typos and etc

[XBoxMaster131]

guess whooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space and maybe also remove the h and add a comma in front

 

[XBoxMaster131]

dunno what the bracket is doing there.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe remove the comma

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space

 

[XBoxMaster131]

missing space(es?)

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe change to pulled

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "this"

 

[Gedan]

Cleared to here.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to begin

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe change to these

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe chage "the" to "a", as theres no mention of the building prior which leaves some gaps, if you get my drift.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

quotes and itlaics missing here

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to upbringing

 

[XBoxMaster131]

extra space