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[Jael'yn Date; SpitroastDilaza (cont.)] I feel like the word 'climax' works better here. [Jael'yn Date; Leave Them] Remove the second 'about'. It should be 'come' or 'come back' instead of 'head', since they are entering the scene. [Jael'yn Date (2nd visit)] It should be 'the master' or...

[Jaelyn Date option] Jael'yn is misspelled (needs the apostrophe) in the choice button. [Jael'yn Date] Not a typo, but would possibly read better as "Touch up your makeup" instead of the two 'up's together. [Jael'yn Date; Subby Fuck] Should be 'grope' instead of 'group'. Should be 'hear...

[V.0.4.34] [Drinks; Vodka] Should be a comma after 'exhale'. Should be 'rides on' instead of 'ride son'. [Drinks; Milk] 'Pupperidge' should be capitalized. [Drinks; Pupper Ale] Should probably be 'sat to either side' and there should be a comma between 'you' and 'tails'. Should probably...

[Sex; Full Nelson (as Concubine and after pregnancy)] There's one too many 'even after putting on a bit of weight'. 'by' isn't needed. It would either be 'and grab her thighs just under her butt' or more likely 'and grab her thighs near her butt' It should probably be 'have tails as long...

Fighting Kazuo's puppets. [Task, Fight puppets, Victory] Should be 'by what Rindo said it' instead of 'by what Rindo it'. [No screenshot] [Sex; Doggystyle (as Concubine and after pregnancy if that matters). Remove the extra comma. Should be 'to hear you'. Should be 'determined'. Should...

Kasyrra can definitely alter peoples' shapes and forms, she does it with the MC in the beginning. Granted, the MC is likely much more susceptible to change than a normal creature because of their portal-energy infusion. I think the demons themselves ultimately choose their 'base' form. I think...

My favorite area is the northern forest between the Wayfort and Winter City. Still no aggravating enemies other than random kitsune parties. It lets me visit my Leothran girls, my Kitsune den girls, my Tanuki girls, and my super hot Hellhound mate. Also, it's fun to visit with the cuddly...

Possible, it's different in the 0.4.34 build, I have Steam version 0.4.30 ... but I can definitely state that in my build the square to the west is a brothel. I think the one to the right is meant to be the cafe or veranda building that is supposed to be a pharmacy (cannot access it manually...

Is the [GREET] option to speak with Feronia in the right location? The brothel entrance appears to be on the Khor-mino's main street (with the goth cowgirl), but the description of Feronia, the brothel madam, seems to fit more with the space to the west of it, as though you actually stepped into...

[Get Eaten] Should be 'her horns' instead of 'your horns'. 'her' is misspelled. [Milky Titfuck] Should be 'audibly'. Should be 'moos' without the apostrophe s. 'beau' is a masculine pronoun. In this case, the closest term for Mimi would be 'belle'.

[Lusty Breedfuck] Should be 'a rush of' Should be 'heat' instead of 'head' Should be 'walls' instead of 'walks' [Lusty Breedfuck; after Eat Out or Squeeze Ass choice] Should be 'finds' Should be 'incredible' instead of 'incredibly' [Cuddle Time] 'jawline' and 'crook' are misspelled...

Some items sold by the Lupine Trader, Nash in the Outskirts of Khor'minos. Tainted Clover [Arms] Remove 'pull' Ashen Leaf [Eyes] Should be 'gives way' [Skin] Should be 'itches'

[Sex; Nursing Fingering] 'nest' is misspelled Should be 'milking should be anything ...' Should be 'your body' Should be 'lift'

[Sex; Tease Ears] Should be 'Your fingers' Not technically a typo if you're in a specific location, but 'fantasise' is a British spelling, 'fantasize' would be the American spelling. So depending on your target audience... 'ecstasy' is misspelled. Should be 'occupied with right now'...

Combat; Victory; Relax; Feelings (for Leothric)] Should be 'her heart' [Combat; Victory; Return of Leofric] Should be 'losses' instead of 'loses' Should either be 'at a near-ethereal ...' or it should be 'as a near-ethereal figure blocks ...'. Should be 'its' instead of 'is'

[Sex; Breed (in Rut, in case that matters)] Should be 'the sweet, sweet relief of release rushes in' [Sex; Cuddlefuck] Should be 'is' instead of 'it'.

[Pregnancy] Should be 'babe's' with an apostrophe s. The two 'it's' should be 'its' without apostrophes. 'You reach out to brush a stray hair away from the babe's face, patting its head as it drinks its fill.'

* Minotaur Miners * [Combat; Victory; Make 'em Fuck] I am positive that it should be 'puddle' instead of 'poodle'. I am almost 100% certain that there weren't any poodles around... but I'll admit I was a bit distracted.

* Batfolk * [Combat; Victory; Fuck them] Should be 'coating you both white'.

[Pregnancy, birth] Should be 'its' with no apostrophe s.