I read through the Demon Gytha/Melara scenes. I think people will be pleased with the content she's finally getting (I am still sad I let Gytha go to Alissa, but that's just something I have to live with. I thought I was showing her trust, not I can't breed her without making imps). Mostly I'd say there's some spots for a [pc.cumColor] parser instead of white or ivory, to account for honey. That seems to be the main thing. I may have noted one typo. That's probably all.
Other than that...
WHAT!? NO BAD END SCENE!? Where a careless Champ with 98–100 corruption is banging her or getting sucked off and suddenly their soul pops out, and she gets all strong and mighty and confident and breaks free and claims Champ as her cum toy/whipping girl, breaking out of the cell, possibly freeing Alissa if there, and flying off into the wilds with Champ as her and Alissa's (if there) breeder or fuck toy? Sad Hangman...