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Nice, concise. Very few errors or typos. I don't think any reviewers will have issues with spelling or other such. Not that what I say means anything. Still, I left one, maybe two comments where some parsers might work. Other than that, the words 'hips' and 'length' seemed to get used a bit...

I like it! And you know, that would sort of work with the lupine scenes too, where the term 'bitch' might have a more nuanced meaning. I was thinking it might mess with those scenes, but... yeah... nice!

Totally the same for me. "Champ, are you seeing other women romantically?!" "It's not like that, baby. I swear! I'm just going through all the scenes looking for typos."

What did you swap it to?

So I played through as a Wyld Elf up to that point. It isn't that Garth is explaining to a wyld elf what wyld elves are, it's more that he's explaining what frost elves are, since they are very rare, even as far south as Hawkethorne. And unlike wyld elves in the Old Forest, the Champ clearly...

I think some of it is plot-writing reasons. You can become something, but they can at least restrict some starting knowledge or lore. A starting orc that becomes an elf, still has checks that it started as an orc and can speak or read or understand orcish things they encounter later (and still...

I read through the Demon Gytha/Melara scenes. I think people will be pleased with the content she's finally getting (I am still sad I let Gytha go to Alissa, but that's just something I have to live with. I thought I was showing her trust, not I can't breed her without making imps). Mostly I'd...

I read through the Gytha preg expansion. Left some comments, you know. Just enough for people to claim I am some mind-controlling supervillain that somehow ruined everything. Seems like a good, long-hoped for expansion on here. I am only saddened she is a demon in my playthrough (I seriously...

::Blinks innocently:: But Mayternity is about making babies and pregnancy and stuff. What's the rush for her?

I looked at it. There's some good gems in there, not sure whether it can work in the way you are intending or something. I definitely think a scene can be done with it, just need to set her up for pregnancy in her other scenes. Made some parser suggestions to look into. One, maybe two...

Enter Camp > Followers > Sex > Facesitting (Bad End) 11. Should be 'hand' instead of 'handshake'. 'You shake her hand.' or 'You return her handshake.' Sex > Oral 12. This scene happens in camp, Champ walks away from camp to call her, so not even in their tent where they might be a camp...

Meridyx > Combat (Victory) > Sex > Full Nelson 1. Looks like 'down' doesn't fit here. Unless it's 'move your hands down to her shoulders'. 2. Looks like 'her' doesn't fit here. Unless this is the start of a parser. 3. Remove an extra 'out'. Sex > Let Her Lead 4. Extra space here...

Drifa > Give > Kiss > Gentle 1. Should be a space here. Drifa > Sex > Tummy Fuck 2. Add 'you' in between. 3. Extra period here. Likely a pregnancy parser remnant. 4. Should likely be 'into you' unless its flowing into Champ's penis or body or some other noun. 5. Add space here.

More various typos people send to me: Marefolk Village > Stylists > Sex > Rail > Aunora > Yes (another round 1. Should be 'cock as hard as the moment you put it in her tail hole.' Khor'minos > Milking Barn > Livrea Visit 2. Should be 'walk over here' instead of 'walk over her'. Random...

What if there was a slime or honey or sticky set that if the torso piece is equipped, had a Stance/At will you could select, it lowers the wearer's Initiative or speed when active (cause they stick to the ground and things), but could disarm an opponent if they hit the wearer? Possibly with a...

::adds 'Patreon Crowbar' to Christmas list::: I will find the typos... a paywall cannot stop me.

Your options may open up and expand once you reach the minotaur city of Khor'minos. Nikol the northern minotaur brothel whore can be subby or dom, most minotaur men or soldiers will at least let you pleasure them. And Knife-wielding Crab has a Odoacer the minotaur mining foreman in there...

Drifa (corrupt) > Give > Pet > Face 11. Remove 'through'. Drifa (pure) > Sex > Titfuck 12. These two paragraphs shouldn't be italicized. Probably from the paragraph above not being closed out. Drifa (corrupt) > Sex > Doggystyle 13. This all seems to be bolded.

Some of these have been sitting in a folder awhile, so apologies if already addressed. Drifa > Appearance (Married and Pregnant, if that matters) 1. Extra punctuation or parser remnant. Drifa (corrupt) > Talk > People > Rumie 2. These two paragraphs are entirely italicized when the...

End of Dungeon Drifa Corrupted 11. Space between period and end of sentence. Tharsus > Combat Victory > Fuck Meridyx 12. 'tense' instead of 'tensen'.