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I read through the Eryka doc. Lots of great, sexy things. I noted any typos and grammar issues I spotted. I suggested some headers for the sections just to make it easier for me to jump back forth between scenes. I left some comments, suggestions, etc. Don't take them too seriously, they're...

Read through it. Lots of work in there. Lots of sex scenes. I am not into men, so these scenes aren't usually for me, but I caught what typos or grammar I could. Things I noticed: 1. There will probably need to be an Appearance option to give a (more full) description of Arened. That's not on...

Is it intended for the Giant Boar in Sariel's quest to be vulnerable to Erotic warfare and tease damage? I think most animals aren't. Also, is there a way to make it non-disarmable? I think my Lapis Hoplite disarmed it and forced it to fight barehanded. Good for me, just thought I'd mention it...

Don't let me stop you from trying that, but it would probably be better to just end up giving the Champ Fatigued and/or Beaten and Bruised at the end (like banging Gianna the gargoyle. Having them take actual damage would mean having to worry about if the Champ had low health and got knocked to...

Do you want us to note any typos or grammatical errors or suggestions in the doc?

By that... you mean you want someone to write a dream sequence, possibly triggered when you sleep in the Kitsune Den?

Sariel's Tent in Marefolk Village (cont) Chat 10. This sentence doesn't make much sense. It seems like it's meant to imply she's setting up the folding chairs and they click into place, but the parser that checks for companions (I assume) interrupts that in a weird way. 11. 'Harvest Valley'...

Fight (victory > Fuck > Fuck Asshole 1. Should be 'fistful' instead of 'fistfull'. You can have a fist full of ass, but you grab a fistful of ass. Fight (victory) > Fuck > Fist Asshole 2. Should be 'dead-on in' instead of 'in dead-on in' Submit > Face 3. In this scene, my Champ...

This should have gone in COC Bugs and Typos. Can be deleted.

I always assumed that if he was going to release her from punishment, she'd rather die.

I do like those gloves.

Yes, it's a corrupt dream, I believe.

Basically the answer is, 'In your dreams." In other words, someone could theoretically do it... as a dream sequence that randomly shows up, possibly after an action or trigger, but they'd have to write it themselves and get it approved.

When I try and imagine how this day progressed for the fisherman up until this point. I'm a little puzzled as to why he has no clothes. I don't see any laying nearby, so he didn't just take them off, and he clearly would have seen her earlier if he was fishing there and pulled out that big fish...

Maybe they're planning to spring it out for Christmas with Clementine. You walk in and she's knitting little wool booties and tells you she's ready. I haven't actually read the doc myself, was trying to keep it a surprise. It sounded like they had their own editor already, but I suppose I could...

Also inclined to agree. While not guaranteed that any Champ with give them kittens, they do like children, so wanting to be close to the nursery is probably best for their spirits, even if you don't breed them.

I know you can get them from batfolk muggers in Undermountain, not sure if it's from the muggers or Nocturna, since she's always with the muggers I fight now.

She looks like she's gonna get cold without our help. A Champ's work is never done...

Grave of Saints > Blessed Door Should probably be 'Place Teardrop' instead of 'Please Teardrop'. (But I'm not in a position to do that quest and check for sure.

Thank you. I am well known for how nice I am. 'Nice' is my middle name. Or my name isn't 'Honest Ace'.