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OK, so, full disclosure, there's a fairly high likelihood that this isn't going to go anywhere significant, if at all. I know that's not setting the best expectations here, but I figured I should be honest and up front about that cuz it just felt like this right thing to do. Righto, that out of...

Yeah I know, and ive put serious thought into doing it, but I've never written anything like this before. Closest thing is my college papers and I honestly kinda half assed those. I can't help but get overwhelmed by it, I guess. Sorry if I came off as a bit whiny, I was mostly trying to be...

No dedicated snake/cobra hood/snake hair tf. I've been malding about this for literally years, and shall continue to do so until it is added or I can scrape together the cash to pay someone to make it.

Ah, crap. Guess I kinda got tunnel vision, lol. Thank you very much for the help! Though, if you don't mind me saying so, imo, singular is still the way to go here.

another missing quotation mark and capitalization Wait, there's a beach on tavros?” she asks, sounding surprised. After confirming that there indeed is a beach, you head out with Verusha.

missing quotation mark at the beggining You want to suck my dick, well go ahead bitch, I could use a good cock polishing.” She sits back, spreading her legs to give you full view and access to her crotch.

possible missing paragraph-ation or whatever the hell its called here

here also “Sure, I haven't really gone out and seen tavros yet, and the housewarming was the last time I really kicked back and relaxed.”

maybe capitalize "tavros" “Sure, I haven't really gone out and seen tavros yet, and the housewarming was the last time I really kicked back and relaxed.”

Some kinda weird bug where all the text goes bold in this scene. thankfully it doesnt persist afterwards.

Idk if this counts as a proper report, and sorry if im being rude and nitpicky by putting this in, but there are a fair amount of inconsistencies with the Verusha encounter on Myrellion if youve done her whole quest thing and shes moved to tavros. honestly, if you want, you could probably just...

Again, sorry for being nitpicky, but maybe change the "fingers" to "finger" You gasp as one of Verusha’s fingers suddenly penetrate your asshole up to her knuckle. Her finger wiggles around your behind, seeking that cum button hidden inside your ass that’ll melt you with pleasure.

sorry if this is a bit nitpicky, but this may flow better if you replace the first comma with a semicolon. sorry if im being rude or wasting your time, and please let me know if i am. Verusha looks at you as you continue to pummel your sheath against her muzzle, you can’t tell what she’s...

maybe remove the highlighted "it" or "her". whichever sounds best to you You moan as Verusha’s muzzle envelops your pre-slicked, bestial member. You want to fuck her it but you don’t know if that would be wise. She slowly drags her muzzle up to your blunt head before letting it out with a pop...

not sure what happened here, really. sorry for the screenshot, it didnt copy paste properly

bit suggestiony, and sorry about that, but maybe capitalize "after" and put a period after "me" “Sorry, I'm just so happy, Verusha means a lot to me,” after another moment she realizes what it sounds like. “N-not like that, we're just friends.”

missing space before "just" It squeezes your boobs tightly, all the while it dips deep into your crotch-soaking, black honeypot assiduously wrings your clydesdale-sized, equine tool, and you moan as the sensuality of four hands playing with you simultaneously overcomes you and you are driven...

Done! Thank you! No clue how i fucked it up earlier.... eh whatever.

missining space after smellin “Like what cha smellin’?”Blue teases, wiggling her hips. “I promise it tastes just as yummy as it smells.”

No clue how this happened, but for some reason the sleep with option for ramis is duplicated. again, can give my save file, but ill need some help. sorry.