Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[Jarylan]

Also bringing attention to this one, as a couple paragraphs down, it refers to Selarith's gravid tummy, but here she has a six pack.

When it’s almost done, you haul yourself up off her wilting rod, unleashing a flood of steaming dragon-spunk that splashes down all over her six pack and thick thighs from your gaping hole...

 

[Jarylan]

More Selarith. Certain that this should be rump, not bump.

Her hips don’t stop moving just because you’re tied, but rather keep desperately humping at your up-raised bump as her fat dick spurts and spurts. “Yeeeess!”

 

[Jarylan]

Just after sexing Selarith. We're missing some punctuation here, just after "other".

Sela’s cheeks color, but she rests a hand on her stomach and slaps your ass with the other

 

[Jacques00]

Hopefully all fixed for the next release, up to this point.

The new Clydesdale K7 art is pretty. Unfortunately, it's also backwards, based on all the text.

There were discussions on this with the team. I will eventually revise the ship images to better match how the director wants ships to face and the correct direction of the texts, where I can.

Another one, picture included this time. While it might be intended as an affect if her speech, the random "i" being bolded in delightful could be an error, so I report it.

This one seems to be intentional--it is illustrating the emphasized inflections with that stylization.

 

[Jarylan]

Okay, been noticing it forever, so time I finally brought it up. Why do Black Void goons enter battle with less than max shields? Is their maximum just set wrong?

It's always weird getting into battle with these guys and they look partially damaged from the get go.

 

[Jarylan]

During the Mount Up scene with the huskar twins. Just noticed this error in Anno's dialogue. The second "get" should be "give".

Don’t worry, I’ll make sure these two sluts get as good as they get.

 

[Jarylan]

Sophora's first combat can be outside of Zheng Shi station. Screenshot here of me first running into her on Dhaal. This wouldn't be that weird, except the dialogue makes reference to "this station". Other parts of dialogue also seem to indicate this battle should only take place on Zheng Shi.

So, either the text needs to be made more general and less Zheng Shi specific, or your first encounter with her needs to be locked to Zheng Shi.

 

[Theron]

You’re mane is now feathery!

You’re a little overeager, you realize, but Paige is a tough girl, and, knowing her, she’d probably like i.

 

[Jarylan]

Domming the LDC's bunny butt and found this. An extra period snuck in.

Who are you to deny them that?.

 

[Jarylan]

Still domming LDC, I could be wrong, but pretty sure this should be tool, not pool.

The ecstasy of release is there, but his balls do more than churn, they pump, and they’re pumping his pool with industrial strength and entirely useless loads of rabbit-jizz that concuss the bulkhead of the ship you’re standing in.

 

[Jarylan]

Decided to side with Brightwater this time, and when confronting Mashall Zau and Carver, noticed this sentence, which needs capitalization.


“she’s a little biased,” you say, directing your attention to the computerized face. “And who might you be?”

 

[Jarylan]

Also, in the vault of Paragon's research facility, I found the external toxin pump. Since that is manufactured by Brightwater, shouldn't I find the L.U.C.K. here instead?

I'm reasonably sure you find the toxin pump in Brightwater's dungeon as well? Come to think of it, I type I found the LUCK in Utopian Skies dungeon last time.

Not sure what exactly is supposed to be where, but it might be worth checking to be sure each dungeon has the appropriate item. (Not that it matters much overall now that we can trade them in Gabtown.)