Typos and Etc

[XBoxMaster131]

i think this part may have been some kind of oversight, idk. maybe hit up the author to check

 

[XBoxMaster131]

contrary to the dialouge, theres no option to just leave after beating the nuka rancher.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

maybe change to "zipped down" just to make it more clear

 

[Madam Materia]

My thread gotclosed. Not cool enough I s'pose, so back to leeching off the XBox!

Milk Thief, tail fucking scene, selected to breastfeed. This sentence here: Think it's supposed to be "got to" or "gotta" breed her, properly!

 

[Madam Materia]

Post combat, tail sex with Ganger. Probably supposed to be "The looks you receive are less flattering:"

 

[Madam Materia]

"Softb" in Eloise's sex scene for being her girlfriend and topping her. Not sure if relevant I picked goth outfit.

 

[Madam Materia]

Typos for the typo god! Should be "not sure if Anno". In the Anno and Syri at Mi Amour.

 

[Madam Materia]

Asking Quaelle about herself. She has an odd speech pattern, so it's hard to work out, but I think this part there's a "be" missing.

 

[Madam Materia]

Another character with odd vocal patterns, but I think this is supposed to be "thought" rather than "though".

 

[Theron]

The captain’s mutated form rapidly recovers from damage, knitting closed fresh wounds with newly-sprouted tentacles! (H: +12)

The dialogue box has an empty line at the bottom.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

no idea why this is cut off. is there meant to be something else?

 

[XBoxMaster131]

im not sure what this is meant to signify, as it shows up even after recruiting syri. maybe some kind of holdover or whatever, idk. regardless, if left as is, its a fair bit confusing, and makes you think your save is borked somehow

 

[XBoxMaster131]

change to "a pirate, or a killer... I didn't see anything"

also, missing space after the ellipses 3 paragraphs up

 

[XBoxMaster131]

thought id slap this here cuz why not

dammit, sorry, lost track of this one.

well, to be honest, after going over it again really the only thing that stands out is that you can just waltz into cherris room right off the bat with no buildup or anything. maybe i just glanced over something but i feel like there mnay have been some kind of oversight from that. sorry if im wasting your time.