[WIP] Cassandra the half gryvain and kaithrit

[magikarpfever]

Clarissa Night
"So like a cat and dragon? Dracat? Dragcat? Dragocat?"
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I've noticed that trials in tainted space doesn't have a lot of Gryvains besides the one the PC and Anno has a threeway with so I've been itching to make one. At first she was just going to be a pureblooded gryvain but then I thought 'why not mix it up?' This train of through led to the hybrid I know and love. She's actually based on an old OC of mine I had planned for a cyberpunk story. Anyways this is far from finished and will take some time to complete however let me know what you guys think so far and if you have any suggestions. Honestly I doubt it will be implemented and it's more for fun than anything else but if it is yay! if not that's cool to. I just really love writing.

Overview​

A half gryvain half kaithrit KihaCorp worker who works in a small office in Uveto. Fuckable, romanceable, and can give you some interesting items depending on how you approach her and the ensuing conversations. Likes feminine/androgynous presenting individuals the most. It will take time for her to warm up to a masculine presenting person however if they are masculine and half gryvain/kaithrit her affection is equal to that of being presented with a feminine/androgynous person. If you’re a dick there’s some pretty hot hate fucking.

Link to doc​

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[NotYouNorI]

I just skimmed through it and it looks good so far.

But I'm curious, are you aware that she isn't the first gryvain/kaithrit hybrid in this game?

 

[eveoflife]

With traits like those in her blood, her tits are surprisingly small. No complaints, just facts that both races come absolutely stacked in the chest department, normally with GG cups, give or take. I know I look forward to another smexy dragon babe. Though sad to see the hard persona played off again as "mouthy asshole who simply must ruin your day".

 

[magikarpfever]

I just skimmed through it and it looks good so far.

But I'm curious, are you aware that she isn't the first gryvain/kaithrit hybrid in this game?

no actually i wasnt. if u dont mind me asking whos the first?

With traits like those in her blood, her tits are surprisingly small. No complaints, just facts that both races come absolutely stacked in the chest department, normally with GG cups, give or take. I know I look forward to another smexy dragon babe. Though sad to see the hard persona played off again as "mouthy asshole who simply must ruin your day".

lmao thanks and tbh dd has always been big for me, i was going for big yet manageable. kind of like penny. ill lighten up on the hard personality, im having trouble leading up to the hate sex scene so ill try to fix it in the future

 

[Emerald]

no actually i wasnt. if u dont mind me asking whos the first?

https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Terensha
While it isn't super obvious, Terensha is a Gryvain-Kaithrit hybrid as well and has long since been in the game.

 

[eveoflife]

lmao thanks and tbh dd has always been big for me, i was going for big yet manageable. kind of like penny. ill lighten up on the hard personality, im having trouble leading up to the hate sex scene so ill try to fix it in the future

Could be easily told that she was fed up knocking things off her desk and went for reduction mods? Or she's just the "flat chest" of her race. xD

 

[NotYouNorI]

https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Terensha
While it isn't super obvious, Terensha is a Gryvain-Kaithrit hybrid as well and has long since been in the game.

there you go ninja-ing me...

 

[magikarpfever]

https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Terensha
While it isn't super obvious, Terensha is a Gryvain-Kaithrit hybrid as well and has long since been in the game.

OMG completely forgot about the brothel in Tavros. thnx for reminding me lmao you're so right. rly love her character design actually wish there was more interactions with her.

Could be easily told that she was fed up knocking things off her desk and went for reduction mods? Or she's just the "flat chest" of her race. xD

well im going to make her ex military so i suppose she would have been an f cup but got it reduced so shed be able to fight easily. honestly i doubt there could be a flat chested gryvain. pretty sure if you make a half gryvain pc the breast size can only go down to a c cup.

 

[Kesil]

It'd be nice if you could comment on the GDoc.

Text wise, everything seens to have at least two adjectives, making it too flowery. But perhaps that's just me.

 

[magikarpfever]

It'd be nice if you could comment on the GDoc.

Text wise, everything seens to have at least two adjectives, making it too flowery. But perhaps that's just me.

ive never had my writing called flowery before XD personally i think it flows pretty well but i appreciate the input ^-^ ill put comments on when its more complete. i usually do a couple edits before doing comments

 

[Ormael]

So far it made me interested in this npc so will try keep an eye on this. Also I thoguht it was the other project about half-gryvain but turns out it wasn't so a nice surprise ^^

 

[magikarpfever]

So far it made me interested in this npc so will try keep an eye on this. Also I thoguht it was the other project about half-gryvain but turns out it wasn't so a nice surprise ^^

awww omg thank u so much! ill assume you meant was a nice surprise so thanks again!

 

[Ormael]

Yes it was nice surpise indeed. Even ore about some detail about her I will not say aloud since many can jump at you right away demanding changes for a sake of...make it more mainsteam-like npc.

 

[magikarpfever]

Yes it was nice surpise indeed. Even ore about some detail about her I will not say aloud since many can jump at you right away demanding changes for a sake of...make it more mainsteam-like npc.

ahhhhh youre such a sweetheart thats actually what i was afraid of, people using critism as a way to make her the way they want. especially in regards to her not liking masculine individuals that much. youre so nice thank you so much for the kind words ;-;

 

[Ormael]

Some people her may try this so still be prepared for such case. Also the other similar project with half-gryvian do had few people been quite critique toward author so it ended up abandoned or went on hiatus.

 

[magikarpfever]

Some people her may try this so still be prepared for such case. Also the other similar project with half-gryvian do had few people been quite critique toward author so it ended up abandoned or went on hiatus.

oh crap rly? ive seen that happen with a lot of older threads when i was browsing the submission thread. thats pretty dumb tbh, like youd people would be a lot nicer, hell this is a kinky furry porn game. its not like its the odyssey

 

[eveoflife]

well im going to make her ex military so i suppose she would have been an f cup but got it reduced so shed be able to fight easily. honestly i doubt there could be a flat chested gryvain. pretty sure if you make a half gryvain pc the breast size can only go down to a c cup.

That was what I was joking at, that D cups were the "itty bitty titty" like how below A cups is to ours.

 

[TheDevilYouKnow]

oh crap rly? ive seen that happen with a lot of older threads when i was browsing the submission thread. thats pretty dumb tbh, like youd people would be a lot nicer, hell this is a kinky furry porn game. its not like its the odyssey

To be fair, that author refused to acknowledge a gaping hole in their character and kept insisting that they were working on it, but had nothing to show for it other than a stat block.

Just remember to stand your ground on things that are preferences, but be prepared for somebody pointing out something that might take people out of character from a logical standpoint. By no means are you obliged to follow any suggestions either. Just keep in mind that many of the veteran writers and forum goers tend to give advice that will usually help your submission pass review.

 

[Draconoid]

"So like a cat and dragon? Dracat? Dragcat? Dragocat?"

Dragonne?

 

[magikarpfever]

That was what I was joking at, that D cups were the "itty bitty titty" like how below A cups is to ours.

oh haha gotchu

To be fair, that author refused to acknowledge a gaping hole in their character and kept insisting that they were working on it, but had nothing to show for it other than a stat block.

Just remember to stand your ground on things that are preferences, but be prepared for somebody pointing out something that might take people out of character from a logical standpoint. By no means are you obliged to follow any suggestions either. Just keep in mind that many of the veteran writers and forum goers tend to give advice that will usually help your submission pass review.

ya no im all for constructive criticism. just a lot of what ive seen for other submissions is a little mean? like they think theyre hotshit for critiquing some submission for a furry porn game.

Dragonne?

THANK YOU

 

[Draconoid]

Always happy to drop pieces of obscure dragon trivia where needed. "Dragonne" is actually a supported PC race in-game already, about halfway down the list of additional races in the "Race Score" table. F4 is your friend.

 

[magikarpfever]

Always happy to drop pieces of obscure dragon trivia where needed. "Dragonne" is actually a supported PC race in-game already, about halfway down the list of additional races in the "Race Score" table. F4 is your friend.

omg nice look at you guys teaching me about lore i didnt even know and i consider myself a bit of a lore whore. lmao thanks again

 

[NotYouNorI]

omg nice look at you guys teaching me about lore i didnt even know and i consider myself a bit of a lore whore. lmao thanks again

Though more like under-the-hood game mechanics, than lore...

As for the "meanness", the only cases of such I remember are the cases of a few newbies who were rebuked by regulars for it. So I don't think you should worry about that.

 

[NotYouNorI]

Also since we can't comment on your Gdoc currently, the instances where Cassandra reacts to seeing that Steele has kaithrit twin-tails or gryvain wings should be rather based on Steele having those features rather than whether the game considers them a (half-)kaithrit/(half-)gryvain. Because the way racial scores work, Steele can be a (half-)kaithrit/(half-)gryvain and not have those features.

And even looking at the only other gryvain/kaithrit hybrid, Terensha has neither gryvain wings nor kaithrit tails.

 

[magikarpfever]

Also since we can't comment on your Gdoc currently, the instances where Cassandra reacts to seeing that Steele has kaithrit twin-tails or gryvain wings should be rather based on Steele having those features rather than whether the game considers them a (half-)kaithrit/(half-)gryvain. Because the way racial scores work, Steele can be a (half-)kaithrit/(half-)gryvain and not have those features.

And even looking at the only other gryvain/kaithrit hybrid, Terensha has neither gryvain wings nor kaithrit tails.

ill see if I can add more variables to make it work with the racial scores.

yeah see there are traits signifying shes gryvain but none that shes kaithrit so im not sure how PC could tell that she was so i had it so cass is more obvious. dont get me wrong she's a great character just thought idwmake the traits more pronounced. if the mods have a problem with it ill change it

 

[Ormael]

From gamewise point it's about PC have enough points in racial score to be considered as half/full X race. But as other said for her to react to PC have kitty or dragonny traits it would be indeed better make game check for specifics body parts that would trigger specific reaction from Cass. Ahh and now I said Cass you may need to check on TiTS smutosaur if there isn't any npc already with name similar/same as your PC. I'm fairy certain there could be npc named Cass but if it short for Cassandra or not would req. checking.

 

[Lancer]

There is in fact another NPC called Cass, Kaede's girlfriend. https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Cass

 

[Captain Kiera]

There is in fact another NPC called Cass, Kaede's girlfriend.

A character i`m quite sad you can only meet once. I mean come on @Fenoxo, why can I only help Kaede with her girlfriend problem once? Especially concidering how hot her sex scenes are.

Also, hope to see more of Cassandra. The "hate sex" part intrigues me. Will it only be accessible to PC with hard personalities?

 

[Ormael]

Yeah that waht not strike me that at the start Fen may not like her name (well Cass the cowish kitty seems to be jsut named Cass but with so similar name of this one kitty...heh half-kitty it may indeed be worth or ask Fen (who made Cass) if he would allow Casandra stay with such name or not).

Tere was one or two accidents when some PC needed to be renamed sue to been too similary named to other one (or due to many npc starting on the same letter *cough* E *cough*).

 

[magikarpfever]

There is in fact another NPC called Cass, Kaede's girlfriend. https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Cass

A character i`m quite sad you can only meet once. I mean come on @Fenoxo, why can I only help Kaede with her girlfriend problem once? Especially concidering how hot her sex scenes are.

Also, hope to see more of Cassandra. The "hate sex" part intrigues me. Will it only be accessible to PC with hard personalities?

Yeah that waht not strike me that at the start Fen may not like her name (well Cass the cowish kitty seems to be jsut named Cass but with so similar name of this one kitty...heh half-kitty it may indeed be worth or ask Fen (who made Cass) if he would allow Casandra stay with such name or not).

Tere was one or two accidents when some PC needed to be renamed sue to been too similary named to other one (or due to many npc starting on the same letter *cough* E *cough*).

ya i was hoping that know one would notice SIGH its like wanting a tumblr url but the person using it is inactive. if need be i can change her name. so far i only have plans for a hard PC to have hate sex but toward when im almost done to completing her i might add some options that could piss her off