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1. Azami has four rings in her ear, not two. One for each time she and Takahiro fucked before he left.
![Azami01.png Azami01.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35872-b99e92588c656e79f3f699830c02a08a.jpg)
![Azami00.png Azami00.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35871-4c1f19a263381b6e8ddcebbdc4f0c780.jpg)
Sex >Missionary
2. Should be 'your' instead of 'you'.
![Azami02.png Azami02.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35873-71533b32a96635ced287c46943d3e4e9.jpg)
3. There should probably be a [pc.cumColor] parser here, since I am certain my Champ's cum is honey.
![Azami03.png Azami03.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35874-923d6ed22a2bdd88a6ea0b490a28adf4.jpg)
4. Should be 'wild-looking' instead of 'wild looking'. Not a huge issue, but if you're already there fixing things...
also, normally kitsune use the term 'kit' instead of 'kid'. I can't say this is wrong here, but if you wanna check for sure.
![Azami04.png Azami04.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35875-81de72bb443a20a332582d1b52e1744f.jpg)
Sex > Cowgirl
5. Should be 'fangs' instead of 'fang'.
![Azami05.png Azami05.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35876-2f2d14c84397a966464e34bcff78ef01.jpg)
6. Should be 'a circular motion' or 'circular motions' instead of 'circular motion'.
![Azami06.png Azami06.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35877-0a273b682b822cb85af1746cf9e57ec1.jpg)
7. Should probably be a [pc.cumColor] parser here, since my Champ ejaculates honey and it should be 'yellow' or 'amber' as opposed to 'white' or 'ivory'. Presumably it's not intended to be 'White-hot ropes of jizz'. Not sure how well, 'Yellow/Amber, hot ropes of jizz' reads, as opposed to 'Hot ropes of [pc.cumColor] jizz', but rearranging words goes beyond pointing out the lack of parser.
![Azami07.png Azami07.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35878-ab59b42489a073f4536e3d667b192b74.jpg)
Sex > 69
8. Should probably be a [pc.cumColor] parser here, since my Champ's semen is honey and should be yellow or amber.
![Azami08.png Azami08.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35879-60b1b467da46f0baebdb9758db7e8686.jpg)
9. Should be 'your' instead of 'her'.
![Azami09.png Azami09.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35880-eb471985b6c70cff0c10633335d9a075.jpg)
1. Azami has four rings in her ear, not two. One for each time she and Takahiro fucked before he left.
![Azami01.png Azami01.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35872-b99e92588c656e79f3f699830c02a08a.jpg)
![Azami00.png Azami00.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35871-4c1f19a263381b6e8ddcebbdc4f0c780.jpg)
Sex >Missionary
2. Should be 'your' instead of 'you'.
![Azami02.png Azami02.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35873-71533b32a96635ced287c46943d3e4e9.jpg)
3. There should probably be a [pc.cumColor] parser here, since I am certain my Champ's cum is honey.
![Azami03.png Azami03.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35874-923d6ed22a2bdd88a6ea0b490a28adf4.jpg)
4. Should be 'wild-looking' instead of 'wild looking'. Not a huge issue, but if you're already there fixing things...
also, normally kitsune use the term 'kit' instead of 'kid'. I can't say this is wrong here, but if you wanna check for sure.
![Azami04.png Azami04.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35875-81de72bb443a20a332582d1b52e1744f.jpg)
Sex > Cowgirl
5. Should be 'fangs' instead of 'fang'.
![Azami05.png Azami05.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35876-2f2d14c84397a966464e34bcff78ef01.jpg)
6. Should be 'a circular motion' or 'circular motions' instead of 'circular motion'.
![Azami06.png Azami06.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35877-0a273b682b822cb85af1746cf9e57ec1.jpg)
7. Should probably be a [pc.cumColor] parser here, since my Champ ejaculates honey and it should be 'yellow' or 'amber' as opposed to 'white' or 'ivory'. Presumably it's not intended to be 'White-hot ropes of jizz'. Not sure how well, 'Yellow/Amber, hot ropes of jizz' reads, as opposed to 'Hot ropes of [pc.cumColor] jizz', but rearranging words goes beyond pointing out the lack of parser.
![Azami07.png Azami07.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35878-ab59b42489a073f4536e3d667b192b74.jpg)
Sex > 69
8. Should probably be a [pc.cumColor] parser here, since my Champ's semen is honey and should be yellow or amber.
![Azami08.png Azami08.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35879-60b1b467da46f0baebdb9758db7e8686.jpg)
9. Should be 'your' instead of 'her'.
![Azami09.png Azami09.png](https://forum.fenoxo.com/data/attachments/35/35880-eb471985b6c70cff0c10633335d9a075.jpg)