typos and etc

PanzerGuitar00

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the parser for this needs work, as herms who use feminine pronouns, like yours truly, get flagged as male

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Skunkupine

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Grimald, first meeting, talk, himself:
"Mom and shit hit the fan. In the blink of an eye, everyone was involved in the medley:"
Medley is music, I think this is supposed to be melee .
"My parents ended up back-to-back, surrendered by enraged korgonnes,"
I think that's supposed to be surrounded.

In the Uveto path: "
And besides, I was well-escorted,” you tease, leaning closer to him. Are there other places worthy of interest?”//else: “Are there other places of interest?”
Parser leak.
 
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Dahlia and Sloan - appearance: "Who do you want to take a closer look at?Dahlia is an athletic, 6 foot 6 inch {did Them Talk:half-anat //else:avian}. "
Leftover from the question of who to look at, plus parser leak.
 

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Dahlia and Sloan - eat: " Cheeks red as a tomato, the large huntress slowly stands and heads to the reserve. //else: “I would like to eat some of your homemade cooking,” you say. “Your plates are so generous and so tasty.”
Parser leak.
 

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Velika - bar scene playing knife games:
"At the behest of the crowd, she abandons her simple pattern and starts going from the space between y
our thumb "
stray line break in "your"
 

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Saendra's Quarters during Fall of the Pheonix said:
With the locker open, you’re also treated to a good look at several open drawers full of panties and bras, the latter clearly made for a well-endowed girl.One of the wall panels has been yanked off, giving you access to the wiring inside the bulkhead.

Vulpine Eyes + Frostfire said:
Your eyes bear a vertical slit instead of rounded pupils, surrounded by a brightly fiery blue iris.

Nuki Cookies said:
You’ve got padded palms, just like a kui-tan
Missing '.'.

Dhaal Extrameet said:
Veeka reaches out, pressing her hands against your shoulders,she backs you up against the side of a mostly stripped-bare ship.

Savicite Ring Set said:
A set of obsidian hoop piercings lined with savicite.
Hoops and Rings are two different styles. Probably a copy-paste error.

Horken & Orroah said:
He pushes hard, ensuring your cock-pillows form a perfect seal against her own, but he doesn’t need to. You wouldn’t have missed this chance for the world, opening your mouth wide and bracing yourself for the avalanche of cum that pours out of her. You have to gulp it down to keep up with the flow, the pressure of her straining stomach forcing most of his load back out and into your thirsty maw.

You feel your own midriff start to strain as it goes on, the flow gradually slowing down.
Doesn't result in Orally Filled.
Truthfully, Horkenn is doing most of the work, still pounding away at your ass while Orroah holds you and .
Your master hilts himself one last time in a brutal shove, nearly trying to reach his wife’s pussy through you as he cums.
Doesn't result in Anally filled, either.
 
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Jacques00

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Hopefully all fixed for the next release--up to this point, at least.

As english isn't my first language "Your seam-straining, musky cock is wearing a cow-print cock sock. ", does sound a bit weird to me. I feel like it should be more like "You are wearing a cow-print cock sock on your seam-straining, musky cock.", since the genital isn't wearing it by itself.
This is fine, especially when there are multiple cock descriptions stacked up, reading "You are wearing" multiple times can be a bit distracting. But grammatically, the current order should be correct as the penises are wearing the articles of clothing, and the penises belong to "you", the character.

TEXT: His tongue swirls your tight asshole, wettening your taint with warm spit. Dappling sweat is sucked up in his lusty haze, and there are moments he falls towards your Error: Invalid vaginaNum (-1) passed to vaginaDescript(), only for you to remind him of what he’s allowed to have. The korg-man’s paws spread your ass cheeks wider, exposing your once-hidden sphincter to the air and further abuse.
For these instances of -1 index, I've added a line to reset the genital indices right before the respective sex menus are generated. Hopefully this fixes a majority of those rogue index values. If not, feel free to report them again and I'll try to look into it further.

Verushaween, riding the alien femboy (Vagina selected)
Ditto the previous note here.

When speaking with Jesse on Canadia (Talk > Her), "alot" should be "a lot".
If this kind of spelling is found in dialog, it's okay if its spelled that way so I'll give it a pass for now. Spellings like that could be an indicator of how the speaker talks, like speaking fast, or having a certain dialect by using alternate spellings for certain English words, depending on the character speaking. If it's an out and out typo or if the misspelling in the quote is egregious, that would be worth fixing. Outside of quotes that spelling would be a mistake.

not sure what happened here. maybe it ran out of things to change?
Each change happens per hour, so if you get stacking messages like that, you must have advanced time by a lot and each hour rolled the same results.

Not really a typo, but I think I'm a little insulted (6.6 cubic feet capacity). Behemoths have 12"-16" dicks, if I'm not mistaken.
I've increased the behemoth penis sizes to at least 4-foot in length with a 16-inch variability added to that. Hopefully that helps.

idk what this is meant to mean, is it just slang im not familiar with?

Which isn’t nearly enough. It’s not enough to just look pretty if you belong to me, bottom bitch; you gotta train. Get that thing up you on the regular, and sing my name as you do it.”
Yes, this is totally fine. "Get that thing up you" is one phrase that expresses an action, and "on the regular" defines how often that action is done.

this line plays even though im still fertile. i doo however have my a vginal fertility turned off with the synthwomb..... maybe thats ahts causing it?
Yes, toggling off fertility with the SynthWomb will classify your character as being infertile as it overrides any fertility value stats your character may have.

change to "innie"
The word "inner" seems to be used as a slang term by the character, so it's fine, not a typo.

the parser for this needs work, as herms who use feminine pronouns, like yours truly, get flagged as male
This is actually parsed by your character's personality. If your character is kind, they will always slap the left cheek to appease his preference for males. If your character is mischievous, they will slap either cheek depending on your character's defined gender. If your character is hard, they will always slap the right cheek to troll him. So it's not that the text isn't respecting gender preferences, it's just what fits the context of the scene.
 
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