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  1. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Glacial Rift) "sheltered somewhat my the mountain pass" my the -> by the
  2. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    I have screenshots for all of these, if needed.
  3. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (General) God versus gods. In general the game uses the plural, gods, except where it obviously refers to a single one of the gods. But in some scenes where the character is using it as an exclamation, god comes up in singular form for no real reason. I noticed it in a seen with Brienne, but I...
  4. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Kohaku) "overlook the indiscretion.What's more concerning" Missing space, although I didn't check the tags to see why.
  5. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Brother Sanders) This one is just my opinion. "and a viscous black liquid dribbles from the orb. Sanders drops his arms and hurries to pluck the gem up again, wincing when it pulls a muscle." "pluck the gem up again" -- As written, I have issue with both 'pluck' and 'again' here. I get that...
  6. CrackSpaniel

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    (Dorieann) "it\'s no surprise she was curious about you[party.solo\n |,\n |and your friends,\n ]" Add a space after "about you". "when you slip another finger into her stretching doecunt" First time you do this scene, it's missing the text where it says "You slip two fingers...
  7. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Solveig) "Get Rideen" Rideen -> Ridden
  8. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Gweyr)(Task) the lot of you double-timing it to keep pace with the wolfess through the snow and ice \n |double-timing it to keep pace with the wolfess through the snow and ice\n ]. This line ended up producing a space between "ice" and the period. "But the barrels, the equipment...
  9. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Gweyr flashback) (Sanders) "skimpy maid outfit is still where it is" where it is -> where it was (Leold) "You'd like more of where that came from, wouldn't you?" I suggest 'There's more where that came from. Don't you want more?' Leold doesn't care where it comes from, he just wants more...
  10. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Gweyr) "the snowshoes she's wearing prevents her" prevents -> prevent "He thought I wouldn't have the stomach to do it and turn back home" I suggest 'do it, and that I'd turn' "and when I turned" I suggest 'and when I turned around' "where the giantess of lupine makes her bed" of lupine ->...
  11. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Atugia) "She works with a masters precision" masters -> master's "Thats really all there is too it." Thats -> That's too -> to "a town with people you could talk too was wierd" too -> to wierd -> weird "intertwining your legs so that your [pc.Vagina]" [pc.Vagina] -> [pc.vagina]...
  12. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (General) Possibly not a bug, but the title you acquire is Champion of Frost, but scenes in the palace call you the champion of winter. Also, although champion of winter appears to be a title, it is not capitalised.
  13. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Etheryn & Elthara)(Winter festivus) "It's important that you not be seen monopolising [pc.name]" If Ryn spends too much time with us, we would be the one who would seem to be monopolising Ryn's time, not the other way around. I suggest one of the following: It's important that [pc.name] is...
  14. CrackSpaniel

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    (Banshee) & (Queen Atheldred) "going to need heirs in we're to rebuild our kingdom" in -> if (Queen Atheldred) "Is two centuries not enough to realize the hurt you've cause me" cause -> caused "Bow low before you queen, all of you!" you queen -> your queen (Atheldred & Synneva) "You...
  15. CrackSpaniel

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    (Hethia & Elthara) "Elthara says, sighing with relief as you[party.som|and the guards|and [companion.name]|and your party] arrive." Space needed after "as you". "You join the [pc.ra elf|other] elves at the bottom of the stairs" Move the space inside the tag to avoid a double space...
  16. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (General) There is inconsistency in the spelling of Hawkethorne and Castle Hawkstone. The spellings above are by far the most common, but there are few instances of Hawkthorne and Castle Hawkestone. Status effects on enemies have the same tooltip as for the player. I.e. "You are poisoned" etc.
  17. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Carmen) "So. To what do I owe the pleasure?" I suggest 'So, to what do I owe the pleasure?' Ryn gulps audibly. "I-I am Princess Etheryn var Ridell, of t-the Winter City. By ancient t-treaty, I humbly request sanctuary in Castle Hawkstone! The first variation of this line is missing the...
  18. CrackSpaniel

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    (Mushroom Druidess) "a quick survey around you reveals that [party.som|you\'re alone|it\'s just you and [comp1.name]|the three of you are alone].[comp1.|\n \n "I don\'t like this," [comp1.name] grumbles. "Hearing voices out of nowhere isn\'t-"\n \n "Mmm," the voice whispers. "Such a...
  19. CrackSpaniel

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    (Nyzerrah) "Regardless I believe there is anything we could do for you now" I believe there is -> I don't believe there is
  20. CrackSpaniel

    [0.3.31] Text errors/suggestions

    (Viviane) "Farther down, Cait\'s [var0\n |copious \n ] ass and tail" This rendered with a double space between "Cait's" and "ass" when playing. I'm guessing the one that needs to come out is the one on the tail end XD "The catgirl takes it in both hands and appraises" I...