[0.8.17] Drifa typos

[Ace Hangman]

Some of these have been sitting in a folder awhile, so apologies if already addressed.

Drifa > Appearance (Married and Pregnant, if that matters)

1. Extra punctuation or parser remnant.


Drifa (corrupt) > Talk > People > Rumie

2. These two paragraphs are entirely italicized when the non-speech parts shouldn't be. Possibly from the paragraph above where the Champ starts musing in italics and it not being closed or something.


3. Should probably be 'leaves much to be desired'


Drifa (corrupt)> Talk > People > Daliza

4. Double negative. Should either be 'everyone isn't so keen' or 'not everyone is so keen'.


Drifa > Give > Kiss > Gentle

5. Space needed.


6. Space needed.


Drifa (corrupt) > Sex > Anal

7. Space needed.


8. Extra 'your'.


9. Remove 'a'.


10. Remove 'have'.

 

[Ace Hangman]

Drifa (corrupt) > Give > Pet > Face

11. Remove 'through'.



Drifa (pure) > Sex > Titfuck

12. These two paragraphs shouldn't be italicized. Probably from the paragraph above not being closed out.


Drifa (corrupt) > Sex > Doggystyle

13. This all seems to be bolded.