I've been slowly making progress, but I've managed to get through writing the rough drafts for both loss scenes. They're both probably shorter than I'd like, and I'll probably expand them once I finish the victory scenes, but for now I'm glad to have actually gotten them down.
     
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  3. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    This weekend I've made it through the first of the victory scenes ("Fuck Her"). It's the longest I've written yet, with the total word count for the scene and its variations being just shy of 1.7k words. I'll probably move to the "Ride him" scene next, and save the "Fuck him" scene for last.

    Also, I'd like to thank the kind reader who went through and suggested a bunch of edits to the two defeat scenes. I'm pretty sure I accepted all of them, and every bit of advice, critique, and editing is appreciated.
     
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  4. Dima33

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    Maybe we should add a scene, if the main character has already defeated them and raped them, but now with their next victory, the male enemy rapes the hero very hard?
     
  5. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    I'd thought about doing a scene along those lines originally, but felt that it doesn't really fit with the personality and motivation of the duo. Their primary focus is getting off, they don't necessarily care how. Because of that, it felt out of place, especially given some of the dialogue. Take, for instance, the amazon's quote at the end of the "fuck her" scene:
    I find really demonstrates how they're happy so long as they orgasm, and thus shows that a harsh "revenge fucking" doesn't quite fit with the rest of their content.

    On the other hand, I'll likely end up adding dialogue to the loss scenes based upon whether or not the player defeated and raped them in their previous encounter as part of my expansion of said scenes.

    Thank you for your suggestion!


    In other news, I'm hoping to be done with the last currently planned scene by the end of this weekend, at which point I'll be doing some minor additions, including the aforementioned loss scene ones, and figuring out if there's anything else I plan on adding before I submit the doc.
     
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  6. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    I've finished the "Fuck him" scene, which ended at a little over 1.7k works. I'll be expanding the defeat scenes throughout the week, and hopefully Friday will be able to submit, at which point I'll go into the editing stage while I wait.
     
  7. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    The lupine scouts have officially been submitted!
     
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  8. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    So, I entered a dream for CoC2 into the Halloweiner competition, and apparently it was liked enough to be accepted for implementation!
     
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  9. TFMaster

    TFMaster Well-Known Member

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    Good on ya mate!
     
  10. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    With finals week coming up, I figured it's time for me to update people on what I've been doing. While I've been largely inactive because of the increasingly difficult challenge of balancing school, work, and everything else, I have been outlining a few ideas I and occasionally actually logging words into my current main project: an NPC in harvest valley. As it stands, none of my projects are quite ready to be posted here, but I wanted to let people know I've not been completely idle this past month.

    I've also been considering adding lesbian victory scene for the Lupines, but I haven't decided what exactly what I would do for the scene.
     
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  11. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    So, figured I'd update this thread for those who haven't heard via discord: I'm currently putting my writing stuff on hold (until probably around the release of Harvest Valley, which is where my next project is/was going to be). In the meantime, I'm working as a coder to help get content into the game.
     
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  12. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    So, as people can see on the blog, I actually wrote a thing. It's been added to the OP, should you wish to read it in its doc form, for some reason.
     
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  13. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    I wrote the manticore TF that came out in today's patch to go along with SKoW's Smug Manticore. You guys should check it out. A link to the doc has been added to the OP.

    Edit: I don't suggest trying to read it unless you happen to like parser soup
     
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  14. Wsan

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    This is one of my biggest problems with CoC2 docs, ha. I can't imagine what reading some of my spaghet must be like for my patrons. Good work on manticore things, and as always good job with coding.
     
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  15. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    I getcha. I've been told that some people get headaches looking at how I had to color-code the lupines to understand the five levels of nesting I got to.

    And thank you! I do what I can
     
  16. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    So, with Harvest Valley in, the lupines have been approved. In addition, I've begun work on adding goblins. My biggest goal for them has been to retain their core fetishes (shortstack, preg) while giving them a new spin. From the feedback I've received so far, I think I'm doing at least an OK job of that. I've largely completed their codex, but I'm also working on a goblin shopkeeper, and I plan on having her have content for both those with a phallus and those without, though the niches covered for both will be different. As always, the links have been added to the OP.
     
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  17. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    The Lupine Scouts are officially in the game! You guys can play them in the latest backer build.

    Regarding Nelia and any other goblin things: while I've done a decent bit of outlining for her, I'm not going to be able to do much more for the next month or so. After that, however, I'll have plenty of time to work on getting her written and (hopefully) into the game
     
  18. ShifterDreams

    ShifterDreams Well-Known Member

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    I'm wondering any chance of a goblin tf? To go with the race?
     
  19. Balaknightfang

    Balaknightfang Well-Known Member

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    Probably, yeah. It's certainly on the to-do list after churning out at least one of Nelia's talk scenes
     
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    marsup Well-Known Member

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    Always love me some goblins shortstacks, can't wait to see more.