Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[Jarylan]

Also bringing attention to this one, as a couple paragraphs down, it refers to Selarith's gravid tummy, but here she has a six pack.

When it’s almost done, you haul yourself up off her wilting rod, unleashing a flood of steaming dragon-spunk that splashes down all over her six pack and thick thighs from your gaping hole...

 

[Jarylan]

More Selarith. Certain that this should be rump, not bump.

Her hips don’t stop moving just because you’re tied, but rather keep desperately humping at your up-raised bump as her fat dick spurts and spurts. “Yeeeess!”

 

[Jarylan]

Just after sexing Selarith. We're missing some punctuation here, just after "other".

Sela’s cheeks color, but she rests a hand on her stomach and slaps your ass with the other

 

[Jacques00]

Hopefully all fixed for the next release, up to this point.

The new Clydesdale K7 art is pretty. Unfortunately, it's also backwards, based on all the text.

There were discussions on this with the team. I will eventually revise the ship images to better match how the director wants ships to face and the correct direction of the texts, where I can.

Another one, picture included this time. While it might be intended as an affect if her speech, the random "i" being bolded in delightful could be an error, so I report it.

This one seems to be intentional--it is illustrating the emphasized inflections with that stylization.

 

[Jarylan]

Okay, been noticing it forever, so time I finally brought it up. Why do Black Void goons enter battle with less than max shields? Is their maximum just set wrong?

It's always weird getting into battle with these guys and they look partially damaged from the get go.

 

[Jarylan]

During the Mount Up scene with the huskar twins. Just noticed this error in Anno's dialogue. The second "get" should be "give".

Don’t worry, I’ll make sure these two sluts get as good as they get.

 

[Jarylan]

Sophora's first combat can be outside of Zheng Shi station. Screenshot here of me first running into her on Dhaal. This wouldn't be that weird, except the dialogue makes reference to "this station". Other parts of dialogue also seem to indicate this battle should only take place on Zheng Shi.

So, either the text needs to be made more general and less Zheng Shi specific, or your first encounter with her needs to be locked to Zheng Shi.

 

[Theron]

You’re mane is now feathery!

You’re a little overeager, you realize, but Paige is a tough girl, and, knowing her, she’d probably like i.

 

[Jarylan]

Domming the LDC's bunny butt and found this. An extra period snuck in.

Who are you to deny them that?.

 

[Jarylan]

Still domming LDC, I could be wrong, but pretty sure this should be tool, not pool.

The ecstasy of release is there, but his balls do more than churn, they pump, and they’re pumping his pool with industrial strength and entirely useless loads of rabbit-jizz that concuss the bulkhead of the ship you’re standing in.

 

[Jarylan]

Decided to side with Brightwater this time, and when confronting Mashall Zau and Carver, noticed this sentence, which needs capitalization.


“she’s a little biased,” you say, directing your attention to the computerized face. “And who might you be?”

 

[Jarylan]

Also, in the vault of Paragon's research facility, I found the external toxin pump. Since that is manufactured by Brightwater, shouldn't I find the L.U.C.K. here instead?

I'm reasonably sure you find the toxin pump in Brightwater's dungeon as well? Come to think of it, I type I found the LUCK in Utopian Skies dungeon last time.

Not sure what exactly is supposed to be where, but it might be worth checking to be sure each dungeon has the appropriate item. (Not that it matters much overall now that we can trade them in Gabtown.)

 

[Jarylan]

Concsentacles during Azra's Myrellion expedition. Pretty sure this should be "you're".

“J-Jarylan, you really worked up!”

Later in the same scene, missing space.

Your body quivers with extreme ecstasy as yourleaky inhuman cunt goes off.

 

[Jarylan]

Talking to Azra about being her stud. This should either be "you mean" or "you've meant".

You’ve mean so much to me, Jarylan.

Same scene, the quote mark needs to be moved back.

Is this like marriage? “Is there some sort of ceremony to go through?”

 

[Jarylan]

Asking Azra about divorce. (Didn't want to, but gotta check for errors everywhere.) Should be "surprising".

Azra regards you with surprisingly respect

Same section, dialogue here is missing italics, and I think this quote should be moved to the other side of the space, next to the b in but.

” but most suula fall deeply in love with their stud. So deeply that they might come to miss them after the process is complete. Those few individuals who love each other wildly yet have the violent chemistry of sodium and water would be a drain on the system the rest of us rely on, so this safeguard was established. Would you believe it actually predates joining the UGC?”

 

[razor777]

 

[Jarylan]

Minor error here. Easiest switch is to "the", but a parser command or other such technical wizardry could return either your or (pronoun)'s attack I suppose.

Azra takes a punch at the grinning naleen. The naleen slides out of the way of your attack, serpentine body coiling upon itself with serpentine speed.

 

[razor777]

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

replace this period in the scales of color item description with a comma

 

[Jacques00]

Mostly fixed for the next release, up to this point.

Also, in the vault of Paragon's research facility, I found the external toxin pump. Since that is manufactured by Brightwater, shouldn't I find the L.U.C.K. here instead?

I'm reasonably sure you find the toxin pump in Brightwater's dungeon as well? Come to think of it, I type I found the LUCK in Utopian Skies dungeon last time.

Not sure what exactly is supposed to be where, but it might be worth checking to be sure each dungeon has the appropriate item. (Not that it matters much overall now that we can trade them in Gabtown.)

This is currently being verified as to see what the intent was. If basing the information off the wiki, it could be unintentionally incorrect.

Is this like marriage? “Is there some sort of ceremony to go through?”

The is intentional. The first italicized sentence is an internal thought, whereas the quoted sentence is the spoken dialogue.

 

[Theron]

The vibrating hardlight cocks lodged into your depths are starting to drive you mad with lust. Soft moans occasionally escape your lips, turning the heads of passersby towards you and turning you further on

Missing '.'

Your hard clit shrink rapidly, dwindling down to almost half their old size before they finishes absorbing the ReductPro.

You have no idea how she can move with such elevated platforms on — they must be at least 6“ at least! Her balance must be completely out of wack, especially in such a snug, skin-hugging blouse.

Italics bleed.

 

[Jarylan]

Another issue with Zhat Zhing sadly. Technically more of a parser issue that once again falls under the author's fault due to lack of familiarity with the system. [pc.vaginaNoun] was used as I thought it would randomly output pussy, cunt, twat, etc. However it is more specific than that, and since I can't seem to find a parser tag that just outputs a random synonym for vagina, we're best off replacing the old parser tag with just "pussy".

Where your old familiar pussy was, you have something new and alien to you. At first glance it reminds you of a feline leithan pussy, with understated and nearly invisible lips presented to the world. Never one to be satisfied with a surface level examination though, you slide a padded paw down and use your fingers to spread your outer lips gently.

And a bit further down, same issue, same tag, same solution, I think.

It takes only a few heartbeats for everything to reboot and come back online, and you find yourself slumped on the ground, your fingers stuffed deep in your still quivering mare-pussy. Carefully, you extract your hand - still covered utterly in girl-cum. Quickly, you stand back up, trying to put yourself in some sort of order. You can hardly wait to have a better chance to really give this new anatomy a test drive if that’s what the very first touch is like! You now have a soft, silky yinglet vagina.