Various Text Bugs

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Posting various typos or grammar issues.

Uveto, Eastern Coast, lose to Frostwyrm by lust:
A pounding pain thunders through your mind, feeling like your head is about to be wrent apart.
"wrent" -> "rent"

Lose to Frostwyrm after defeating it thrice, select Accept:
Your straddle its body and lean forward;
"Your" -> "you"

Mated with Frostwyrm for the first time:
When you wake up, you’re a bit stiff in the joints and sore and every muscle,
"and every muscle" -> "in every muscle"

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"The back to the ice fields" -> "The way back to the ice fields"

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"the glacial" -> "the glacier"
Malai, Get Fuck
your pencil-thin lips You part your lips
Period missing before "You part"

Milk Thief, loss by Fantasize
your pink memberjuts towards Dhaal’s polluted heavens
Space missing in "memberjuts"

Dhaal after party, gyrvain party, mommy dom
Her voice takes a slightly her pitch as you start to tease her
"her" -> "higher"

Dhaal factory floor
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Half-constructed plastic shells lie upon yet, not yet labelled
"lie upon yet" -> "lie upon"...something other than yet?

Jaqui Fassbin
“So,” you say, “you’re punishing Jack for trying to betraying you.”
"betraying" -> "betray"

Radglow
and your feet acts of its own accord,
"acts of its" -> "acts of their"

Also Radglow
forces its way up your shaft before blasting out powerfullyto paint the alien stems ahead with white seed.
Space missing in "powerfullyto"

Tarratch Slavers, Victory Sex, Buttfuck male
you can’t help but reve in the way his passage clings
"reve" -> "revel"

And that's a wrap. Enjoying the games so far!
 

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Thank you!
I have a few more.

Ten Ton Gym, Weight Room, Busky Spa Scene:
You decide to follow their example. You rest your head on Busky’s shoulder, his arm sneaks it’s way over yours, as you rest under the embrace of Busky’s pique physical condition.
pique -> peak

Next page:
You let out a groan as the pain of belly expansion is mixed with the still fading pleasure of your orgasm. If anything it feels amazing, being breed like a cow, your belly swelling with Busky’s seed. Load after load fills your ass, and your belly grows and grows, until you look 9 months pregnant.
being breed -> being bred

Next page:
Eventually you loosen your holes enough to clean yourself out, an unpleasant emptiness now filling your belly.
holes -> hole
(Fairly sure given the context of this story Busky is exclusively gay. Either way, this Steele only has one hole.)

There were some more in the other Busky gym scenes, but I would need to go back for them another time.
 

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I come bearing more.
(These scenes were all really good!)

Glowing Hydra > Fuck
A half-step is all it takes for the zaika to close the slender distance between the two of you. Wrapping her hands around your shoulders, she draws your lofty frame downward until your head is level with her wobbling, cum-inflated bustline. With an delighted giggle, she smooshes your face into her warm, glowing bosom. The taut, tender surface of her ballooned chest yields like a neon waterbed, narrow cleavage molding itself against your every feature as it swallows you into the light of her overflowing lust.
an delighted -> a delighted

Milk Thief > Victory > Face Fuck
“Oh shit, Angel? Damn...” The familiar, swaggering tones of your favorite law-breaking tanuki caress your ears as she casually barrels through the crowd, nearly dragging her nuts behind. Kiro’s bright red eyes fixate on the sight of your spit-slicked cock pounding away at the captive, and she wastes way no time in whipping out her own dick to stroke in unrestrained, hedonistic glory. She leans into the closest, bustiest zaika she can find and whispers something to her, and a second set of hands joins in servicing the kui-tan’s bestial pole. “F-f-fuck her harder!”
wastes way no time -> wastes no time


Sydian herm, lust loss
You cum again when he does, thrusting deep inside you with a low groan, brush-like cilia working on absolute overdrive to push the all-too-copious amounts of thick, doubtlessly virile spunk deeper and deeper still into you in an attempt to flood you full With no minds of their own, of course, they can’t know the effort is a wasted one.
Period missing between "full" and "With".

Sydian male, lust loss
Your cheeks flush, growing warm, but you’re unsure if that’s the effect of his seed or his fuzzy shaft. The same warmth that builds flushes across your lips suddenly heats up under your tongue, as your mouth begins to water uncontrollably. It gets harder and harder to think clearly. All you know is that you’re suddenly drooling, saliva spilling down your lips, and all you can think about is getting more of that warm, alien goo.
Remove either "builds" or "flushes" from "The same warmth that builds flushes across your lips"

Sydian male, lust loss
The sensation of his fingers rubbing along your base feels just as exquisite as the act of sex itself, your tip bubbling pre-cum as you let out a whimpering moan. As the male sydian begins to stroke faster, you bite your lower lip, and suddenly you’re letting out an uninhibited cry of delight.Your cum bursts out in huge, thick ropes all over the ground, creating a gigantic alabaster pool. You convulse and throb wildly as he milks your cock for every last drop.
Space missing between "delight." and "Your cum".

Spaceship, probably
Tika, treat STD, suppository
You’ve barely had time to comply before Tika is pulling your suit of augment-weave armor and Ball Brassiere and Stocking down, planting a hand on your petite bottom.. She deftly spreads your cheeks,
Extra period after "bottom."

Male Korgonne, lust loss
As his girth gets thicker and thicker, his thrusts grow shallow. The korgonne’s knot is picking up inches; he whimpers and whines with pleasure at each one. Already the sound of it popping in and out of your pliant, slime-drooling anus is audible over the constant wind; he still pauses outside sometimes to rub his shaft against your labia, but his attention is moving downward. The next time he forces the knot in, it doesn’t come out again. The korgonne tugs gently at it, then a smile spreads gradually over his stubby face.
Labia mentioned when Steele has no vagina, just a massive dong and an omega-oiled ass.

Male Korgonne, victory, cowgirl
Your lovers cries become sharper and more urgent; whatever you’re doing to his dick, it’s about to make him cum. You slow down, trying to ride it as long as you can, but your own climax is drawing close as well....
lovers -> lover's

Hilinara random events
Without any warning, the bug up your arse has starts moving, having decided that it is going to rearrange itself inside you.
arse has starts -> arse starts

The liquid has already made a little puddle where you stand, strands of slime that connecting you and the ground.
that connecting -> that connect

In the heat of the moment, you’ve moved from up single digits
from up -> up from


Radglow, fight, struggle, lust loss, spitroast
The alien creature treats your pucker with little care, haphazardly slamming you feeling out the contorted layout of the intestinal tract,
Suggest adding a comma or "and" after "haphazardly slamming"

Meanwhile, the cock in your mouth finishes cumming and starts taking lengthy measured, thrusts in and out of your lips.
Suggest moving the comma from after measured to after lengthy

Soon enough, you find yourself coming to a climax, quaking and quivering under the duress of your own orgasm as the plant massages you from the inside. Your prick twitches madly, unloading huge, messy arcs of cum despite never being touched. With the radglow teasing your prostate, the orgasm lasts longer than usual, but all you can do is squirm against your restraints and let out muffled, desperate groans while your pink member shoots thick white jets all over your face and chest.
In a paragraph just above this, the radglow laid Steele face-down on the ground. However, this section is written as if Steele is on his back. Suggest revising either this section or the section above to clarify position.
 

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I have some Vermillion bugs:

Talk > The Evermind
“It’s complicated. The Goddess doesn’t dwell with other settlements except if they try to invade the Radwood or if they find some form of ancient technology.
dwell -> deal

Flirt > Lap Ride
“What are you waiting for? I too need to be praised and worshiped,” you grumbles before giving her rod another wank.
grumbles -> grumble (I think this one was already reported in another thread, but including it for the sake of emptying out my own bug log)
Vermillion pants loudly as fresh air brush her stained features and inflate her lungs again
brush -> brushes
Blissful shivers rock your body as you stretch your glistening entrances over her sculpted spear,
entrances > entrance
Without further ado, you align her tip with your prepared passage, gasping and groaning as your inner walls parts the best they can in the hope to welcome her holy greatsword inside her most righteous sheathe.
inner walls parts > part
Without you even realize it, her medial ring slides up your stretched bum in a tornado of blissful sparks.
realize > realizing
 

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Apologies for the double post, but I had another encounter with Vermillion.

All are in Flirt > Prone Bone.

I’ll have to show you how deep Goddess’s love can go,
deep Goddess's -> deep the Goddess's

savoring the vulnerable flesh surfacing from your skin and your curves’ pleasant definition as she closes in with your winking dark star.
in with -> in on
savoring the vulnerable flesh surfacing from your skin -> ??? vulnerable blush surfacing on your skin?

To add insult to injury, her psionic massages continue on, stronger than ever, rippling your average chest, arms,, and legs in fleshy tides matching the ones provoked by her intense, breeding pumps.
Extra comma after arms
Is "breeding" meant to be an adjective describing pumps? If not, suggest removing the comma after "intense"

You’re so close to climax, to let a tsunami of pleasure thrash through your core and annihilate your brain with an explosive, ecstatic firework of mind-breaking sensations.
let -> letting

leaving only an unstoppable, babbling imp in her stead — and a pretty well hung one, at that.
well hung -> well-hung

“The Evermind’s blessing suits you well,” she adds before dropping a wet smooch on your right cheek.”
Extra quotation mark at the end.

Slowly, you up your gear back on with the red priestess’s help, although she spends more time kissing and licking your skin than actually being useful.
up your gear -> put your gear

Thank you!
 

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Thank you!
Got a few more. Forgot Korg'ii Hold was a place I could go.

Glowing Hydra > Fuck
Her gushing members coats your butt with sticky radiance while her clenching tail strokes your member to throbbing fullness.
members coats > member coats (or members coat, forgot if this was both or just one at this specific point)

Alexandra dream 2
“In this day and age, there’s a certainly problem with the high and mighty falling prey to their...vices, shall we say.”
a certainly problem > certainly a problem, or a certain problem

Mirrin training, post-sex
“Nice, niiiice! You’re improving every session, Steele. Hey, maybe a few more years of that, some illegal gene mods and maybe a uhhh, miracle and you might be as good as me, eh?” jokes Mirrin, giving you a hearty pat on the back. It’s almost enough to knock you over !
Extra space before exclamation mark

Mirrin sex, something different
You find you bending over forwards to compensate.
find you > find yourself

Various variations of “punish!” Pop up at an alarming rate,
Pop should be lowercase

Laying green butt bug eggs
You receive all of the female’s sensory signals as well as your own and has you experience the egg laying twice in the same time span.
and has you experience > which has you experiencing

She does eventually settle down however and allows you to continue with her inside you in relative comfort.
allows > allow

The aerial drone deploys what seems to be a hardlight net in order to transport it’s targeted cargo.
it's > its

It’s security checks pass and the thrusters on it’s sides start up as it goes into the air to deliver the eggs.
it's > its x2

Milodan Bruiser, lust loss
Her cock presses into your member,completely engulfing it with the sheer amount of enhanced meat she has.
Space missing before completely

A combination of being so utterly stuffed, her strong, warm grip, and her utterly overwhelming musk makes the whole experience seem greater than the sum of its parts.Although that could just be your pheromone-stained brain talking.
Missing space before "Although"

Your slime-drooling anus squeezes down on her with all your might, but only manages to throw her off for one thrust before she’s back to full swing.Your giant member firesoff in seemingly endless streams, draining your six beachball-sized full balls like they’re attached to a broken faucet.
Missing space after "swing." and in "firesoff"

You can feel her cock swell even larger inside you as her pace becomes beastial.
beastial > bestial

Korg'ii Hold, Dreghan
The walls appear to be smoothed out with great care, with trophies of local wildlife hanging from them with great care.
great care repetition, recast one.

He seems to get agitated as he continues, “cats like to take girls or strong men and use cold to force warmth on them, we not see again... but I do what I can to stop them...”His voice comes through utterly untranslated, catching you off guard.Then he stops for a moment, thinking back to those he’s helped,
Space missing before "His voice", and in "guard.Then"

“Some no come back. Some do . None want for anything but sex...”
Extra space after "Some do"

Deep Throat
His starts to thrust into your face faster, more frantically, your devilish touch driving him wild.
His > He
 

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Just got one more. It's an odd one.

With a massive cock, encounter Essyra, select Fuck her. If vaginal variant is selected, Fuck vag is greyed out with something along the lines of "you need a penis that fits or a vagina and a hardlight dildo" as the hover text.
Only Mutual Masturbation is selectable, but the scene that plays acts as if you do not have a cock at all, until about halfway through.

I'm just pasting the whole thing here. Error text happens throughout.
Sadly without a prick to fuck her with you’re a bit out of luck. Still, it wouldn’t do to leave this lady wanting. Considering the heat coursing through your loins a simple “oh well then” isn’t going to cut it. Luckily the essyra seems to have a pretty good idea of what to do next.

She guides you back towards the fire and nudges you towards a comfortable set of furs before the loss of her body-heat can afford time to give you chill, and you settle your shapely backside down before watching eagerly as the foxy minx makes her move. Her tails shift like a dancer’s veil, revealing and obscuring her nude form in equal measure as she settles to her knees. Her ass looks more heart-shaped than ever when she rolls onto all-fours and presents herself... for a moment you’re worried that she expects you to fuck her without a cock, but she drops down onto her cushiony tits and sinks her face into a fluffy animal rug before sneaking a dainty finger up to her slit. Catching on, you position yourself a little better so that she can see you past her shoulder as you begin to please yourself in tandem.

Her moans and coos are sweet little sounds, and she wiggles her bum from side-to-side while questing digits hunt out the cute little nub of her clit. Increasing slickness wets the insides of soft thighs and a gentle aroma wafts in your direction each time her tails swish enticingly. The pounding of your chest heralds a fresh twitch from your Error: Invalid vagina number (0) passed to vaginaDescript() until juices drip to the soft fur beneath you. She purrs at the sight and spreads her pussy wide with two fingers while her middle diddles her button teasingly, showing off her cunt’s winking depths like a lurid come-hither kiss straight to the womb.

Chewing on your lip, your own explorations intensify as her show grows ever more erotic. Your hands grind their way down your body and towards your Error: Invalid vagina number (0) passed to vaginaDescript(), allowing you to sink a few questing digits into the warm waiting folds. The Essyra purrs in approval as you join in the show, reaching around with her other hand and helping to spread her cute blue pussy wide to add an extra finger to her waiting cunt. The sounds of her self-pleasuring are loud in the cave compared to the sound of the crackling fire pit and your own pounding heartbeat.

Her whimpers join into the exhalations of pleasure and she starts to bounce on her knees, adding the subtle quiver of her ass-cheeks to the masturbatory show. Considering she seems a lot further along than you, your own pace picks up until the rug beneath your Error: Invalid vagina number (0) passed to vaginaDescript() is drenched with tangy juices. It’s a little strange that she remains effectively wordless, but the erotic noises leaking from her with every twitch of the knuckles buried into her cunt is more than enough to keep you going. The scent draws you closer, and you find your body shifting towards her with a few errant hip-jerks, until she’s nearly close enough to touch.

There’s something to be said for being at the very limits of contact while the both of you masturbate your way to orgasmic frenzy, especially in a secluded cave with nothing but the sounds of squishy genitalia being dug into. Your own ardor is so utterly stoked that every plumbing of your fingers into your ERROR, INVALID PUSSY sends heat rocketing into the very core of your body.

Abruptly her erotic display pauses, and she looks over her hips towards you with glistening eyes full of need. It takes a few heartbeats to realize that she’s asking for permission.

She tries not to giggle as you scooch your body closer to hers, although neither of you halt in your masturbatory efforts. Her pussy practically sloshes every time she pumps herself to the knuckles in sensitive cuntflesh, and her thumb never stops its efforts in torturously grinding over the rock-hardness of her clit. By the time you’re close enough to nearly be touching, her heart-shaped ass bounces above your crotch precariously, dripping juices onto your cock.

You work the Essyra’s fountainous juices into your tender flesh while your muscles clamp around your fingers and drive you to the ragged borders of orgasm. For the first time however she lets out a proper cry of ecstasy. So much so that her voice is like a sweet peal of pleasure that reverberates from every icy wall of the cave. That final ringing peal of finishing is enough to send you over the edge — or it nearly is, at least. You don’t actually reach completion until you can feel the nearly scalding-hot juices of the bubblegum foxgirl’s orgasm splashing onto your cock, and beachball-sized testes.

When you finally cum yourself, it’s accompanied by your own high-pitched whimper. Her sticky-sweet girlcum makes for the perfect lube to jill yourself to completion, and you actually manage to spray those beautiful ass-cheeks with girl-cum. Her breath catches in her throat, and her tails fwip around wildly as she soaks in the sensation of you coating her rear. After a few more nerveless twitches she drops onto her side, eyes wide and mouth hanging loosely open. Your own arm is cramping a little at the effort, and you let it drop to your side as you flop over yourself.

The Essyra pushes herself along the floor until her body is pressing up against your own warm flesh. While she gulps down breaths, soaking in the scent of your mixed orgasms until sleep tries to claim the both of you.

You awaken some time later, covered in a thin layer of loose pink hair from your foxen lover... but that’s the only trace she was ever here. The furs are just as you found them and the entrance stands open, letting in a faint chill that the embers of the fire struggle to fight back. You sigh and stand, gathering your discarded possessions. It seems this wasn’t meant to be more than a one-night rendezvous. A shame.

You sigh and let yourself out, back into the frigid embrace of Uveto’s perpetual chill.
 

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With a massive cock, encounter Essyra, select Fuck her. If vaginal variant is selected, Fuck vag is greyed out with something along the lines of "you need a penis that fits or a vagina and a hardlight dildo" as the hover text.
Only Mutual Masturbation is selectable, but the scene that plays acts as if you do not have a cock at all, until about halfway through.

I'm just pasting the whole thing here. Error text happens throughout.
Okay, hopefully fixed for the next release. While the scene gating is correct (have a vagina and no penis, or do not have any penises that fit), the scene itself was looking for a penis that fits. Because it couldn't find one, the text parsing broke. It should now look for the default penis index, but if one isn't set, it'll look for the smallest penis available--so if a penis exists, the scene will pick the penis variant, otherwise it'll use the vagina variant, as intended.
 

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I know I encountered one other phantom vagina bug in one of the egg scenes, but didn't write it down at the time, and had no luck searching for it today. I'll try again another day.

One more batch of typos/style bugs for now.

Strange Egg in inventory, fly somewhere
And every single one of them is closing in you. It’ll feel so good.
in you > in on you

It shambles closer, surrounding everything below your thighs in verdant, slick embrace. Every touch feels like a tongue on your cock. “Ah-amazing!” you scream, letting it wrap around you up to the waist. More! You definitely do!
in verdant > in a verdant
Unclear what "You definitely do" is referring to. Adjust to "You definitely want more"?

Next
Your midriff bulges rounder by the second, heavy with it’s alien cargo.
it's > its

Green Butt Bug, evict unfertilized eggs in public
They quickly cover the floor in their fluids, making wet plopping sounds as each one slips it out of you and splatters onto the already-wet surface below you.
slips it out > slips out

Before you can reach your peak though, the stream of barely--wide-enough eggs stop,
barely--wide-enough > barely-wide-enough
stop > stops
(I think this scene canceled my tentacle beast pregnancy ;-; )

Defeat Sophora > Kill her
Sophora is a spider on your leg that’s crawled up your spine and won’t let go.For what reason does she follow you off Zhèng Shi?
Missing space in "go.For"

But you can’t do it. The stain on your soul from looking right into someone’s eyes before extinguishing the light in them... you can’t do it. Fear grips you in its long, slender fingers. Escalate yes, attack yes, hurt you, yes... but you can’t deny she ever went this far.
"but you can't deny she ever went this far": Implies Sophora did go so far as to kill. Seems to contradict sentence leading up to it. Meant to be "can't say", "she never", or intended?

You both move synchronously up and down Draco’s dick; familiarizing yourselves with its contours and ridges, until its bloats once and rains down yet more precum;
its bloats > it bloats

With every splurt of precum, her balls tense, then relax against you, their weight roiling towards you and their submerging you in their musk.
remove "their" before "submerging"

sucking you up to the shoulder and dousing the rest of you with her cum
sucking you up > sucking you in up

Brynn > Suck It (This was the second encounter, unsure if same on first)
their wide, luscious frames brushing against your masculine hips to ensure that their new-found help doesn’t have an opportunity to make a last-second departure before the stud has been sated.
"new-found" is British English. Suggest changing to "newfound" for US English.

ridge and bulge throbbing in time with the adonis’ powerful heartbeat.
adonis' > adonis's. Exclude s for plural possessives, include s for names ending in s. (This one frequently goes both ways in existing content though so not major.)

Their virile contents churns as you grope the sensitive flesh
churns > churn

You pull away before too long, cupping his balls with a hand in reverence and giving each globe one last final, gentle kiss, to take in the sight of a pair of saliva-shone balls.
Remove either "last" or "final"
 

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Hopefully all fixed for the next release.

(I think this scene canceled my tentacle beast pregnancy ;-; )
If this is an actual issue, feel free to post a separate bug report with as much detail leading up to it and a save file, if possible.

adonis' > adonis's. Exclude s for plural possessives, include s for names ending in s. (This one frequently goes both ways in existing content though so not major.)
Since the word is lowercase, I'm assuming it's referencing the general description of "a handsome man", so I'll leave the s out. If it was capitalize to reference the mythical figure, then the word would be a proper noun, so the s would be "more correct".
 

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Found one in a database entry, this seems like the best place for it. Edit: I looked further into the entry and found some more little ones.
In the Sexes section of the Divrani database entry:
"Sexes: Male and Female. Females become similar to hermaphoridtes when bonded with a radglow plant."
Hermaphrodites is spelled wrong.
Under the Feet & Legs section:
"Feet & Legs: Divrani legs are large and reptilian in shape, with broad, flat paws tipped with three claws."
The bold text should go up to after the colon, but stops after the ampersand.
In the Radglow Bonding section, third sentence of the second paragraph
"Over time, the plant will cause the host’s scales to fuse into a single, fleshy carapace which secrets a fragrant, slick oil."
"secrets" should be "secretes"

So I was doing Bizzy stuff and found some more little typos.
During Bizzy's hyper transformation sequence, last text screen before the sex scene, fifth sentence of third paragraph:
"You subsides into a sensuous sigh again as she fondles herself."
the "You" here should be "She".
Same paragraph, next sentence:
And you saw the viewing figures. This is what my want. This is what my mistress wants. So this is what I want."
"This is what my want" should be "This is what my fans want." or perhaps "This is what my viewers want."
 
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All fixed for the next release.

As a side note, you don't need to spoiler text it as that makes it difficult to copy-paste to search the issues, but quote text is fine.
 

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Last batch from me for now, going to be a bit busy this week.

Vermillion, random bunker encounter
Her body markings burn brighter the moment her delicate fingers touch her veiny prick’s length, followed a few seconds before by a throaty gasp
before > later

Saendra, strapon
It’s a blissful eternity before Saendra’s fully buried inside you, the base of her strapon pressing tight against your ass.Your chest is already heaving, breath coming hot and heavy as your lover fucks herself hilt-deep into your bloated backdoor.
Missing space between sentences.

her firm breasts pressing against yours, kissing trailing across your shoulders
kissing trailing > kisses trailing

Follow Saendra upstairs, knock out pirate guarding door. Hover over Call Girl button.
Maybe you could throw that call girl next store some credits to distract the guards...
next store > next door

Zheng Shi
Vulkriks, he tops
A sudden touch makes you nearly just out of your skin, and you let out an involuntary cry.
just > jump

A gasping moans escapes your lips as your fuckhole widens to accept his monster cock
moans > moan

“Stay with me. Stay with me and I will fuck you like this every night. You will never need to use this tiny prick again. And you’ll never want to.”
Might need a variant here for cocks that are not, in fact, tiny. Either a different adjective, or a conditional line about the cognitive dissonance between his hand unable to fully enclose a dick that's hanging to the floor and the thought of it being called tiny.

Moaning like a holovid whore, every nerve in your body ignites off at once, alive with sensation as Vulriks continues to rail your overstuffed ass.Down below you feel your cock melt, exploding in Vulriks’ hand, painting the side of his counter with your sticky ivory cum.
Missing space between sentences.

Slut Wall, Male Rodent
That’s why your nose is inches away from his backsack, catching faint pheromone signals.
backsack > ballsack
 

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All fixed for the next release.

Sorry, I had meant using the blurry spoiler filter. The collapsing spoiler tags should be fine though.
 

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All fixed for the next release.

Sorry, I had meant using the blurry spoiler filter. The collapsing spoiler tags should be fine though.
What's the BBCode for the collapsing spoilers? I tried to find it, but couldn't, which is why I went with the blurry ones instead.
 

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What's the BBCode for the collapsing spoilers? I tried to find it, but couldn't, which is why I went with the blurry ones instead.
I think it's just "SPOILER" in brackets. The ones you used were "ISPOILER" (which means inline spoilers, I think?). You can also add an equals and a text string to define the spoiler title as well, so something like:
Code:
[SPOILER="Spoiler Title"]Spoiler text here.[/SPOILER]
Spoiler text here.
Hope that helps.
 

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Got it, edited my post to use the collapsing ones, and I'll use them from now on if I find any more of these.

Edit: found some more while doing Syri stuff
During Syri's crewmate sex bet, "Fuck her" option, 17th paragraph (begins with "Oh, fuck."), final sentence.
"Her battered pucker is gently squeezing your cock, practically massaging your dick as your glans out the first thick glob of pre into your submissive little ausar slut’s bowels."
Should be "glans puts out", or depending on player production, "dribbles out", "squirts out", "shoots out" etc...
 
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During Syri's crewmate sex bet, "Fuck her" option, 17th paragraph (begins with "Oh, fuck."), final sentence.
"Her battered pucker is gently squeezing your cock, practically massaging your dick as your glans out the first thick glob of pre into your submissive little ausar slut’s bowels."
Should be "glans puts out", or depending on player production, "dribbles out", "squirts out", "shoots out" etc...
Fixed for the next release.
 

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Overtime over, made a new file, time for bugs
(And thank you for clarifying about the tags earlier! I wasn't sure and didn't want to make your job any harder.)

Height
The doctor asks “So, you’re going to have a male child, then? Very well. How tall should he grow up to be? Please, give it in Imperial inches.”
Add comma after "asks"

Sexual Gift
“What’s this?” The mining magnate asks, looking downward. “...A list of specialized treatments?”
Lowercase "The"

Upbringing
An austere upbringing would certainly result in a strong will, but less of a financial, helping hand. It would be tough on both of them, but it might just pay off.
"helping hand" is a compound noun, thus a comma is not needed after "financial"
The Will
The projector kicks on and your Dad’s face appears.
Lowercase "Dad's" as it is not replacing a proper noun

One has my personal, encrypted key. With that, you can open my deposit box in the bank I own on this station and take control of my company,” Even projected through the soulless holoprojector, your dad’s spirit shines through his tear-misted eyes. “I’m sure you’ll make me proud out there.”
Change comma after "company" to period

Zeke
Still, new engines don’t make it look any less like a elderly rim-jockey’s heap.
a eldery > an elderly
 

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Adventures in FIRST-14!

First Landing Pad tile after getting off ship
Bizarre, acid-etched pits marr the ground around it,
marr > mar

Access Corridor
This corridor leads north, toward a distance intersection, and south, to an eastward bend.
distance > distant
Lion Kaithrit Salvager, lust loss
His suit’s fastener splits wide open, unbinding the cum-drenched length of his nub-covered, cat-like pole dangle heavily a few inches away.
unbinding > letting, or add "and letting it" after "cat-like pole"

You’re just happy all the stories were true — that out on the rim, no matter how intense the battle, conflicts invariable boil down to the wet slap of genitals, mouths, and hands in frenetic copulation.
invariable > invariably

Lion Kaithrit Salvager, health loss
It’s a good thing he has you on the ground, perfectly positioned to slide that slab into your thirsty mouth
Missing period at the end of this sentence
Tiger Kaithrit Salvager, health loss
murky and intriguing with notes of cedar and faintest, most tantalizing whiff of smoky tang.
Add "the" before "faintest"

If you weren’t watching his nubby prick to engorge to its entire, 20-inch length
Remove "to" before "engorge"

It’s path leaves a glossy streak along his underside,
It's > Its

His meaty hand claps between your thighs rubbing suggestively.
Add comma after "thighs"

You hardly need the command. It hardly takes any effort to position for yourself for claiming, in spite of your injuries.
Suggest nipping repetition of "hardly". Replace one with "barely" or similar, or replace the first with "don't".
Remove "for" in "position for yourself"

The sound of cum splattering on the floor is the first sign that you’ve been filled to capacity — or at least filled as much as his impectly sealed tool would allow.
impectly > imperfectly??

Tiger Kaithrit Salvager, victory
“You can... have me if you want me.” His flexing pecs glisten
Missing period at the end of this sentence

Fuck his ass
“Roll over, and I’ll give your ass all the dick it could ever want,” you suggestively purr, whipping out and stroking your member, knowing that the meat you’re packing should be just right for the big boy’s ass.

The tiger doesn’t argue. He rolls over and does exactly as he is bid, displaying not just two shiny half moons, but his fluffy sack and drippy, clear-coated pride. The nubs glisten faintly in the station’s dim lighting, but you’re not interested in that prize. Your goal is higher: the pucker buried between those muscular glutes. The felid saves you the effort of pulling them apart with a single, awesome flex of his muscles, literally opening up his asshole for inspection without having to lift a single clawed digit.

Perfect.

Ignoring his happy mews, you release the tiger’s testes and put your hands back where they belong: at your base, angling your crown toward the dark hole at the center of his galaxy.
"release the tiger's testes" but no text describing grabbing his testes so far

Yes, it beckons you in, it’s snug seal always ready to inhale another inch, but the raw ripeness of his derriere isn’t just cushion for you to push on - it’s an instrument of kinetic expression, keeping you in constant motion.
it's snug > its snug
Add "a" before "cushion"

It’s a sweaty mess of convulsing muscles and freely spurting fluids cascades across your feet.
fluids cascades > fluids that cascade
 

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Made it a whole six tiles since yesterday.

Single tile in FIRST-14:
Green Line Tunnel, bottom-right tile
Obvious squares of darker pigment on the walls of this passage indicate where posters once hanged.
hanged > hung
"hanged" is primarily used for the method of execution.

Simple, Finger Butt
Your gear quickly finds itself thrown into an assorted pile of all manner of equipment, item after item being discarded to a soundtrack comprising of clattering metal and hollow thunks; your dress clothes finds itself added to the pile at a rapid pace, closely followed by your undershirt and your plain briefs.
Plural/singular disagreement with "dress clothes finds itself" clothing tag.
comprising of > comprised of. Or, remove "of". "Comprising" on its own is equivalent to "comprised of". Of note, while technically correct, this is more used in technical or scientific writing and may be (incorrectly) assumed as wrong in creative writing. First option may be safer.

All that attention to your prostate triggers your meaty member to usher forth their own proof of your pleasure, though only a single weak spurt of cum escapes your cock-head.
Plural/singular disagreement with "meaty member to usher forth their"

Toys, PuppyKit Dildo
The line between teasing preparation and full of penetration is crossed without much intent from you.
full of > full on

It teases and tempts, coaxing you into faster thrusts, forcing whorish-sounding gasps from your pencil-thin lips that seems increasingly less important with every stroke.
seems > seem, if in reference to the gasps?
Gryvain Techie, lust loss, refuse
Eyes finally rolling back, you experience a mini spasm as her slowly-emptying loins weigh you down with a whole week’s worth of liquid passion, unloading enough sperm to gift you attractively round figure...
Add "an" before "attractively round"

Gryvain Techie, victory, ride her, cum inside
But in the end, you’re not much better: your own cock escalate from flopping half-limp on her belly to a drooling mess in the blink of an eye;
Plural/singular disagreement in "your own cock escalate from"

Pretty good chance she’s not kidding about a daughter coming from this union. Too late for second thoughts now.
This was anal on a Steele with no vagina, and there was no mention of a daughter coming from this union up to this point. (Interesting flavor text though, but probably unintended.)
Tiger Kaithrit Salvager, lust loss
it would hurt almost as much as a dagger to the heart, condemning you to a hellish ‘bout of lonely masturbation.
Remove apostrophe before "bout"

“Fuck! ‘Suit’s too tight!”
Remove apostrophe before "Suit's"

It bursts free of its wrappings and slithers into view like a hungry python, fatter and harder with every passing second, arching up toward the ceiling with the unstoppable might of its master rousing need to rut.
its master > its master's

If you go any more limp at the feeling of his cum saturating your backdoor, you would.
you go > you could go
 

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T1-K4 or "TIKA" first encounter
She gestures towards one of the cots in front of her, adding helpfully “My behavioral protocols have been altered or damaged so that I am compelled to provide free medical care to anyone that asks, so, feel free to come back and ask if you get hurt out there. I’ll do my best to help!
Add comma after "helpfully"

Medical Office
The mining facility’s medical office is a small affair, dominated by T1-K4’s dock on the far wall and a couple of canvas cots for her patients to lie on, close enough to be in easy reach of the stationary medical ‘bot.
Remove apostrophe before "bot"

Tavros
Mi Amour, first entry
From the outside this store, “Mi Amour” appears to be the prototypical lingerie shop.
Add "of" after "outside", or remove "the" before "outside"

Doctor, first visit. Full health, select Buy, buy something.
As you put your dress clothes back on, you stretch your body and tell the diligent doctor that you’ve never felt better. She cups your face and strokes your hair in a friendly manner, bringing you nearer to her distractingly warm breast.

“I’m glad, Baron. It’s unlikely that you will emerge unscathed from wherever your path takes you, so take care of yourself. Should you need medical attention, please come see me again. I will do everything I can to help you.” The shrewd physician’s hands intertwine at her waist, both tantalizing tails swishing rhythmically behind her thick waist.

You reach for a credit chit and offer it to Bianca for services rendered, but she raises her hand to stop you, shaking her head gingerly. “Since this was your first checkup, it’s free, Baron.”

Dr. Ketria’s position is immovable despite your polite perseverance. The fluffy-tailed woman gives you a tiny nod and an ear-cradled wink as you reluctantly pocket the chit again, thanking you instead for your consideration.

Before you leave, the bespectacled caregiver presents a tablet with an orange screen to you. “Would you like to purchase any supplies before leaving? Most of my supply is run-of-them-mill medicine and low-grade painkillers, but for the rushers I have some bespoke aid kits that will make the difference if you find yourself in danger.”

The screen shows a few mundane items for sale at a low enough cost, the kind of things you’d find in a household cabinet. What you might be interested is further down the list.
This one was a bit odd. Steele was fully healthy so the checkup option was unselectable. I selected "Buy" and bought something, then this scene plays as if I had just finished a checkup with Bianca asking me to buy something.
Also, add "in" after "interested"

Help Penny with Zil problem, fuck Zil
In the second that you eyes wander away from your black-chitined lover, you glance at the form of Penny, crouched on a nearby bench.
you eyes > your eyes

Dryad, Get Reamed
You brace yourself against a nearby tree as she slams her front hooves into the trunk above your head, her cock slapping your bottom as she eagerly maneuvers into a position to mount you.Your grip on the tree tightens as you feel her flared tip at the entrance to your soaked asshole, groaning at the feeling of your ring slowly swallowing her head, aided by the drool of pre into your ass.
Missing space between sentences

Male Zil, lust loss
Your once foe and soon-to-be lover flutters over to you with a curious smile on his string, black-eyed visage.
string > strange or strong

The zil’s wonderfully thick tool bounces in and out with such rapidity that you find yourself climbing towards the edge of climax before you know it, your legs quivers dramatically as you get off on being used.
legs quivers > legs quiver

After-hours Kelly, flirt, oral her
With a single graceful motion she springs atop it, momentarily posing with one legs outstretched to help show off her haunches, then curling her legs so that she is kneeling before the edge.
one legs > one leg

Blow her
Her lower shaft bumps against your neck, smearing her honeyed-pre with each bop.
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honeyed-pre > honeyed pre, or honey-pre