Nice, concise. Very few errors or typos. I don't think any reviewers will have issues with spelling or other such. Not that what I say means anything. Still, I left one, maybe two comments where some parsers might work. Other than that, the words 'hips' and 'length' seemed to get used a bit overmuch ('hips' not so much to worry about), but maybe do a search for 'length' and make sure they're spread out enough where they aren't the same word used for Champ or Elyon's penis one after the other. Not when there's so many other fun words for it.
