A crab's gay writings

Knife-wielding Crab

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I am curious: why wasn't his but claimed already? Also, what would beating his alpha entail?

Still, a furry twunk? Last one we had was Room, or at least the last one I remember. Can not wait.
The plan, if this gets approved, is to write an expansion. It's quite alot of work so I don't want to repeat my oopsie with the Crazy Horse wrangler so I'll chill with the chunkier content.

I want do make a small quest where you get to observe a meeting between Skull (gnoll boy) and the Alpha. It turns out the alpha is a massive cunt, even by gnoll standards. You help Skull beat up the Alpha and in return, you get to claim his butt while the Alpha watches. Then he moves to Hawkethorne and helps the vendors as an assistant, mostly foraging for alchemical ingredients. He gets his own shack where you can continue romping him. Would be fun to do a scene where he meets June in the gym.
 

Knife-wielding Crab

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Some update on Skull the gnoll.

He's been in a bit of an editing limbo because enthusiasm around him has been lukewarm (including my own).

I will go over him one more time and send him in. Maybe I can salvage him.
 

Karakara

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What made people feel lukewarm? Was it the concept, quality or bit of both?
 

Ace Hangman

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So I didn't realize that you had done an orc bandit (Fergash). I don't get a notification for when the first post is edited. And I must have missed any message you said when you put it there. I have read through the doc (though I know it was rejected the first time through). I have only got up to the Sex options but I have corrected any typos and grammar, and took The Observer's notes to you into account, and left some notes that I think might help you if you wish to revisit it later. I will continue to work through it and, if you wish, you might feel comfortable resubmitting it afterwards.
 
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Knife-wielding Crab

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So I didn't realize that you had done an orc bandit (Fergash). I don't get a notification for when the first post is edited. And I must have missed any message you said when you put it there. I have read through the doc (though I know it was rejected the first time through). I have only got up to the Sex options but I have corrected any typos and grammar, and took The Observer's notes to you into account, and left some notes that I think might help you if you wish to revisit it later. I will continue to work through it and, if you wish, you might feel comfortable resubmitting it afterwards.
Thanks! I will probably not revisit it in the near future. But never say never.
 

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Finished reading through the Fergash document. I corrected any misspellings I found and made some grammar suggestions, and a few options for [dcb] if I saw some. When you get around to looking back through it, hopefully it will look a bit cleaner and polished for your reviewer.
 

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Here's hoping that Tykis will get accepted. The game needs more corruptable characters.
 

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Congrats on getting your Nash submission in! You even got two comments in the patch notes regarding amale character! Quite an accomplishment.
 
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heey! hii! i really liked your writing on nash, both the dom path i played and the sub path i read, but like i have a few questions, and if you dont wanna answer totally fine, but like does nash like or even love the champ? because i dont think there was an indication on the dom path(or maybe im just oblivious), but it is a strong indication on the sub path also also ia the date only for the sub path or is it like, just a quest ending scene no matter the path?
 

Knife-wielding Crab

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Sub Nash becomes more attatched to the PC than dom Nash.

I wanted to get across that he really is quite lonely and the "shady merchant" is mostly a facade. Dom Nash has no reason to drop that facade, sub Nash does in some scenes.