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Discussion in 'Event Submissions' started by Linarahn, Sep 10, 2018.
See? Ungodly mess!
That is fucking horrifing
I think it's kinda sexy.
I find it cool myself.
Food for thought, more sneky goodness
I mean, the literal snake tongue is kinda cool (but maybe that's just me finding ball pythons cute) but the rest? Aww HELL NAW.
The mouth-tail on that image is actually really neat.
I guess I can accomodate that, should I get the chance to do that other TF I mentioned earlier in this thread, for tail genitalia. Small chance that instead of a snake pussy, you'd end up with an actual snake at the end of your tail, like a traditional chimera but its mouth is then like a pussy, maybe? Or it gets a lewd ovi-tongue or something....
AGH, I BLAME ALL OF YOU!
Will there be a chance of having a ribbed throat?
If I were to do that, I should probably wait until Wsan gets their specialized TF out the door (though waiting will have to happen either way, really). Otherwise, maybe Wsan is forthcoming enough to put it into their own TF? You should ask!
As Wsan's SnakeBytes are out now, ribbed throats from this will be pointless!
That aside, there's still plenty of time until I hear back I think, so I'll give the doc another poke and see if I can't improve on the writing or whether i dun goof'd somewhere.
Make the chimera tail have a ribbed throat too.
There's no chimera tail in this TF. Although I might mess with the cunttail condition in the next few days and turn it into a chimera snaketail instead after all. Add some crazy lewd to the otherwise benign TF~
It's good writing, but doesn't fit the lore from the slyveren codex!
It's a female only race, purposefully adapted from an original, unknown, reptilian race to be as sexy as possible. This is why they have legs, huge tits, and puffy lips. The tf item should reflect this. Also slyverens lay eggs regularly, there is already an oviposition perk you can use.
The racial label should preferably be slyveren rather than snake-morph.
Well, it was never meant to be a pure Slyveren TF. The fact that it can return Slyveren if certain conditions are met is more for flavoring than anything (though I probably should increase the breast range). I'm gonna give the Slyveren codex another read and make adjustments to the return conditions as necessary. After all, just because this TF reduces chest size doesn't mean you can't re-add it with something like boobswell.