typos and etc

[XBoxMaster131]

guess whooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space and maybe also remove the h and add a comma in front

 

[XBoxMaster131]

dunno what the bracket is doing there.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe remove the comma

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space(es?)

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe change to pulled

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "this"

 

[Gedan]

Cleared to here.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to begin

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe change to these

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe chage "the" to "a", as theres no mention of the building prior which leaves some gaps, if you get my drift.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

quotes and itlaics missing here

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to upbringing

 

[XBoxMaster131]

extra space

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space, though i have been doing some editing with the json file, and for some reason it doesnt show up in some other saves...... idk, figured id report it just to be safe.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe replace "pumps" with "pipes" and "could" with "can"

 

[Theron]

Jumper Interceptor: Get Paid

The numbers light up, flashing green on your display. Probably stolen. ERROR: COULD NOT FIND ATTRIBUTE "isKind" FOR OBJ "pc"

 

[Gedan]

Cleared to here.

 

[Theron]

Then you lean forward and press your permanently puckered lips against his in an aggressive kiss.The poor kitty is surprised at first, but soon enough, he kisses you back with eagerness.

Your soccerball-sized breasts presses into the naleen’s toned front

Between your hind legs, you can feel your cunts are completely wet and drips continually

Should have a '.' and the end, too.

Paige follows you to the door of her unit. Before you leave, she spins you around and gives you a quick kiss on your lips. “See you later,” she teases whilst sauntering off and disappearing around the corridor of your ship.

This isn't updated for post-recruitment. Probably easiest to sub 'quarters' for 'unit'.

You land a hit on the sex bot with your electrified shock blade! Critical hit!
Critical hit! There is a concussive boom and tingling aftershock of energy as the sex bot’s shield is breached. The attack continues on to connect with the sex bot!

Critical hit notice prints out twice.

Automappers
If LIDAR is capitalized, RADAR probably should be, too. They're both acronyms.
(Light Detection and Ranging vs Radio Detection and Ranging)

 

[Gedan]

Fixed everything but the critical hit notification. Whilst looking into it, I realised it's going to be a big pile of SPAGHET to untangle because of what's gone on, so fixing it is going to require juggling a few bits and pieces around. I'm going to use it as an opportunity to formalize and clean up some weirdness we have with the combat system internally but it'll take a while to land whilst I figure out the best size fork to untangle the noodles.