XXX-mas Contest Discussion Thread

[Evil]

Hell I don't even know the name of all my kids, I have way too many to keep track of them all other than by species really. So I don't expect Jill to either.

See that’s the easiest part. Just give them barcode tattoos that contain their information and set up the codex to scan and relay the info to you.

“Hey! Ausar Pup #342, how are you doing, kiddo? How’s your mommy doing? Did you eat all your homewor—Damnit Codex....oh wait, it says here you’re teething, so I guess chewing homework helps then. Take care kiddo.”

 

[N.W.]

Hey guys, I'm new but wanted to submit something since it looked like fun. I've finished the whole setting page; is it too early to ask for feedback or is it ok to share it already?

 

[Zavos]

Hey guys, I'm new but wanted to submit something since it looked like fun. I've finished the whole setting page; is it too early to ask for feedback or is it ok to share it already?

Nope, never too early.

 

[N.W.]

Nope, never too early.

Alright I put it in the compil and advice thread if you wanna check it out

 

[Dark67titan]

kirorororo, im sorry to say but Alice has been cancelled

 

[Jarl Calvados]

EDIT
Nevermind. I found this page:
https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/2017-xxx-mas-contest-submission-compil-and-advices.11866/
Which was a lot of help.
Thanks anyway.

Yo!

I'm compliantly new to the forums, so I apologize for any noobness on my behalf. I'm an author who usually writes horror and fantasy for various magazines, but I came upon this contest in my 'leisure' time and was struck by the idea. It looks like a lot of fun, but I can't seem to find any hard guidelines of how to submit. It's most likely that I've missed it due to the aforementioned noobness, but if anyone could point it out to me, I would greatly appreciate it.

A few questions:
I'm assuming that the story has to be written in second person narrative like the game?
Should one write a straight story, or should there be choices to be made? And if one writes it with choices to be made, can one leave a note, or does one need some coding experience. I saw the term 'parser, ' but I didn't understand it. Guess that's what I get for being a paperback kind of person, haha.

Thanks in advance for anyone kind enough to answer and help out. I hope to be able to give you a sultry tale of failed space pirates and prostitution as Jarl tries to find his way home for Christmas.

Kind regards,
Jarl

 

[Dragonice]

In my free time I have looked at my past mistakes, I have been given advice about my lack of knowledge in English by Sivan. Studying to preform better day in and out like leafs falling for the next summer I shall be ready.

 

[Magic Ted]

Yo!

The parser refers to the under the hood system to the game that takes a character's given traits, like their eyecolor, and injects it into the text seamlessly by calling it in the text. For instance, You look to Anno with your [pc.eyes]. Or whatever.

Use the writing guide as per usual for a reference to your other questions.

 

[Kirorororo]

kirorororo, im sorry to say but Alice has been cancelled

My bad, simple spelling mistake, I meant Aliss the Ovir clothes seller.

 

[Jarl Calvados]

The parser refers to the under the hood system to the game that takes a character's given traits, like their eyecolor, and injects it into the text seamlessly by calling it in the text. For instance, You look to Anno with your [pc.eyes]. Or whatever.

Use the writing guide as per usual for a reference to your other questions.

You're a scholar and a gent.

Cheers.

 

[Jarl Calvados]

Use the writing guide as per usual for a reference to your other questions.

Also, just in case it's been overlooked. The link for Smutosaur Wiki has wander off into the land of 404.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

Also, just in case it's been overlooked. The link for Smutosaur Wiki has wander off into the land of 404.

What? No it hasn't. I just was on the site, and it was fine.

 

[Jarl Calvados]

What? No it hasn't. I just was on the site, and it was fine.

Never mind, you're right. It's working now. Must have just been temporary.

 

[Voldine]

Just putting it out that I already have three ideas, two of which are likely to get finished and the third would probably have little more than a character description and some dialogue.

Mintee, a reindeer-taur.

Mintee's Mint-T's, an item that alters semen so that it has one of three (maybe four) mint flavors. (Possible variants for 'girlcum' and breast milk.)

Witchtits, an SSTD originating on everyone's favorite arctic moon that starts off as a persistent chill.

 

[Kirorororo]

Just putting it out that I already have three ideas, two of which are likely to get finished and the third would probably have little more than a character description and some dialogue.

Mintee, a reindeer-taur.

Mintee's Mint-T's, an item that alters semen so that it has one of three (maybe four) mint flavors. (Possible variants for 'girlcum' and breast milk.)

Witchtits, an SSTD originating on everyone's favorite arctic moon that starts off as a persistent chill.

Like eggnog variant

 

[Dark67titan]

My bad, simple spelling mistake, I meant Aliss the Ovir clothes seller.

thats fine accidents happen

 

[Voldine]

Like eggnog variant

Eggnog is not mint.

 

[Gardeford]

i'm planning a 1 time silly mode encounter with bringing christmas to various inhabitants of the main town on mhenga

 

[NotYouNorI]

Like eggnog variant

Eggnog is not mint.

We already have NutNog. Though, Peckermint only effects male cum.

 

[Voldine]

We already have NutNog. Though, Peckermint only effects male cum.

Peckermint also has a different secondary effect than I have in mind, and is restricted to only one flavor of mint. It neglects spearmint, wintergreen/wintermint, or the just plain general mintiness that forms the basis of mint chocolate chip ice cream. Granted it does so in service to a decent bit of wordplay..

P.S. Of course, only now do I realize (upon looking at the editor info) that the system doesn't offer simple flavor alterations, and my primary idea would create a minimum of six new varieties for each body fluid type other than saliva.

 

[Magic Ted]

Vegan eggnog, now with real nog.

 

[N.W.]

is 1792 words long for one sex scene ?

 

[Lkynmbr24]

is 1792 words long for one sex scene ?

No, not really. I've written sex scenes about 3 times as long before, though most often times it's due to variants within the same scene.

 

[N.W.]

No, not really. I've written sex scenes about 3 times as long before, though most often times it's due to variants within the same scene.

Alright, maybe I'll add more stuff if I have enough time later

 

[Upcast Drake]

is 1792 words long for one sex scene ?

Ciaran has 30k words for 5 sex scenes...

I would definitely say his scenes are the exception and not the norm, though.

 

[N.W.]

Ciaran has 30k words for 5 sex scenes...

I would definitely say his scenes are the exception and not the norm, though.

ok that’s pretty insane

 

[Savin]

is 1792 words long for one sex scene ?

My go-to is "1500 +/- 500"

 

[Voldine]

Anyone know, off the top of their head, roughly how many characters play with Steel's breasts during sex scenes? Trying to determine if it'll be too much work customizing a reaction to something for every NPC and I should just come up with a variety of plausible reactions from anyone.

 

[Savin]

Anyone know, off the top of their head, roughly how many characters play with Steel's breasts during sex scenes? Trying to determine if it'll be too much work customizing a reaction to something for every NPC and I should just come up with a variety of plausible reactions from anyone.

A lot.

 

[Raindrops]

Anyone know, off the top of their head, roughly how many characters play with Steel's breasts during sex scenes? Trying to determine if it'll be too much work customizing a reaction to something for every NPC and I should just come up with a variety of plausible reactions from anyone.

If what you're thinking of is "I'm going to make Steele's breasts be something unique, and I want every NPC to notice that they are odd" then that is probably an unfeasible thing to do. For one, the amount of NPCs already in the game that in one way or another deal with Steeles breasts is *huge*, so it'd be a lot of work for very little gain to write stuff for each of them... But you also have the problem of it being completely unsustainable in the future, because you'd need to write scenes for future NPCs too.