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Alright, I read through it. I noted all the typos and grammatical errors that I found. I left suggestions and opinions and thoughts. Hopefully it helps you polish it up some. Personally (not being into men), he's not attractive to me sexually, but beyond that, I am not a fan of his millennial...

This is such a blatantly untrue and misleading statement and representation. Anyone can look at Hinata, Kiri, and Yuzu's encounter and see that what you're saying is obviously untrue. First Encounter They very clearly ask for food because they are starving, which is no different than any race...

Finished the Arona Doc. Noted some suggestions, thoughts, observations, opinions, etc. 1. Mostly the same as the others with names and cock/pussy nouns. As well as words like 'hand'. Just make sure they aren't overused in the same sentences too frequently and have some adjectives to them. 2...

I'm a lupine, wolf-blooded creature with gray fur and a bestial, red rocket cock... Also a horsetail, but that's just for fun.

Finished reading through the Brint scene (I did not read the Brienne part, though I could if you were planning to try and fix it or needed advice to use in a later idea). I listed most of my observations and left my suggestions in the Doc, which are just that, one (totally awesome) person's...

What? You wouldn't have accepted, 'folding director's chair with the words, 'Blueberry Bailiff' written across the back?

Unfortunately, being able to do that without some prior instruction would be very tough to realistically portray. Someone would logically have to teach or instruct you, otherwise it would require time spent just secretly spying or observing (which could be done for some things), but the fact...

Does anyone have a description of Kasyrra's battleaxe? I obviously see the busts and portraits. I know it's a double-headed axe, but I think there's a bit more description to it when you both fight the Abyssal Thing in the Winter Palace. I know it isn't much but if someone could save me from...

Agreed. People will quote someone's post or reply directly to them and never actually address a specific point or issue. If you try to be concise, they'll make assumptions, accusations, and occasionally psychological profiles for you. If you try to be clear and address their issues or...

Finished reading through the Azyrran scene. Left most of the notes in the Doc. Just going to make some broad observations. 1. Like you noted, it did seem to take a while for Azzy to get involved. You did address it and it wasn't too bad. I didn't make this suggestion in the Doc because it would...

Alright, going to work my way from the start to the finish. I've gotten through half of Cait's submission, just starting the Ride Her Face section. Will come back to it in a bit after some errands. Cait Most suggestions will go into the Doc, but things I've noticed (feel free to ignore them): 1...

On the Temple of Mallach page, under Work Clients > Oil Massage > Vagina It lists the requirement as '(requires penis)' Should be '(requires vagina)'.

Naw, he's just trying to decide what origami animals he's going to turn the pages into now that he's reached the end of the book.

Yes. You can only have one Summoned creature at a time. A new summon will replace your old summon.

I find this rather hard to believe. There's always Story mode and that makes combat very easy. Unless you're purposefully making your Champ a pacifist, low hp, no armor, cream puff (that also refuses to summon, buff, or heal), there are very few battles that will cause any issue. And even then...

Yeah, someone's gotta tell those people, "In yer dreams!"

Any number of reasons. Suspicious lupine vendor selling corrupted items around the corner. Secret demon incursion into outskirts, the danger of living outside the city walls, something in the water.. Secret sex slime invasion from a nearby farm. Maybe... they've just been secret villains the...

But what if Cassia and Rina turn out to be... Dun-dun-dun! [Dramatic sting] ...evil!

Can also access Berwyn's tower from your campsite, right? Or is that a different part?