Oh, look guys. Bronzechair is back. Yay...
Just kidding, of course. Some of those bugs have probably been there for a looong time.
Oh, I've been around, but I haven't had much to say. I'm ReliableNarrator on the github... though now that I think about it, that must have been mid-late September, so it has been a while. You're right though; it makes me chuckle to think that I missed a typo in the intro, of all places.
Some more stuff:
- The timer during a match says 12:00 pm instead of 12:00 am.
- Assjob used against the PC when the attacker is held from behind: "... thinking she intends to break free your hold ..." is missing the word "from"
- Mara tickling with Tickle Monster trait: "As her fingers start tormenting
you privates ..."
- PC tickling with Tickle Monster trait: "... until she's
a writhing in pleasure ... "
- Mara cumming: "lets go" should be "let's go"
- Strip Tease used against the PC: "... starts sexily slipping
her her clothes off."
- Tail Peg used against the PC: "spreading your cheeks a part" should be "spreading your cheeks apart"
- Ass Fuck used against the PC: "
Your try to struggle away ..."
- Invitation used against the PC: "She then pulls you to the ground on top of her and softly
wrap her legs around your waist ..."
- Airi using Foot Worship against the PC: "Airi can稚 seem to get enough of your feet"
- "Jewel uses Tear Clothes. Grabbing your scalpel, you jump forward. The sharp blade makes quick work of your} clothing and your skill with the blade allows you avoid harming them completely. You can only look at you with shock as your shredded clothes float to the ground between you."
- "Mara uses Use draft.
Mara s a bottle of Semen Mara is now Shamed Mara is now shamed."
- Non-succubus NPCs will drink bottles of semen to no good cause; arousing and shaming themselves.
- Special pussies will revert to regular ones when the owner imbibes a Fem Draft. I understand if this is a feature so you can use them on girls with dangerous pussies, but the NPCs probably shouldn't drink them willingly. Likewise, they probably shouldn't throw helpful drafts at the PC.
- Shock Balls and the imp punching the PC in the nuts both deal damage twice.
- When the imp stands back and touches herself, the game says "Reyka's
imps stands at the ...". There's only one imp.
- When an NPC with a cock masturbates it says "She jerks off, building up your own arousal," and if they come from it, the jizz is said to land on your hands.
- There's a comma splice near the end of the description when the imp jumps on the PC's face. The last clause (i.e. "there must be a high concentration ...") should be separated from the previous one with either a semi-colon or a period.
- I don't know if I should report these or not, but here's another one of these: "Reyka's imp grabs your socks and yanks it off." Let me know.
- My body description sometimes says I have "a normal ,". It's listed between feet and balls, and nothing appears to be missing. I have a massive shaft, fused gloves and boots (though it says I have normal feet), a flat chest, and normal everything else.
- There's a missing space between the first and second sentence in Angel's combat description.
- Central Camp: "There are no trees here, just a small camp where Angel
has can get a new Flag if it gets captured". Also missing a period and it seems to always name the person who started as the Prey, regardless of who currently has the flag.
- When ambushing in the Narrow Pass: "As soon as Jewel comes into view, you jump out and push
she against the opposite wall." This paragraph also says you daze the person you ambush, but it doesn't wind them or otherwise have any effect I can see.
- Finding a gold envelope in the woods will mention you found it in the middle of the room. The "Something seems off in this room" line has the same problem.
- North Base: "Jewel
has has her base here."
- Airi somehow bloated her Willpower up to 503 while everyone else has 40-50.