Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[Jarylan]

Also bringing attention to this one, as a couple paragraphs down, it refers to Selarith's gravid tummy, but here she has a six pack.

When it’s almost done, you haul yourself up off her wilting rod, unleashing a flood of steaming dragon-spunk that splashes down all over her six pack and thick thighs from your gaping hole...

 

[Jarylan]

More Selarith. Certain that this should be rump, not bump.

Her hips don’t stop moving just because you’re tied, but rather keep desperately humping at your up-raised bump as her fat dick spurts and spurts. “Yeeeess!”

 

[Jarylan]

Just after sexing Selarith. We're missing some punctuation here, just after "other".

Sela’s cheeks color, but she rests a hand on her stomach and slaps your ass with the other

 

[Jacques00]

Hopefully all fixed for the next release, up to this point.

The new Clydesdale K7 art is pretty. Unfortunately, it's also backwards, based on all the text.

There were discussions on this with the team. I will eventually revise the ship images to better match how the director wants ships to face and the correct direction of the texts, where I can.

Another one, picture included this time. While it might be intended as an affect if her speech, the random "i" being bolded in delightful could be an error, so I report it.

This one seems to be intentional--it is illustrating the emphasized inflections with that stylization.