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It seems to be possible to order the Kunoichi Bodysuit from Kohaku even if Kurako is still hostile to you and you don't even know her name yet. Attached save is after ordering the suit but before collecting it.

Just wanted to note that in addition to the spelling of chieftain, it should probably also read "fuck your brains out"

(Nyzerrah) with something more expected in the form of ~The silly text has a space either side, so when it's not displayed, there is a double space here between "expected" and "in the form of" They hang bare, and beads of the sweet nectar dribbles from them dribbles from -> dribble from Her...

(Honey Golem) before the honey all around the key wobbles and erupts ~In the rest of the scene, the PC is trying to get "the whip floating on top of the rippling honey-bath" dark-gold eyes start forming on from the momentarily-blank face forming on from -> forming from (Hornet Hive) This...

(Prince Nyze) A figure strides into view from the right side of the balcony, the crude-carved stairs caking in honey with every step they take. ~Honey is just appearing on the stairs? the crude-carved stairs caking in honey with every step they take. -> the honey dripping from their body caking...

(Kiyoko's Home) As for the fields, rows of tilled earth belie crops, some of which you recognise and others you don't. ~"belie" doesn't really makes sense to me here. her ability to coax the earth into bringing forth its fruits is shaping up to be legendary ~The period after "legendary" is on...

(Kinu) .Well, she's a woman now. ~Missing space after that period time flows strangely when compared to out here strangely when compared -> strangely there when compared As she approaches the nearest mandarin tree, the sets her ladder against its trunk the sets her -> she sets her Hey down...

(Miko & Kohaku) Least I can do f'r what yer giving us -- his divine lordship such rich veggies Least I can do f'r what yer giving us -> Least I can do f'r giving us ~I'm assuming this is 'I can do for what you're giving us'

(Takahiro) pushes the straw up, carefully biting the straw. up ,carefully biting the straw -> up and he carefully bites it The cork doesn't come out, yet raises enough that it allows him to sip a mouthful of booze; once he removes it, you spot the small yet raises -> yet it raises booze; once...

(Kohaku) it extends all the way to her curves of her pert, squeezable butt to her curves -> to the curves Not that there's any naked thigh visible — black silken leggings hug her legs all the way to her high boots, and one gets the impression that the amount of thigh between the hem of her...

(Vari) Good to [flags.VARI_MET|see |meet] you, Vari. ~There is an additional space after 'see'

(Kitsune Den) In lieu of saving space, Azami and her subordinates have eschewed futons in lieu of hammocks In lieu of -> By way of OR In lieu of saving space -> To save space The concierge herself has little need of personal possessions, but those of her subordinates are visible in their own...

(Imp encounter) While it may seem cruel, your decision have left Savarra a slightly better, less tainted place. have -> has ~Searching the code reveals that this seems to be in three different variations of the conclusion of this combat.

(Kurako) Nails digging into skin, you knead her mounds into your meat, gradually sinking to until you're pulsing against her taint. to until -> until you groan in satisfaction, every inch pushed through and every inch withdrawn a moment to relish and celebrate by smacking her apple-bottom. ~All...

(Ways Between) You stand overtop of the Marefolk Village, watching the equines come and go far beneath your feet. overtop of -> high above ~Whilst I can't say I'm personally familiar with the term 'overtop', this usage seems incorrect. They barely look like horses at all from this angle, so...

(Frostwood) Our, my, ancestors thought the earthfire would keep the frost from consuming our hearts. ~I suggest 'Our... my ancestors thought the earthfire would keep the frost from consuming our hearts.' ~There's a couple of different ways you could handle the start of this line but using commas...

(Frostwood) By now, the trail has completely petered out, and even if there were one wouldn't want to tread on bare ground anyway. ~Consider "even if there were one, one wouldn't want to tread on the bare ground here anyway" or "even if it hadn't, one wouldn't want to tread on the bare ground...

(Gianna) "There, Gianna’s the gargoyle, or a golem... Or something." Gianna's the gargoyle -> Gianna's a gargoyle ~I'm assuming that Gianna isn't the only gargoyle in this world. folding her arms, before finally taking a deep breath to answer. "Magic!". ~No need for that extra period. "Runes...

(Wayfort) There's a door leading east and west from here, and the hall stretches out well over a hundred feet to the south. There's a door -> There're doors OR There's a door leading -> There's a door leading to paths that go Beyond it, twenty paces further east, is the crumbling remains of a...

This is a reasonably lengthy list of things I picked up back in May 2020 on version 0.2.48 that I never got round to posting. However, I have checked all of these against the current version, and they are all still there.