Yeah I found their relationship cute but it does feel very much like pc is just an outsider. But as I said I didn't really care that much for Daliza or Jaelyn so ...
I guess both of them are more for ppl into taking passive role in the threesome or having those main couple the focus of the polyamory rather than pc. Which is fine but I personally enjoy it when pc takes an active role both in&out of bed/fucking.
Not every threesome or relationship has to focus on pc but I like it when there's like an equal or similar amount of attention and pleasure given to pc regardless of whether pc plays a supporting (less focus) or dominant role (main focus). Like a good example of that I really enjoyed was Evelyn threesome where Evelyn is the main focus and PC is supporting role but pc gets a good amount of attention and pleasure as any other members in that sex scene.
I think I could accept their relationship priority more if it were properly portrayed that the player is enjoying being on the outside part of it. Or if it were properly shown that your character
enjoys watching Jael bone Daliza. But there's this...strange sort of neglect to the player's part in most scenes, like it was written to be Jael and Daliza, and then the writer remembered last minute that there's a player character that has to be involved. A great example of this is in the wayfort path, when you pick the spitroast option.
Once the actual sexy times start, the entire frontload of it (~3 paragraphs) is almost entirely about Daliza and Jael get into it and getting their clothes off with each other. You get half a single sentence denoted to your part in that process, which is that you just throw your gear onto the floor on your own while Jael sensually and lustfully removes Daliza's and her own. Only after those three paragraphs end does your character get involved, but it doesn't really say enough to make you feel like a worthwhile part of things. It's noncommittal and vague.
And that also colors the rest of the scene too, really. The champion is an
afterthought in these scenes. The way your champion feels is never really addressed properly beyond vague physical pleasure and you yourself don't really do anything that affects Daliza in noticeable ways either. Virtually every line is about Jaelyn doing something to make Daliza feel better and better, but it doesn't directly translate to you getting off on seeing it--not like cucking or something. It's just a statement of fact. It goes 3 and half sentences about Jaelyn demolishing Daliza, and that last half sentence is about how it makes her suck you off better.
Hopefully this will really put it into perspective for those still on the fence about whether you really are just sort of an extra in their threesome:
You can't even fuck Daliza in these threesomes. Doesn't matter which route you take, wayfort or frosthound. No joke. You can get or give oral, or take Jaelyn, but you cannot fuck Daliza yourself.
And again, it's not portrayed as a studding or cucking thing, your character doesn't get clearcut enjoyment from watching this stuff the way they do from, say, watching Brint fuck others. If anything, various points of dialogue make your character seem somewhat annoyed or dismissive of the whole thing, but also not hard enough to veer into fetish territory, like...Nice Time for Roo-type stuff.
These threesomes are just...nothing. They seem afraid to commit to any theme, which results in your character just sort of being there.
EDIT: Ohhh. Nice time for roo is a forum filter for the thing that I actually wrote. Huh. I figured it out by context when it was mentioned before but that's a strange filter to have.
