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Must have been the birth scene! Shit! Hope it's repeatable.

No that's just a requirement for sex with her in general

Steele needs to be in a rut, not her.

Sorry for being nitpicky, but maybe change "it" into "them". Imo it would make the sentence flow a bit better Finally, it’s done. After a long, well-deserved nap, you three can resume your lives, free from the rule of those damnable rings controlling all three of your very psyches. Until you...

Apologies if this is rude of me, but might i suggest italicizing "can". it would really help hammer the point home Whatever the truth of it is, you know one thing for certain: if you don’t get those rings off both of them, right now, while you have the chance, it’s all going to start again...

Well, someone else far more qualified than me has taken up the torch for this, so I suppose this base has already been covered. Tbh, I'm pretty glad, since like I said, I have no fucking clue what I'm doing lol. Hope that's rude of me to say here, and apologies if it is.

Awesome! I've been malding about the lack of a snake tf for literally years, and finally it's about to come true! I hope it's not ride of me to do so, and apologies if it is, but I have a few suggestions on this actually: I really hope this goes well for you, and I can't wait to see how this...

maybe remove the comma after "three" When she has her other three legs flatly on the ice beside you, you’re suddenly beneath the barrel of her stomach, with three, imposing feet of cock, throbbing above a pair of clenching, scaly balls.

I got an email from Breedwell ... checks ... 444 days ago, but after going there i didnt see anything unusual. Anyone know what thats about?

again, sorry for the suggestiony ness, but maybe change to "the bed isnt ain a good shape for cuddling" or something like that. I hope im not being rude by saying this, and sorry if i am and please let me know, but as is it feels kinda.... choppy, for lack of better words. . When you’re...

bit suggestiony, and sorry about that, but maybe change the first comma to a semicolon. it may make it flow a bit better, imo There are no pretenses of gentleness in her thrusting, it’s rough, fast, and brutal, and you love it. Suddenly, she slaps your still sore ass, making you whimper.

Another italics bug

Another italics bug

missing period in the ellipses “You’ll buy me a nice milker and a cow-bell, won’t you?” she teases, rubbing her still-squirting breasts all along your cushiony tits. “Maybe a nice, hung stud bull to keep me company when you’re off sailing the galaxy? I.. o-oh!”

Change the highlighter "her" to "his" There are some changing booths nearby, so you go there. As soon as you close the door and lock it, Verusha sits down and pulls the blushing boy into her lap. “Say, have you ever taken it up the ass?” she asks as she pulls the slutty bikini off of his...

Just noticed this. another italics bug

uncapitalize "Back", and aslo maybe remove "like", thought thats a bit sugguestion-y. sorry. You chuckle, “Well, like that Back on Tarkus, you would have told me to fuck off if I had told you that you’ve changed.”

something totally different here, but im just slapping it in so i dont forget. missing end quotation mark at the end You don’t talk much on your way, and once you get there, Verusha pays for her pass. You change into swim wear and step into the warmth of the beach. Verusha is wearing...

Its more clear in the rest of the scene, which i probably should have posted also, apologies for that. as it goes on it becomes much more clear that the the rest is written as though she is using one finger, not multiple. I can post the rest of the interaction if youd like.

Ok, sorry for takng up space here but I have a few questions about the Verusha Spend Time scenes. Im not entirely sure if this is a bug or just some kind over oversight or placeholder something, but I didnt want to waste the dev teams time so i figured id ask here first. In the Spend Time...