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Psssst Hey B here's somethings I found for you for inspiration for your animal-demon hellhound character
Couldn't figure a way to show just the image/video for this one so unfortunately I had to link it sorry B
https://twitter.com/kanachirou/status/1276900240868737025
Couldn't figure a way to show just the image/video for this one so unfortunately I had to link it sorry B
https://twitter.com/kanachirou/status/1276900240868737025
: pencil::eyes:Psssst Hey B here's somethings I found for you for inspiration for your animal-demonhellhound character
Couldn't figure a way to show just the image/video for this one so unfortunately I had to link it sorry B
https://twitter.com/kanachirou/status/1276900240868737025
Merry Christmas B!
Yes I am aware this is early, but I couldn't resist making the joke
I could write something cuter
Damn this makes we want a cute and wholesome hellhound waifu like a certain foxy slut wifeMerry Christmas B!
Yes I am aware this is early, but I couldn't resist making the joke
Hello! I am here to announce and reveal my next CoC2 project!
Introducing: Lyric the Kobold!
- Lyric is a kobold! And not the rat-nosed, dirty, diseased, chittering little bastard thieves from D&D - they're the fun kind of kobold, with the cute button noses, big, round eyes, and hips that clap like thunder with every step
- Lyric is gender-selectable! Do you want a girlbold that, because of her size, will always be tight as a nun? Or are you starved for some male content and have Lyric be a boibold, that's always eager and willing to step up to the challenge of pleasing his larger superior? Either way, Lyric's only sexual preference is for you: you can have the gayest kobold in the world if you want.
- The primary fetishes being appealed are size difference; enormous asses; dom/sub, with, in a rare change, the PC being the dom; and lots of hero worship. As soon as you rescue Lyric, they are willing to do anything - anything - for you.
- I didn't intend for Lyric to be a companion, but, Lyric is small enough to take up inventory in your pack, and they'll be able to travel around with you that way. There's also some plans for Lyric to be usable in battle, although that's still a ways off.
- There's an Easter egg if you choose not to revive Lyric and keep a frozen kobold in your backpack until you finish the game.
The document is currently 10,500 words large, and includes their intro; most of their talking topics (there's one more that still needs doing); and two sex scenes, both of them are Lyric going down on the PC based on the PC's sexual equipment.
Lyric is one piece of content that I've been looking forward to write for some time. There's a lot of content still planned for them coming up; I hope you enjoy them as much as I enjoy writing them!
Because of my scheduling between the projects I'm on, the next time I'm scheduled to return to Lyric is September 14th, so it'll be a long time coming until I can come back to them. But hey, maybe plans will change!
Introducing: Lyric the Kobold!
- Lyric is a kobold! And not the rat-nosed, dirty, diseased, chittering little bastard thieves from D&D - they're the fun kind of kobold, with the cute button noses, big, round eyes, and hips that clap like thunder with every step
- Lyric is gender-selectable! Do you want a girlbold that, because of her size, will always be tight as a nun? Or are you starved for some male content and have Lyric be a boibold, that's always eager and willing to step up to the challenge of pleasing his larger superior? Either way, Lyric's only sexual preference is for you: you can have the gayest kobold in the world if you want.
- The primary fetishes being appealed are size difference; enormous asses; dom/sub, with, in a rare change, the PC being the dom; and lots of hero worship. As soon as you rescue Lyric, they are willing to do anything - anything - for you.
- I didn't intend for Lyric to be a companion, but, Lyric is small enough to take up inventory in your pack, and they'll be able to travel around with you that way. There's also some plans for Lyric to be usable in battle, although that's still a ways off.
- There's an Easter egg if you choose not to revive Lyric and keep a frozen kobold in your backpack until you finish the game.
The document is currently 10,500 words large, and includes their intro; most of their talking topics (there's one more that still needs doing); and two sex scenes, both of them are Lyric going down on the PC based on the PC's sexual equipment.
Lyric is one piece of content that I've been looking forward to write for some time. There's a lot of content still planned for them coming up; I hope you enjoy them as much as I enjoy writing them!
Because of my scheduling between the projects I'm on, the next time I'm scheduled to return to Lyric is September 14th, so it'll be a long time coming until I can come back to them. But hey, maybe plans will change!
Lyric looks fun! I mean, the scene where the Champion tries to let them down easy about "love" makes my heart shatter into a million pieces for two different reasons even though Lyric isn't sad in the slightest, but still: fun!
Variable characters seem like a lot of work, so it's really cool that you're so excited about this one. All those [lyric.mf] tags look like an absolute maze to navigate. I think you missed one on page 9, though.
Any ideas about Combat Lyric, or is that wayyy tbd? I kind of like a recharge power more than a summon, but I haven't thought about it for very long.
Variable characters seem like a lot of work, so it's really cool that you're so excited about this one. All those [lyric.mf] tags look like an absolute maze to navigate. I think you missed one on page 9, though.
giggling like a lunatic here
*reads*
zomg happy ending confirmed!
I do have a couple suggestions, meme aside.
—Maybe adjust the color palette? Dark green is already occupied by goblins, orcs, trolls... it’d be nice to have a little more variance, especially since you’re going to be setting a precedent with the first kobold. Red and orange are super common depictions, but if you really want to be fun you could just say Kobolds come in multiple colors.
—Alternate opening scenes. Throughout the intro it feels like the Champion is continuously trying to... push Lyric away? Reject him? I dunno. I get that most people would actually be put off by a kobold they just met coming on to them so strongly, but the Champion isn’t most people— they regularly bang people they met five minutes ago. Maybe options for better reactions (like choosing if the champ is thrilled, skeptical, etc.), or at least a more enthusiastic response from Bimbo characters, or maybe even both.
—Maybe adjust the color palette? Dark green is already occupied by goblins, orcs, trolls... it’d be nice to have a little more variance, especially since you’re going to be setting a precedent with the first kobold. Red and orange are super common depictions, but if you really want to be fun you could just say Kobolds come in multiple colors.
—Alternate opening scenes. Throughout the intro it feels like the Champion is continuously trying to... push Lyric away? Reject him? I dunno. I get that most people would actually be put off by a kobold they just met coming on to them so strongly, but the Champion isn’t most people— they regularly bang people they met five minutes ago. Maybe options for better reactions (like choosing if the champ is thrilled, skeptical, etc.), or at least a more enthusiastic response from Bimbo characters, or maybe even both.
Yes, I'm likely going to be inserting a lot of pronouns by mistake - it's far less natural to say [lyric.hisHer] in my head and then type it out than it is to say his or her. It's something I'm going to need a lot of readers to help me with, ideally. Thank you for keeping an eye out!
And Lyrics worth as an item in combat is still very tbd.
Not at the start, but it may be possible to turn Lyric into a herm via alchemy later. Savin wants an alchemical option to turn Lyric into an 8 foot tall draginwaifu, so, why not some other stuff?
For lore reasons, Lyric is supposed to be a tropical variation of the kind you're going to find most commonly in the Undermountain, so I wanted to avoid red, brown, and bronze, since that's likely their colours, to match their environment, and green would be closer to the jungles of the tropics that Lyric is native to. Other colours I considered were blue, white, and black, which are pretty unusual colours as far as kobold scales go. It's not too late to change it, of course - I haven't even written an appearance screen yet.
And the alternate openings: to be fair, being a slut and banging people you just met is different from professing your undying love to them. It'll be tough, but I can go back and try to edit the scene to make the PC a bit more flexible when it's CoC2 time again.
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If you use a computer to write all this and can figure out how to turn it off and on, you might be able to use autocorrect to switch out he/she/his/her/etc. out with the proper variable. Then you can just count the variables and swap it out if you accidentally used a variable to refer to a third party.
I never thought about the ‘undying love vs. being a slut’ thing, though. It’d still probably be good to write openings for more enthusiastic people, but then again I’ve never written professionally and I don’t know how much work goes into this stuff so I can’t be overly critical— just offer an opinion.
This is some Ash and Pikachu friendship xD I so want a scene where Lyric rides on my shoulder or just pops out of my backpack at random just to say hi
Edit: Or a scene where he/she rides on my head
.....Evil bastards who would do such a thing? Lyric sounds adorable
All hail the mighty B!! This character sounds like it's gonna be alot of work but I have totally faith that you'll make it utterly magnificent ^w^ Keep up the awesome work
Keep in mind, the more transformatives you give a character, the additional content they require increases exponentially. Even just making Lyric super tall is going to require completely new sex scenes, because the current ones are all going to assume that they're short. So, ideally, if I give them more transformatives, they need to be worth it to me (the guy that's writing it) and Savin (the guy that's paying for it).
I must say I'm looking forward to lyric though I'm wondering will there be preg content? (I'm asking as one of my sides is to see all of the preg content)
And I'd like to see a blue or white lyric (maybe the white is why you did not notice them in the snow?) and I hope oneday my pc can reply back after getting to know them that they love them too (perhaps a marriage option?)
And I'd like to see a blue or white lyric (maybe the white is why you did not notice them in the snow?) and I hope oneday my pc can reply back after getting to know them that they love them too (perhaps a marriage option?)
Yes, Lyric preg will be an option, giving or receiving (maybe both if you make her futa)!
Walks through the forest nonchalantly, with Cait. A rustling noise can be heard from the champs backpack.
Cait: Wth (Insert Champ name here) what do you have in there?
Champ: Only the usual I'm just as surprised as you. Takes off backpack setting it down, only for it start wriggling on it's own. Finally working up the nerve the champ opens the flap only for Lyric and 2 kobold babies to poke their heads out taking in there surroundings.
Lyric: Now (insert champ name here) I can explain.. Our babies wanted to see the world so we... Kinda snuck in your bag when you were packing...
Cait: Wth (Insert Champ name here) what do you have in there?
Champ: Only the usual I'm just as surprised as you. Takes off backpack setting it down, only for it start wriggling on it's own. Finally working up the nerve the champ opens the flap only for Lyric and 2 kobold babies to poke their heads out taking in there surroundings.
Lyric: Now (insert champ name here) I can explain.. Our babies wanted to see the world so we... Kinda snuck in your bag when you were packing...
Hmmm I wonder if we ever get a kobold tf added to the game would lyric react to the pc being a kobold?
Sir, I would thank you not to call me a bastard.
And I would certainly revive Lyric...and sell them! Mwahahahaha.
Nah, seriously, I think my Lupine warrior would love a little pet she could smash clits with.
Sorry for being tardy, but I've updated Lyric with 10,000 words! This covers:
- Their appearance
- Introducing the player to the mechanic of feeding Lyric money, and the physical changes that includes
- Lots of backstory stuff! How Lyric got to where they are; what kobolds eat and what their culture is; why Lyric enjoys science; etc. Some of it is sad
Still to do:
- Two more talk scenes
- All of the sex, minus the scenes where Lyric goes down on you, since they're already done
- Additional sex scenes where they can be found cleaning your creampies out of your companion's pussies/your spent pussy juices off your companion's dicks
- Fun With Alchemy
A new page, a new shill for my Patreon!
- Their appearance
- Introducing the player to the mechanic of feeding Lyric money, and the physical changes that includes
- Lots of backstory stuff! How Lyric got to where they are; what kobolds eat and what their culture is; why Lyric enjoys science; etc. Some of it is sad
Still to do:
- Two more talk scenes
- All of the sex, minus the scenes where Lyric goes down on you, since they're already done
- Additional sex scenes where they can be found cleaning your creampies out of your companion's pussies/your spent pussy juices off your companion's dicks
- Fun With Alchemy
A new page, a new shill for my Patreon!
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