Hello all, a good while ago ago I started writing a character, a cute catboy (not Kathrit) named Raye. The character and document have been progressing nicely, but the time it has taken and the size of the document have both been larger than expected.
Here is the doc. Be as critical as you like. I am fully open to suggestions in the writing and general character design of Raye, scene additions, editing, and anything else anyone feels like mentioning. Any and all help in getting this thing done is appreciated, as it has grown into quite a large project.
For some backstory, I have previous writing experience and most of it comes pretty naturally; however, this is my first time writing smut. I'm surprised at how easy it's been to make the transition. I hope what I have so far is of acceptable quality, as this is also my first time really sharing my writing work to anything more than colleagues.
I would be lying if Raye wasn't just a mash of my own personal fetishes, but I am trying and planning to make any weird shit optional. Time will tell.
Full disclosure, I would also be lying if I said I wasn't at least partially inspired by Lithier's game and his own cute cat character he's written; I never intended for this project to actually come to fruition, so I didn't worry about the fact that they were at a base level similar characters. Raye has diversified nicely as I continue to write and go back over older scenes, and he never was intended to be a direct copy anyway, so I hope by sharing this I don't step on any toes. I just wanted to write something fun and cute, and that game contains some of my favorite erotic literature to date. Consider it a homage.
Furthermore, Raye is written as a sub and with a PC dom, but not super BDSM dom. More of a owner/pet relationship than anything, I guess. Much of the writing is very lovey-dommy since that's what I'm into, especially for treated males who get a lot of special treatment (ha). I plan to branch out a bit though to cater to different playstyles; I know I hate it when my Steele reacts to a situation completely unnaturally, breaking immersion. However, cock size will still play a large role in how Raye treats you and what you can do with him. He doesn't really like tiny-cocked guys or women, but I've began support for hardlight, and I might try some other things. I may write some dommy vag scenes where he fucks the PC after you get to know him well, but that's about as far as I'm willing for the time being.
If things go well, I would also like to take a shot at coding Raye myself, or at least pitch in to it. Gives me a reason to learn AS and Flash.
Thanks for reading.
Here is the doc. Be as critical as you like. I am fully open to suggestions in the writing and general character design of Raye, scene additions, editing, and anything else anyone feels like mentioning. Any and all help in getting this thing done is appreciated, as it has grown into quite a large project.
For some backstory, I have previous writing experience and most of it comes pretty naturally; however, this is my first time writing smut. I'm surprised at how easy it's been to make the transition. I hope what I have so far is of acceptable quality, as this is also my first time really sharing my writing work to anything more than colleagues.
I would be lying if Raye wasn't just a mash of my own personal fetishes, but I am trying and planning to make any weird shit optional. Time will tell.
Full disclosure, I would also be lying if I said I wasn't at least partially inspired by Lithier's game and his own cute cat character he's written; I never intended for this project to actually come to fruition, so I didn't worry about the fact that they were at a base level similar characters. Raye has diversified nicely as I continue to write and go back over older scenes, and he never was intended to be a direct copy anyway, so I hope by sharing this I don't step on any toes. I just wanted to write something fun and cute, and that game contains some of my favorite erotic literature to date. Consider it a homage.
Furthermore, Raye is written as a sub and with a PC dom, but not super BDSM dom. More of a owner/pet relationship than anything, I guess. Much of the writing is very lovey-dommy since that's what I'm into, especially for treated males who get a lot of special treatment (ha). I plan to branch out a bit though to cater to different playstyles; I know I hate it when my Steele reacts to a situation completely unnaturally, breaking immersion. However, cock size will still play a large role in how Raye treats you and what you can do with him. He doesn't really like tiny-cocked guys or women, but I've began support for hardlight, and I might try some other things. I may write some dommy vag scenes where he fucks the PC after you get to know him well, but that's about as far as I'm willing for the time being.
If things go well, I would also like to take a shot at coding Raye myself, or at least pitch in to it. Gives me a reason to learn AS and Flash.
Thanks for reading.
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