Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

Jarylan

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Also bringing attention to this one, as a couple paragraphs down, it refers to Selarith's gravid tummy, but here she has a six pack.

When it’s almost done, you haul yourself up off her wilting rod, unleashing a flood of steaming dragon-spunk that splashes down all over her six pack and thick thighs from your gaping hole...
 

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More Selarith. Certain that this should be rump, not bump.

Her hips don’t stop moving just because you’re tied, but rather keep desperately humping at your up-raised bump as her fat dick spurts and spurts. “Yeeeess!”
 

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Just after sexing Selarith. We're missing some punctuation here, just after "other".

Sela’s cheeks color, but she rests a hand on her stomach and slaps your ass with the other