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  1. SheepPun

    2017 XXX-Mas contest Submission compil and ADVICES.

    If it's like the Halloween contest then there'll be minimum to none. Last time entries got a short comment with their grade though. I chalk this up to time restraints.
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    Main Character Personalities - Easy to change?

    There are in fact many ways to alter one's personality.
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    2017 XXX-Mas contest Submission compil and ADVICES.

    I disagree with some of your calls on structure quality. But then again I also feel the color ranking is an unnecessary addition.
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    2017 XXX-Mas contest Submission compil and ADVICES.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEHVqCgfkzrnPYqzxBCVgBARDVDbYCv0wYXSM7NYtzE/edit?usp=sharing Any last second edits/corrections would be chill. I'll be going over it myself later tonight but I just need some time to not think about it after typing nonstop for ~3 hours.
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    XXX-Mas Contest Submission Thread

    I winded up rewriting and retooling this entry a couple times which I think probably hurt it's over all quality. Oops. But here's my new years dream entry: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEHVqCgfkzrnPYqzxBCVgBARDVDbYCv0wYXSM7NYtzE/edit?usp=sharing
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    SheepPun's Art-thread-thing

    /Drops off a sketch of Roxy's Mom /Drops off a sketch of the new years sparkly goo lady I'm writing for the XXXmas contest.
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    SheepPun's Art-thread-thing

    Dumps off this robot dick so I can say my commissions are open right now! HelpIhavenoideawhatI'mdoing
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    SheepPun's Art-thread-thing

    Dumps
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    [WIP] Roxy, the Laquine Power Bottom

    Moved Doc and updated link. Roxy is now about 8k words. :toot:
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    [WIP] Roxy, the Laquine Power Bottom

    Gdoc This is Roxy, a female Laquine who loves power bottoming and has a breeding fetish that I've been working on for the past few days. Her base content does involve preg content. I'm far from done as a lot of the writing is framework, filler, or waiting to be revised and added to but feel...
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    SheepPun's Art-thread-thing

    Small Art dumpp; Preg Roxy: Discord antics; Annndd goat fashion designer;
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    SheepPun's Art-thread-thing

    Glad to see a lot of people already like the concept of her. Means I'm doing something right I think. I'm calling her "Roxy" for now and she's a dork for full contact sports. Funny I just made her cause I wanted to see a Laquine without floppy ears and a horse cock. This round of sketching...
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    t.i.t.s. / c.o.c. art dump

    Gotta say your art is so cute it's giving me a sweet tooth also;
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    Remember that quantity doesn't equal quality. Fenoxo did state in the rules that; "No minimum or maximum length, but be aware that a 300 page manuscript could lose out to a five page document of pure, distilled awesome." But yeah it's pretty easy to be hyper critical of your own work.
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    Oh my. While you shouldn't of let anyone edit the doc in the permissions, that's kinda fucked up to fuck with someone's submission. I think you can undo all the damage by going to an older saved version before the fuckery. Edit: you can in fact go to an older version of the doc. Click the...
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    SheepPun's Art-thread-thing

    As I've been writing more and more I've come to realize I'm cozier writing females then males. So I'm putting Chinchilla man on the back burner for now. I intend fully to go back to him. Current idea I'm refining is a female laquine. Been flip flopping the idea of her being either a drag racer...
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    So, what sort of creatures have you made by cobbling together TFs?

    But is your Steele on fire and constantly screaming praise? I mean might as well go the full nine yards. It ain't a sexy nine yards granted but many angels are kinda very terrifying. I'm actually pretty uncreative when it comes to my Steele. Best I've created was jack-raskvel which was just a...
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    SheepPun's Art-thread-thing

    Bear aliens should be a thing, but I feel my depiction is too generic. I tired making them cyclops but /shruggs
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    Halloweiner Chat room, to discuss the submissions

    Looking through the other submissions has been fun so far! Also makes me realize one major thing I need to work on in my writing is pacing. Rereading my entry made me realize I'm prone to rushing things along. And probably comma abuse. Either way, win or lose, I'm glad I entered. It was good...
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    SheepPun's Art-thread-thing

    So I've started a self challenge; randomly generate an entity/deity/monster/whatever from mythology and an animal then combine them to make a race for TiTS. Because I'm bored. Like usual, will probably never write them but throwing them out there, so if one hits your writer button then by all...