Hello Dark Cookie, after playing this and the last couple of demos, I can honestly say that I am very excited for this game. The gameplay is obviously not complete so I won’t judge it on that regard, but the artwork is very good and it looks like it’s just getting better!
Now gushing aside, I have a couple of ideas/questions for you that I hope you will consider:
1. 1. May I suggest modifying the hair color/style of several of the female characters? Most are brunette, and have the same shoulder length hair. Maybe throw in another redhead or blonde color with some having pigtails or a braid?
2. 2. All the people seems to have shaved pubic areas. While I suppose the modern woman under 35 could certainly be shaving themselves bare, I don’t see the male PC doing so (and I suppose neither would some teenage girls like say, Judith). I’m not saying they should have a hairy monster between their legs, but some should at least have say, a landing strip/pyramid (as they become involved with the PC, the complete shaving could commence). Ultimately, not a huge problem, but a distracting one (for me).
3. The unisex Locker Room idea is infeasible at best, a lawsuit-waiting-to-happen at worst. I realize the current introduction scene to Judith and Annie needs the setup, but I think you need to modify things a bit to be more realistic. If I may suggest the classic “bullied male nerd gets tossed into the female locker room” scenario? For example:
Scenario 1
The PC goes into the locker room after the unpleasant encounter with Dexter and Roxxy. Dexter, angry at the disrespect shown him in front of Roxxy, decides to cause a little embarrassment to the PC. As the PC is removing his clothes and about to put on his short, Dexter pushes him into the lockers, disorienting the PC. Grabbing him by the arms (perhaps with the help of another bully), Dexter carries the PC to the female locker room and as a final insult, pulls down the PC’s underwear before taking it and escaping back across the hall. The female locker room is shocked by the appearance of the boy in their midst and let out several scared shrieks. The PC, still dazed, sees the girl flesh before him and reacts naturally, surprising the girls by his member’s length and width. Meanwhile, Annie, attracted by the sound, begins to approach the locker room entrance from inside the locker room, but the PC is hidden by the locker rows. Judith (clad in a towel), a friend of the PC, grabs him and maneuvers him so that the PC is hidden behind her. Annie comes out and asks what happened. The girls surprisingly don’t rat out the PC and don’t tell Annie. While she goes around the room asking what happened, the PC, still a bit dazed and visibly horny is pressed up against Judith’s backside. Without meaning to he begins rubbing up against her. After Annie leaves, Judith stops the PC and gives him her towel so that he could escape back to the Boy’s Locker room, thus giving us her first nude shot. The PC escapes back into the other locker room and quickly dresses.
I suggested the above to give the following two scenarios that lead from that encounter:
Scenario 2
After gym class, the PC finds Judith crying under the bleachers about how Annie stole her bra and underwear as punishment for helping the PC out and not telling her about a boy in the locker room. The PC can comfort Judith, complimenting her on her “assets” and how she shouldn’t be ashamed of “swinging free”. This will lead to a revenge situation, where eventually the PC is able to blackmail Annie into inserting a vibrator into her pussy which is remote controlled, and gives the remote to Judith. Every time Annie is vicious or cruel to someone else, the PC or Judith can buzz her. I’m hoping that eventually this will lead to Annie becoming a kinder person.
Scenario 3
The next scenario involves Dexter and Roxxy. Dexter, while gifted with an athletic body, is unfortunately rather lacking in the penile department, having a member only 1-2 inches big. He also has some submissive tendencies, as Roxxy discovered. After their first sexual encounter was cut short once she saw how small he was, Roxxy turned the tables on who was the dominant, and took control of the relationship (at least in private). In other words, since Roxxy wasn’t getting fucked, she decided someone had to be and regularly fucked Dexter up the ass. The PC, searching for a way to get back at Dexter, is inadvertently a witness to one of these encounters (location undetermined): where Roxxy, angry at Dexter’s stupidity at throwing the PC into the locker room and horny from witnessing the PC’s large erect dick - forces Dexter to drop trou, bend over, and then proceeds to ream him with a rather large dildo. The PC records this on his cell phone and thus has blackmail material over both. In an optional M/M series of events, the PC can at first blackmail, and then “conquer” Dexter into becoming a willing sexual partner. Either way has Dexter stop being a bully to the PC. As for the Roxxy part, I suggest the PC working as a poolboy at Roxxy’s place and that allows him to seduce her.
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4. While it appears that many fetishes are listed, alas my personal favorite of anal (female receiving) is not. I realize this may be a bit much to ask, but could that be the added in? Perhaps as a final tier of relationship status, or if the woman in question is particularly kinky (something tells me that Principal Smith is a bit of a freak)?
Anyway, once again, great job with this, and I’m eagerly looking forward to the next version!