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I read through it. It's a good framework. Got all the scaffolding and foundation for a character. I fixed all the typos I found and noted any suggestion, comments, etc. Once you've gone through those, I can do another read-thru. Otherwise, I would say that a male hive-knight is a bit like a...

What are the parameters for the ghostlight strapon? Does the magicock have a standard length (like 8") or something? Presumably it doesn't count as having a ballsack or balls. I imagine it's a typical humanoid cock type (not tapered or flared or nubbed), but if it is, does anyone know the tags...

I am not sure on all the behind-the-scenes mechanics, but I think as long as you have a knot, any scenes that check for a knot will do so. I am not aware of a [char.knotSize] parser, at least not in the parser documentation I have available, but one might exist, and probably wouldn't be hard to...

Looks like the last line (in addition to the missing space after Francisca) also uses 'throws' instead of 'throw'. Looks like it was made for character other than the Champ (Brienne throws, the Centaur Marauder throws, etc.). Might need a check to see if the last word was 'You' or something else...

Sorry... a new 'What Content Would You Like Added' thread and a list of things that aren't allowed have already been taken off the table for the future.

Wha...!? Well, uhm... only because I need to access all the options to check for typos and grammar...

You forget the secret [silly] parser. "Listen, Tarah, I'm pretty sure the hero you're looking for is... in another castle." On a separate note, I want the colosseum to randomly drop a unique item after you win an event. Either at a low random chance or if you succeed spectacularly in an event...

Sweeet

Completely low on priority list, just mentioning it as I randomly encounter them: On Hornets page; First Encounter heading: 'sweet' is misspelled as 'sweeet'.

A possible issue or reason, depending on how you look at it, is that some of those enemies are sexable. The writers of those encounters wrote sex scenes and, unfortunately, the less human and more bestial or animal or monster you make them, the more it starts to border on bestiality, which is...

That would include Kasyrra presumably? Can we get a switch that removes Kasyrra content from the game? This whole... having to adventure to stop her is really cutting into my enjoyment of this adventure.

I hate when that completely reasonable thing happens. Just walking along, trip, fall on 13k words of cock.

Some of those identical quadruplets are more naked and chubby than the others.

Spent a couple days reading through the document. I corrected some typos and made some suggestions and opinions. Obviously I am just one person with their opinion. I will note that you used a lot of filler words and things that slowed down the pace when the scene should have been faster, mostly...

Teeny tiny issue in the grand scheme of things: Author-bk! page has a typo at the very bottom, should be 'Armored Etheryn' instead of 'Ehteryn'

Lady Evergreen can do a lot of things. Meira was also mentioned. Nuki Nuts can let you hold a lot more seed. Vaush, one of the Kervus orc shamans has some brew. Hretha in the Kervus camp can probably do something (I am an orc, so I go into Rut, but I think it works on non-orcs too). Otherwise...

What?! Noooo... that whole reference to removing stress from the road was clearly in reference to her healing you. Totally. Get rid of wounds and sore muscles from fighting and walking. You can trust me. Or my name isn't 'Honest Ace'.

"So Champ, we're rebuilding the statue in the Wayfort. Any ideas on what you're looking for?" "Weeeeelll..... have you ever been to the Foothills? Cause there's a pair of ideas I have..."

No, no... that's actually a typo. Cait was never intended to talk in camp. Strictly sex. That was supposed to be 'shag' instead of 'chat'. We should probably post this in the right forum.

Your dedication and motivation to write is very inspiring. Fun scenes and teases.