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CitrusWolf

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Since we are speaking about that, I want to dom Brint in bed. Bottoming or topping, does not matter. Would be a nice change of pace from his usual tomfoolery.
There are two scenes for domming Brint when empenised, one that is more traditional and has some small variants and one where the champ goes all the way out, riding chair included
 

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But they are not in bed where champions holds the big jock around his chest while being balls deep into his tight hole. Or waking him up by having him clean up the mess he made from one our hole from the previous days.

But hey, more scenes of any kind where we get to dom Brint are good in my book. My favourite scenes of his, after all, are the ones that you get before he fully transforms into Brienne. Fucking a supposed stud like him into a whimpering mess is top tier stuff.

So yeah, more doming of the big guy. For he loves it.
 
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CitrusWolf

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But they are not in bed where champions holds the big jock around his chest while being balls deep into his tight hole. Or waking him up by having him clean up the mess he made from one our hole from the previous days.

But hey, more scenes of any kind where we get to dom Brint are good in my book. My favourite scenes of his, after all, are the ones that you get before he fully transforms into Brienne. Fucking a supposed stud like him into a whimpering mess is top tier stuff.

So yeah, more doming of the big guy. For he loves it.
fair enough, none of the Brint domming scenes are really my deal since I am more of a gentle doting dom when the mood strikes but I can see how making him a whimpering mess can be appealing
 

Animalistic

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Ey, who says that they need to be hardcore, brutal or degrading. They can be just you taking a bull for a ride where you ride and edge the bull until he cums. Maybe then you could have hi, "punish" you for doing so by taking back the rains over the situation. The latter is not something I am into but hey, "tease the bull, get the horns" or whatever.
 

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Ey, who says that they need to be hardcore, brutal or degrading. They can be just you taking a bull for a ride where you ride and edge the bull until he cums. Maybe then you could have hi, "punish" you for doing so by taking back the rains over the situation. The latter is not something I am into but hey, "tease the bull, get the horns" or whatever.
Those are also not really how I like to dom, you see, I like Aly's writings of Ryn because that is exactly how I enjoy domming, I am very picky to how I dom which is likely due to my own lean being more or less 90% sub 10% dom
 

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Those are also not really how I like to dom, you see, I like Aly's writings of Ryn because that is exactly how I enjoy domming, I am very picky to how I dom which is likely due to my own lean being more or less 90% sub 10% dom
I meant the same thing, heh. Gentle doming where you pamper your sub with praises and kisses but still making sure to them that you are in control. It probably did not come that way with how I was speaking.

Which is why Evelyn is the best!
She is? She feels pretty, well not exactly hardcore, but like a classical dom. Tough and demanding of her sub yet still fair and knows her boundries,
 
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CitrusWolf

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I meant the same thing, heh. Gentle doming your sub where praise and pamper your sub with praises and kisses but still making sure to them that you are in control. It probably did not come that way with how I was speaking.
I see! yeah it may have been lost in tone/translation (I think in a weird mix of english and spanish)
 

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Well, I can not blame you when I used the phrase "Taking a bull by the horns". I really did myself disservice when trying to convey something as simple "Champion doing soft doming is also good."
 
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Those are also not really how I like to dom, you see, I like Aly's writings of Ryn because that is exactly how I enjoy domming, I am very picky to how I dom which is likely due to my own lean being more or less 90% sub 10% dom
Saaaame!
She is? She feels pretty, well not exactly hardcore, but like a classical dom. Tough and demanding of her sub yet still fair and knows her boundries,
She's very sweet and caring in the virginity giving scenes as well as when Ryn's involved but she'll also rail you against the door sooooo I'd say she switches between soft/gentle domme and harder domme depending on the context of the scene.

She's also liberal with her praises of the champ (and Cait and Ryn) which to me atleast makes me think of her as a more gentle domme (despite the aformentioned railing against the door)! You can barely get through a scene without Evelyn's liberal use of "Good girl/boy" "Darling" etc. to the champ <3
 

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If people write them.

I've been meaning to get an option to unlock Kervus tattoos for a while, so you can get matching tatts with Arona.
How much money do I need to through at you to help this along? #AronaSimp (also, mostly kidding, because I assume time is the biggest issue at hand. not kidding baout the money tho, if that would help you out at all.)
 

luciel1331

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She is? She feels pretty, well not exactly hardcore, but like a classical dom. Tough and demanding of her sub yet still fair and knows her boundries,
Well, addition to what PuppyPrincess, compared to doms like say Arona, Garret, and other npcs that dom you, they typically care about their own sexual gratification and release first rather than the pc's. The aforementioned characters give rough sex to pc like Evelyn, but Evelyn does make sure pc is taken care of and they're also sexually satisfied. She also doesn't dump you and uses you like a mere sex toy like some npcs.
 

Animalistic

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She's very sweet and caring in the virginity giving scenes as well as when Ryn's involved but she'll also rail you against the door sooooo I'd say she switches between soft/gentle domme and harder domme depending on the context of the scene.

She's also liberal with her praises of the champ (and Cait and Ryn) which to me atleast makes me think of her as a more gentle domme (despite the aformentioned railing against the door)! You can barely get through a scene without Evelyn's liberal use of "Good girl/boy" "Darling" etc. to the champ <3
Hmm, if you say so. To me for a dom to be gentle, sex also needs to be gentle. And besides her virginity scenes, she is pretty rough and sudden when she tops PC. She is also deliciously cruel to PCs with small endowments. Making fun of them and all that jazz.

When I think of soft Dom, I think of someone that praises me when I do good, gently corrects me when I do bad and does sex at a pace that is all about bringing their partner to a zenith of extacy at their own tempo.

Maybe I should replay her content, but I just remembered Evelyn as a classic Dom. Just because she praises you when you clean her feet, after forcing you to cum with them, does not make her soft in my book after

Well, addition to what PuppyPrincess, compared to doms like say Arona, Garret, and other npcs that dom you, they typically care about their own sexual gratification and release first rather than the pc's. The aforementioned characters give rough sex to pc like Evelyn, but Evelyn does make sure pc is taken care of and they're also sexually satisfied. She also doesn't dump you and uses you like a mere sex toy like some npcs.
Garret is a Sadist who enjoys inflicting pain on willing girls.
And Dom Arona is a somewhat rapy and seemingly doesn't really acknowledge PC as anything more than a hole to fuck. Especially if you lack a dick.
I feel like comparing anyone to those would make them come out soft in comparison.
 
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luciel1331

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Hmm, if you say so. To me for a dom to be gentle, sex also needs to be gentle. And besides her virginity scenes, she is pretty rough and sudden when she tops PC. She is also deliciously cruel to PCs with small endowments. Making fun of them and all that jazz.

When I think of soft Dom, I think of someone that praises me when I do bad, gently corrects me when I do bad and does sex at a pace that is all about bringing their parte to a zenith of extacy at your own tempo.

Maybe I should replay her content, but I just remembered Evelyn as a classic Dom. Just because she praises you when you clean her feet does not make her soft in my book after "forcing you to cum",
That makes sense but you know I don't think there really is a gentle dom like that you described in the game (maybe Klemaia). I mean sure there are a lot of dom characters but they're all pretty rough on PC (not much slow love making honestly). Most doms tend to be dicked characters and there are much fewer dicked characters compared to pure females. And the majority of pure females tend to be submissive....so doms seem to be few and gentle doms seem to be rarer.

Edit: oops forgot about Brint. Brint is a pretty gentle dom too. I mean his sex is rough but he does take care of PC afterwards...
Garret is a Sadist who enjoys inflicting pain on willing girls.
And Dom Arona is a somewhat rapy Dom that doesn't really see PC as anything more than a hole to fuck. Especially if you lack dick.
I feel like comparing anyone to those would make them come out soft in comparison.
I guess that's fair. Haha. They were just characters that popped into my head 1st. As I mentioned above though, most doms are rough so compared to the others, I view Evelyn as gentle dom.
 
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HK-47

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But they are not in bed where champions holds the big jock around his chest while being balls deep into his tight hole. Or waking him up by having him clean up the mess he made from one our hole from the previous days.

But hey, more scenes of any kind where we get to dom Brint are good in my book. My favourite scenes of his, after all, are the ones that you get before he fully transforms into Brienne. Fucking a supposed stud like him into a whimpering mess is top tier stuff.

So yeah, more doming of the big guy. For he loves it.

Yeah, that would definitely be great. Getting more of that would make my day :D

One thing I definitely do appreciate with Dom!Brint scenes, though, is that there is actual description of aftercare. Not a fan at all of the more rapey dom characters that just use the Champ as a humanoid fleshlight, and then immediately fuck off afterwards.
 

CitrusWolf

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Yeah, that would definitely be great. Getting more of that would make my day :D

One thing I definitely do appreciate with Dom!Brint scenes, though, is that there is actual description of aftercare. Not a fan at all of the more rapey dom characters that just use the Champ as a humanoid fleshlight, and then immediately fuck off afterwards.
the reason I pretty much stick to Ryn, Brint, Elyon, and Liufr at the time, while Elyon is significantly less lovey dovey he still treats the champ a lot better than 90% of the doms in game :'D
 

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the reason I pretty much stick to Ryn, Brint, Elyon, and Liufr at the time, while Elyon is significantly less lovey dovey he still treats the champ a lot better than 90% of the doms in game :'D

Mhmm. A lot of the other “dom” characters seem to be exclusively based on certain porn ideas of dom/sub scenes, rather than actual healthy dom/sub arrangements. Most of them make me wish my muscle twink black mage Champ that I play as a switch-sub had the option to toss a fireball at them, given the nonsense they pull :rolleyes:

Like, I get it’s a porn game, but it’s not the best idea to encourage that kind of crap, even unintentionally.
 
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Mhmm. A lot of the other “dom” characters seem to be exclusively based on certain porn ideas of dom/sub scenes, rather than actual healthy dom/sub arrangements. Most of them make me wish my muscle twink black mage Champ that I play as a switch/sub had the option to toss a fireball at them, given the nonsense they pull :rolleyes:

Like, I get it’s a porn game, but it’s not the best idea to encourage that kind of crap, even unintentionally.
They serve the fantasy, in the same way that we don't have characters eating appropriately the night before and cleaning up with soap and warm water douches before participating in anal play. (This is also why Evelyn cavorting with the maids is a fun and cute backstory and not a horrendous abuse of power)

And as for healthy dom/sub arrangements, Garret's really rough stuff is gated behind a button labelled Be His Bitch. First, the dom, Garret, and the sub, champ, have sexual encounters where Garret is somewhat rough. The sub really enjoys this and asks the dom for an escalation. The dom and sub agree to terms, and then Garret performs his end of the agreed upon terms while pc.name orgasms repeatedly. I'm not seeing how that's a failing on Garret's part.

There are other things of course (there should be a safe word, you ideally would be able to say the safe word during any point in any scene), but with the simulation boundaries of presenting a narrative in a text video game that stuff isn't really included anywhere, even with the softest of service top stuff like Aly's Ryn scenes.
 
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There are other things of course (there should be a safe word, you ideally would be able to say the safe word during any point in any scene), but with the simulation boundaries of presenting a narrative in a text video game that stuff isn't really included anywhere, even with the softest of service top stuff like Aly's Ryn scenes.
Yeah. I've thought about the mechanics of trying to insert points at which someone can choose to use a safe word, and even experimented with actually writing that way, but it makes the scene's flow awful.

I have started to write content where Champ and/or their partner select a safe word beforehand, though.
 

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There are other things of course (there should be a safe word, you ideally would be able to say the safe word during any point in any scene), but with the simulation boundaries of presenting a narrative in a text video game that stuff isn't really included anywhere, even with the softest of service top stuff like Aly's Ryn scenes.

I've played an example of a game that does do this. At any point during the sex scenes, you can pick the option to say your safe word, and the character immediately stops and makes sure you're alright before cleaning up and sending you on your way. It works well there, because the engine allows the placement of a dedicated Safe Word button outside the text box.

 

HK-47

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They serve the fantasy, in the same way that we don't have characters eating appropriately the night before and cleaning up with soap and warm water douches before participating in anal play. (This is also why Evelyn cavorting with the maids is a fun and cute backstory and not a horrendous abuse of power)

And as for healthy dom/sub arrangements, Garret's really rough stuff is gated behind a button labelled Be His Bitch. First, the dom, Garret, and the sub, champ, have sexual encounters where Garret is somewhat rough. The sub really enjoys this and asks the dom for an escalation. The dom and sub agree to terms, and then Garret performs his end of the agreed upon terms while pc.name orgasms repeatedly. I'm not seeing how that's a failing on Garret's part.

There are other things of course (there should be a safe word, you ideally would be able to say the safe word during any point in any scene), but with the simulation boundaries of presenting a narrative in a text video game that stuff isn't really included anywhere, even with the softest of service top stuff like Aly's Ryn scenes.
I just strongly dislike unhealthy ideas of dom/sub arrangements being promoted is all, and don’t think it breaks the fantasy to include mentions of having the dom check with the sub throughout, as well as performing aftercare. The possible exception for the former would be consent play, but that’s something that should always be handled carefully, and definitely needs to include the latter.

As for Garret’s stuff specifically, it’s been a long time since I took a gander at it out of curiosity, so I’d have to look through it again, but from what I remember, it would be helpful to have mentions of him checking in with Champ during the scene, as well as mentions of aftercare. Without it, it starts to slide into just plain ol’ abuse.
 
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To me it just sounds like y'all want caring doms, not specifically soft ones.
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HK-47

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To me it just sounds like y'all want caring doms, not specifically soft ones.

I mean, pretty much, at least in my case. The dom not being an asshole and actually taking care of the sub is just basic etiquette for that sort of thing. Without it, it’s just abuse.
 

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Garret is pretty much tied with Lyla for the worst aftercare in the game - Arona may be a slaving warchief, but she's a cuddler. And check-ins largely consist of "yeah you like that bitch?" (which, frankly same for pretty much any other top or dom in the game). I tend to give leeway because I presume the authors aren't involved in the community. Unless they are, which is fine as well. So at least in my view it's not a failing of the character so much as a limitation of the author and the medium.

Also, in the narrative of the choking scene, champ explicitly asks Garret to please choke them out. And then repeatedly during the scene begs Garret to do it harder (or thinks it, it's hard to tell with indirect dialogue). So, yes, this is RACK being carried out by morons, but I don't think it's fair to call Garret abusive.

Also I've reconsidered - Garret at least leaves you sleeping in his bed. Lyla just leaves you on the ground by the fire.