Simple Scene Submissions

[Savin]

Hello, fellow writers, I have a small request to make of you!


As you may have noted from the blog, I'm in the process of learning how to work TiTS' code. The best way to do that is to just add content to the game and learn (or get help from Gednoxo) as I go. However, I'm not quite ready to start adding full fledged NPCs/enemies/TF paths to the game yet. But I can do individual scenes/events pretty well now! Unfortunately, the vast majority of submissions on our work Trello are fairly large and involved (including everything I've written that's in the backlog)!


So if you've got any individual sex scenes or talk/simple events you've done for existing NPCs lying around, I'd love to have them! If you haven't written for TiTS/Fengames but want to, or you've just noticed that you'd really like {character} to have more scenes and want to be a bro and fill them out, this could also be a great way to do that. Assuming the content's more or less up to quality standards, I'll even copy edit/QA the content (since I'm one of the approval vectors for TiTS submissions anyway).


Just drop finished Google Docs here or shoot 'em to me in a PM and I'll try my darndest to work through 'em.

 

[TheDarkMaster]

Do masturbation scenes count?  This has been sitting around for several months now.


Thread: https://fenoxo.com/forum/index.php?/topic/72-special-lactation-milksturbation/


Gdoc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H39yo8VFbB-NglU6YuPwt5G20RFY2IVVUN5yXSU_INE/edit

 

[Idanis]

this is a pretty neat and fun idea! what kinda time frame are we talkin here? 1-3 weeks or just kinda open until you decide.

 

[Savin]

this is a pretty neat and fun idea! what kinda time frame are we talkin here? 1-3 weeks or just kinda open until you decide.

I'll keep coding scenes as long as I keep getting them. :3 Hopefully turn individual ones around in a few days.

Do masturbation scenes count?  This has been sitting around for several months now.


Gdoc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H39yo8VFbB-NglU6YuPwt5G20RFY2IVVUN5yXSU_INE/edit

I like how 3/4 of those are for milktypes that the player can't actually get. :V


Will read over the Chocolac one, though.

 

[Nonesuch]

I've got this Sera expansion, doubt if you've heard about it. It's pretty straightforward.

 

[Woider]

Do masturbation scenes count?  This has been sitting around for several months now.


Thread: https://fenoxo.com/forum/index.php?/topic/72-special-lactation-milksturbation/


Gdoc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H39yo8VFbB-NglU6YuPwt5G20RFY2IVVUN5yXSU_INE/edit

I have to say, the hyper-lactation variants had me in stitches. Especially the cheesecake variant.


If I wasn't weighed down by work, I'd totally try my hand at something.

 

[Savin]

I've got this Sera expansion, doubt if you've heard about it. It's pretty straightforward.

:V


Gimme a few months and I might be able to take on big things like that. Maybe.

 

[Krynh]

ignore this/ 

 

[TheDarkMaster]

I like how 3/4 of those are for milktypes that the player can't actually get. :V


Will read over the Chocolac one, though.

I was commissioned to write them at the same time that Couch was commissioned to write a whole bunch of lactation type TF items.  The commissioner wanted variations for all of them eventually, but we never got that far before they vanished.

 

[CrusaderDurante]

I've been working on a weapon for TiT's use, but only have a relatively rough outline so far. I plan on adding onto the document tonight regarding the possibility of Emmy/Anno having to fix it. I may attempt to clean up the document some, as I feel like it's a sloppy mess. 


Edit 1: Added handing it in to Anno and alternate text for if the blade is to be defective. 


Edit 2: Rewrote some based on feedback on GDoc. Will be adding more Anno text later. Hopefully Emmy will be done soon, but I don't really have a feel for her.


Original thread: Here.


GDoc: Here.

 

[Noob Salad]

I vote you should finish Reaha's expansion and write a threesome with Anno and Syri.


By the way, I noticed a certain "Quest" was being worked on over on the repository. Was that your doing? I'm surprised it's going to be finished so early. Then again I haven't really been paying attention so as far as I know it's been written for months.

 

[Savin]

I vote you should finish Reaha's expansion and write a threesome with Anno and Syri.


By the way, I noticed a certain "Quest" was being worked on over on the repository. Was that your doing? I'm surprised it's going to be finished so early. Then again I haven't really been paying attention so as far as I know it's been written for months.

This isn't a "Savin write {X} thread." :|


Also yes, KaraQuest 2 has in fact been done for something like half a year.

 

[Noob Salad]

This isn't a "Savin write {X} thread." :|

Man, for like a half-second there I thought you've actually done one before and that I just missed it,.

 

[Eva]

Ooh, a tempting offer. Let's see, who could use more content... Xanthe springs to mind, since she currently has 1.5 scenes total. Then again, there is the problem of her 'belonging' to JimThermic, and JimThermic not being around.


Oh hey, there's a thought - Vanae Gossip could be a thing of about this size, and I'm pretty sure I already have permission to go ahead with that from JimT. Lemme check my PMs here really quick. 

 

[Foxxling]

idk if this counts as a simple scene but the Milk Barn Voyeur scene could be something to cut your teeth on.

 

[kinkyman12]

With the addition of the GravCuffs, there should be an option to combine those with the hovering pocket pussy.  Also, it'd be awesome to be able to cuff yourself ANYWHERE, especially in the wild (where you encounter battles) to be taken by beasties.  I'd be specifically interested in a Naleen scene where some brutal squeezing happens along with sex of course.


The cuffs are by far my favorite addition to date and I look forward to seeing them (hopefully) expand in use.


Keep up the good work

 

[Fully Automated]

With the addition of the GravCuffs, there should be an option to combine those with the hovering pocket pussy.  Also, it'd be awesome to be able to cuff yourself ANYWHERE, especially in the wild (where you encounter battles) to be taken by beasties.  I'd be specifically interested in a Naleen scene where some brutal squeezing happens along with sex of course.

Reading is hard.

 

[CrusaderDurante]

Reading is hard.

Well, when you see "Simple Scene Submissions", do you assume you'll have to do the work yourself? 


Anyway, I added a tad more to the GDoc. Still trying to work out Emmy text. Would combat flavor text be of any use? 

 

[Savin]

Well, when you see "Simple Scene Submissions", do you assume you'll have to do the work yourself? 

You would if you read the OP.


Also, what do you mean by "combat flavor text" exactly? 

 

[CrusaderDurante]

You would if you read the OP.


Also, what do you mean by "combat flavor text" exactly? 

Reading is usually too much effort. 


Mostly just fluff for crits and the like. Instead of "You hit [target] for x damage! Crit!" Probably just "Your strike bypasses the enemy's shield and pierces a weak spot in the armor! [Crit Damage here]." 


I figure that would be too much of a hassle coding wise, seeing as it'd be for (at first) the rapier exclusively. And then you'd open up another floodgate of text for every weapon under the sun. 

 

[Nonesuch]

I don't think it would be TOO hard, as the structure to support that kind of thing already exists. The fact that it would be only for one weapon is neither here nor there really - it would set a precedent that others could either build on or ignore as they chose.


Of course it would all have to be written and clearly labelled out, and if reading alone is too much effort for you...

 

[CrusaderDurante]

I don't think it would be TOO hard, as the structure to support that kind of thing already exists. The fact that it would be only for one weapon is neither here nor there really - it would set a precedent that others could either build on or ignore as they chose.


Of course it would all have to be written and clearly labelled out, and if reading alone is too much effort for you...

I'll give it a go then, if I can wrap everything else up in a decent time. Could consider it a decent mini-project at the worst, yeah?


The reading thing was more aimed at people who dive in and just throw out "Savin write x" or more or less made suggestions to nobody. 

 

[FwuffyBlue]

If i wrote some PC victory scenes for monsters involving male steel getting his butt stuffed on his own terms, would that fall under "simple Scene?" this is the kind of opportunity i might need.

 

[Fully Automated]

If i wrote some PC victory scenes for monsters involving male steel getting his butt stuffed on his own terms, would that fall under "simple Scene?" this is the kind of opportunity i might need.

I imagine individual sex scenes would fall under "individual sex scenes" that he's looking for.

 

[FwuffyBlue]

whoops. i guess my reading comprehension leaves a bit to be desired.

 

[Fully Automated]

If it's about Steele getting it in the butt, do give some consideration at allowing other genitalia setups.

 

[FwuffyBlue]

If it's about Steele getting it in the butt, do give some consideration at allowing other genitalia setups.

Will do.

 

[Savin]

If i wrote some PC victory scenes for monsters involving male steel getting his butt stuffed on his own terms, would that fall under "simple Scene?" this is the kind of opportunity i might need.

Yeah, that'd be great.

Will do.

Don't feel compelled to make a scene work for multiple gender setups -- that actually makes it a lot more complex to write and code. It's fine to have a dedicated buttstuff scene, trust me

 

[FwuffyBlue]

Okay, I hope i formatted this correctly but I probably missed something, since i wasn't sure how to set up just one scene as a submission. I also think i set this up with correct permissions as well, since i haven't really used Gdocs for this kind of thing before. also writing style, also etc etc. worries worries bleh.


It's an M/M scene for the Zil with PC on top.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZDl4JwtezX0dnEvwwoKfoFaO7Ma40Sg8FOoVXn-Df_c/edit?usp=sharing


Edit: Took lashcharge's suggestions, added tool-tip and set to comment mode. I'm aware that fighs other than the zil need more scenes (i'm looking at you, sexbots. cautiously glancing in their direction, at any rate.)


In the future I'll remember the parser more, thanks for the input, lash, i really appreciate it.

 

[Lashcharge]

Okay, I hope i formatted this correctly but I probably missed something, since i wasn't sure how to set up just one scene as a submission. I also think i set this up with correct permissions as well, since i haven't really used Gdocs for this kind of thing before. also writing style, also etc etc. worries worries bleh.


It's an M/M scene for the Zil with PC on top.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZDl4JwtezX0dnEvwwoKfoFaO7Ma40Sg8FOoVXn-Df_c/edit?usp=sharing

I've read this doc and here are my comments:


There is no need to put "no vagina" as a requirement. The scene works well without mentioning it.


There's lot of zil stuff. Not that it's bad or a problem but other fights could use more scenes.


It needs a bit more parser I'll throw a few suggestions in. Also you put this on editing mode for everyone and that's kinda bad.


EDIT: And the button misses tooltip.