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Pc and Reina worshipping Bianca's ass is mandatory. One cheek per face.
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I caved and asked the artist to add Riley to the other cheek in that picture. I was gonna keep it secret until you called me out like this. :gizz:


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Is there going to be a very platonic high-fiving only threesome with Reina and Leila spit-roasting Steele?
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Yes.
 
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I’d like to see laila and reina sucking pcs cock, though I’d be restricted to a horse cock, and minimum like 16”
 
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Just wondering, what do you think would be Bianca's perception of Steele possibly owning slaves? I'm speaking mainly with Roo and Reaha in mind, but this could also branch off into other ones like a bimbofied Kiro. I know how she has a negative response to a bimbofied Steele. Would she be negatively impacted by Steele keeping Mitzi or Kiro around? I just wanted to poke your brain about these things, because I'd like to prevent any ill feelings between my crew members if possible.
 
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Roast_chicken said:
Just wondering, what do you think would be Bianca's perception of Steele possibly owning slaves? I'm speaking mainly with Roo and Reaha in mind, but this could also branch off into other ones like a bimbofied Kiro. I know how she has a negative response to a bimbofied Steele. Would she be negatively impacted by Steele keeping Mitzi or Kiro around? I just wanted to poke your brain about these things, because I'd like to prevent any ill feelings between my crew members if possible.
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The thought has crossed my mind many times. If you were able to bring her on the ship, then you'd have to lie to her or persuade her, but too many incidents and she'd choose never to fly with you again. She'd know Mitzi was broken, for example. That's not your fault, and you can definitely make the case that she's better off on your roster -- anyone else would take advantage of her, destroy the chance of curing her forever.

If you ever had the chance to own a Gastigoth inmate, she'd be wary, but it's not full slavery. They're criminals, and you could play it off as reformation. Also, you can already tell her about your exploits, and anyone you can send to Gastigoth is a story you can share with her, and she's approving of that, if frustrated that Steele is putting themself in mortal danger.

Actual slavery, OR indentured servitude: Roo would count against this. Absolutely. Sera, too, but I feel there's definitely a way to avoid blows on that topic. It's possible to write a response where you claim Sera's alternatives would be a shittier life, and with you, she still had the chance to get some stability AND set up her shop.

So on Sera, if you let her have a shop and have realized the relationship, Bianca would not begrudge that.

Yet as I said, Roo would count. Roo wears her collar at all times as your property, as it's currently written. You had the chance to free her, and kitty-cat isn't a liar - she'd explain to anyone on your crew why she was there.

Bimbo Kiro? Absolutely a problem. Her dialogue makes it very clear that she's property. She talks about how you're her owner, her [pc.master], and you can even, if you have her Bimbo'd, give her an entirely new name. That'd come off as suspicious af no matter how you painted it.

So, you can see this is a case-by-case explanation. Most of the current possible crew members wouldn't provoke a response. Sera's so open ended so it's easy to have variations there.

Ardia? Well, I think it needs to be un-commented now, but Bianca can be told about Ardia during Crew talk, and your addiction affects it. Speaking of, there's something in the [Get Fingered] scene that has an Ardia check.

// Ardia (must tell Bianca about Zheng Shi)

Many enemies you faced on Zheng Shi, but you found friends among them. "While traversing Zheng Shi, I became familiar with a dzaan woman named Ardia. She was abducted on one of the pirate's many slave runs. I managed to save her from a sordid fate, and I've taken her on board for as long as she'd like."

"But..." Bianca glare at you sternly, "is she an alpha or a beta?"

// Ardia domscale 0

An alpha, you explain, knowing that the doctor is worried about your mental capacity. You haven't ingested any of her narcotic sperm. By your account, Ardia's been forthcoming and respectful.

"I see, I see..." Bianca sighs happily. "Their biology is... while I understand it, it makes me uncomfortable. It's part of their race's culture and their entire way of life, but what it can do to others, especially when misapplied... it frightens me. Please exercise all due caution when you are with her, okay? I know this sounds rude and uncouth, but there's a very real consequence to bedding an alpha dzaan, and while many say they are prepared for it, they typically aren't."

You'll be fine.

// Ardia domscale 1-3 (includes beta withdrawal too)

An alpha, certainly. Before Bianca gets into a tizzy, you {servicedAgrosh: explain that ingesting her cum was necessary, a life or death moment on the station /didNotService: explain that while your thoughts do occasionally wander for your alph- crew member's companionship, you're not a simpering puppet to narcotic sperm.

"[pc.name]..." The foxy doctor looks mildly harmed by the revelation. "There are suppressants-" She stops herself, hand over her mouth. "No, that's not for me to say. I just... I just don't want to see you lose yourself. Dzaan biology is uniquely attuned to their race and specific culture. If you go too far you may lose yourself, and that frightens me to the core. I implore you to be careful. Please."

Whatever happens, you don't plan on losing your identity, regardless of how deep your alpha-beta relationship goes.

// Ardia domscale 4-6

<i>She's your alpha.</i> You couldn't stop yourself from mouthing those damning words, and Bianca half-recoils. You raise your hands in desperation, reassuring vocabulary spilling forth. You aren't her slave, you aren't a mindless puppet. No, you have a real relationship with Ardia, one that's deepened to a point you can taste her in your dreams. For Bianca's sake, you don't speak that last part. Nor any of the other lurid fantasies coming to mind.

"[pc.name], you're addicted to her," Bianca says flatly, snapping her finger in front of your eyes. "But you're not at some point of no return. Even dzaan biology has its limits. I don't begrudge you your choice in deepening your relationship with someone like her, but the effect it can have on you scares me. I hope you understand fully what may happen should you continue, and I hope that if it does happen... you don't lose yourself..."
The only thing you intend to lose yourself to is the world of pleasure that comes from being a beta. What Bianca hears, though, is your resolve to retain your identity.

// Ardia domscale 7-10

<i>Ardia is your alpha, and you are her beta. You are the first of many moons that will orbit her.</i> Your slavish adoration for the dzaan whose dominated your mind would continue if you were not so empathic to Bianca's increasingly perturbed expression. When the fantasies of nuzzling Ardia's infinite ballsack fade you rapidly shake your head and raise your hands in a calming gesture, very aware of how close you came to looking like a mindbroken [pc.manWoman].

What tumbles out of your mouth next is reassurance. Reassurance that you are always going to be [pc.name] Steele and will always have your identity. Ardia, and her biology, are things you accepted. You wanted a deeper relationship with her, and weren't afraid of the consequences. In all honesty, while you are under the effects of her intoxicating sperm, you have full control. You are still <i>you,</i> and to your relief, Bianca accepts that answer.

"I'm happy for you, then, [pc.name]." Her voice comes out in a terse timbre that gradually softens. "It's not my place to judge... but it still hurts me to see... what you were doing. Nothing terrifies me more than a person so full of life losing everything; their identity, their personality, their intelligence, all of it, just to be reduced to a-a-a... a toy. Please, promise me you'll hold on to yourself no matter what. I care about you, and I want the best for you. I just hope that 'the best' isn't giving yourself up."

It's not. Ardia may be the best thing ever to you right now, but she's just an inseparable part of the born beta: [pc.name] Steele.
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GUYS.

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@Robbaps

This commission is doing things to me.
 
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So, I just came off of fighting to get my internet restored for the last three weeks (EarthLink sucks) and I'm blown away by what I've read hear. Way too much for me to even comment on right now, but I'm really liking what I've read on Mischief Maker.

I'm curious about the Laquine Fuckdoll... I recall you stated that you don't enjoy odd nipples so you don't include them in your writing, yet she's rocking quad nips...

After reading that bit about Bianca and slaves, I just know that none of my Steeles will ever get along with her... too many slaves and bimbos on their ships, not enough places to hide them.
 
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I'm curious about the Laquine Fuckdoll... I recall you stated that you don't enjoy odd nipples so you don't include them in your writing, yet she's rocking quad nips...
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She's a generic NPC and one of the handcrafted dolls of a mad scientist. I was just fine with making her look the part.

It's when I put it in the lens of my persistent characters, when I write them, that I am disinclined.
 
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Cool. Thanks for clearing that up for me.
 
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I've been acclimating myself to Roo's project doc and mechanics again. A big push is coming and it's not the child birthing kind, though we'll certainly have room for that in the future because DZ won't forgive me otherwise. (And she'll have room for plenty - HEYYOOO)

It's shameful it's taken this long. However, like with Leila, there's always time to nail certain mechanics that were a mystery before. For example, I was told a few months ago there wasn't distinct enough difference between Free and Slave Roo. I usually come up with a lot of things by talking about them in the FenChat Public Discord (which you should join if you like killing time!) and there was a very good idea I've come to decide Roo needs. Besides, I owe a lot of interest at this point.

If Roo is a Slave, I'm gonna put in a couple of smaller scenes where you tell her to go bang or get banged by other crew members to keep them happy. If you want Kase to get his daily dose of (milky) paizuri, make it so. You will be able to watch and masturbate to them -- at first. I don't have any immediate plans to make Steele a participant in these specifically. I have other legit threesomes to see to first, so I'll see which ones I like while I do them. Also, it was always intended for MilkyRoo to be usable in the Nursery Milker to feed your babies with. I think a scene of that feat. Reaha will be fantastic.

So as it stands, in terms of main differences between Slave & Property Roo vs. Free & Hired Roo:

1) Tones in talk scenes. Depending on alignment, you can be more controlling or reserved. This is the thing I need to spend quite a bit of time smoothing out, that's where the aforementioned criticism came from.

2) In smut: Slave: Making a sex slave out of her. Having her perform for money. Perhaps even outright prostitution on safe worlds like Mhen'ga. I wanted planet blurbs, so this is a great place to start. Penny Camwhore will be a great partner on the ship. Her core sex scenes will reflect her status the most I hope. The PC can be rougher, more dominant, really enjoy the quiver and the meow. In the past I talked about how she'd have a lot of specific features as a slave too, like ordering her to strip, be naked, no leaving the ship, no crew interactions, etcetera. Really take control of her life. Even tell her to beg for sex when she's horny. That will all be there.

Free Roo will have initiative, and this can lead to her pushing the envelope. I've had a facesit + riding scene in mind for ages, where she ambushes you in your sleep for messy, hot, lovely sex. A very special scene is also planned for Free Roo + Dick-wielding PCs only, one that will very much speak to the kind of optimistic, silver-lining writing style I'm often employing. Her place on-board and mood should be clearly differentiated.

Free Roo also has the added benefit of an extremely wholesome sequence of events that will never be open to slavemakers.

For the time being, I'd like to post this( again?), since when you buy her (and depending on Freedom/Slavery) you have different teasers of content available to you in the moments before she's officially on the roster. This particular scene is purchasing her as property, and ordering her to undress.

Roo's freckled face tightens up with obedient responsibility on your approach. You brush a finger off the bottom of her outlined nipple, blushing as your lips mouth the words 'show me these'.

"Right away!" she subserviently answers, fuzzy hands already moving for the first overstretched button. The round fastener about launches off the tension-lengthened fabrics holding it to the stern jacket when she relieves it of its double-burden. Popping the rest is a trivial matter, and soon her squishy breasts spill through their burgundy barrier, flopping up and down before your mesmerized eyes. "Only for you, [pc.master]," she declares, lifting her transparent shirt and baring her huggable jugs to the crisp air.

The wobbling perks of owning a slave are rocking gently to the left and right. Her squat, chubby nipples are hard and pluckable, sitting atop fat, teacup areola that beg you to feast upon them. Cat-tails weaving delightedly, she maintains her arousing little dance, happy to serve and happier to exhibit - the latter she does with a lifetime of expertise predicated on giving pleasure to all who look upon her.

// pc Libido Low (<33)

Tentatively, you reach out and squeeze one boob, a tightening warmth budding in your groin when you realize just how yielding it (and she) is. Roo coos in an erotic reverie, rapidly nodding in encouragement; you bring your [pc.face] closer, your tongue emerging for a slow, upwards lick. Inevitably, your [pc.lipsChaste] seal around the fresh-tasting skin, suckling at the milkless tap while your other [pc.hand] carefully fondles the rest of her.

// pc Libido Med (<66)

Licking your [pc.lipsChaste] you eagerly dive into the buffet of kitty titty presented, cupping her unsagging boobs from the underside and squeezing them together until you disappear in her bountiful expanse. Your [pc.fingers] roam up to her tweakable nipples, locking around the erect pebbles and sliding back to bulge her breast. Roo moans happily, bobbing her head. Breathing over her sensitive flesh, your tongue lances out to swirl around the milkless tap before your [pc.lipsChaste] purse around her teat and suckle.

// pc Libido High (>67)

An instant, undeniable twinge of arousal scours through you, and you immediately take hold of Roo's breasts and bury your [pc.face] in the fertility-enhanced valley of her sadly empty tanks. Her high-sitting bosom is <i>so soft!</i> They don't sag; they're firm enough to maintain a weighty, spherical shape and yielding enough to sink into and enjoy even more, all while <b>squishing</b> between your [pc.fingers]! Your hot breaths redden her chest with an anticipatory blush as you lick towards one ponderously erect nibble and mindlessly suckle at the potent pebble.

// Merge

In as respectful a manner as she can, Roo straightens her posture and rubs at the rear of your scalp, whispering sweet nothings to your tit-obsessed mind. The initial desire wears off, reducing to a thoughtless buzz shuddering through your grasping fingers into her pillowy bosom. Roo's flawless fields spur the desire to fondle freely, to cover more of her expansive tracts and understand the delight of having unfettered access to another person's body. Now that these stress soothing sugarmounds belong only to you, you know <i>exactly</i> who you'll be calling on when your libido becomes restless and insatiable.

And at the end of the day, when you're making your way back home aching all over, reeking of adventure, a pillow won't provide adequate comfort. The kaithrit's cuddle-melons will be the only place you'll want to rest your head and sleep away every soreness. They welcome you, deforming and spreading out to wrap your head in a mammarian bundle. Thick heartbeats beat a rhythm into your mind, feeding through plush boobies.

It takes a whole minute - actually, three - before you work up the courage to (very reluctantly) pull away, peppering kisses along her swells like a stone skipping on water. What you remind yourself to do is that she waits for <i>your command</i> at all times, and so you tell her to get presentable again. When she's all buttoned up, she bows her head, silently asking what else you might have her do.
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William. said:
I've been acclimating myself to Roo's project doc and mechanics again. A big push is coming and it's not the child birthing kind, though we'll certainly have room for that in the future because DZ won't forgive me otherwise. (And she'll have room for plenty - HEYYOOO)

It's shameful it's taken this long. However, like with Leila, there's always time to nail certain mechanics that were a mystery before. For example, I was told a few months ago there wasn't distinct enough difference between Free and Slave Roo. I usually come up with a lot of things by talking about them in the FenChat Public Discord (which you should join if you like killing time!) and there was a very good idea I've come to decide Roo needs. Besides, I owe a lot of interest at this point.

If Roo is a Slave, I'm gonna put in a couple of smaller scenes where you tell her to go bang or get banged by other crew members to keep them happy. If you want Kase to get his daily dose of (milky) paizuri, make it so. You will be able to watch and masturbate to them -- at first. I don't have any immediate plans to make Steele a participant in these specifically. I have other legit threesomes to see to first, so I'll see which ones I like while I do them. Also, it was always intended for MilkyRoo to be usable in the Nursery Milker to feed your babies with. I think a scene of that feat. Reaha will be fantastic.

So as it stands, in terms of main differences between Slave & Property Roo vs. Free & Hired Roo:

1) Tones in talk scenes. Depending on alignment, you can be more controlling or reserved. This is the thing I need to spend quite a bit of time smoothing out, that's where the aforementioned criticism came from.

2) In smut: Slave: Making a sex slave out of her. Having her perform for money. Perhaps even outright prostitution on safe worlds like Mhen'ga. I wanted planet blurbs, so this is a great place to start. Penny Camwhore will be a great partner on the ship. Her core sex scenes will reflect her status the most I hope. The PC can be rougher, more dominant, really enjoy the quiver and the meow. In the past I talked about how she'd have a lot of specific features as a slave too, like ordering her to strip, be naked, no leaving the ship, no crew interactions, etcetera. Really take control of her life. Even tell her to beg for sex when she's horny. That will all be there.

Free Roo will have initiative, and this can lead to her pushing the envelope. I've had a facesit + riding scene in mind for ages, where she ambushes you in your sleep for messy, hot, lovely sex. A very special scene is also planned for Free Roo + Dick-wielding PCs only, one that will very much speak to the kind of optimistic, silver-lining writing style I'm often employing. Her place on-board and mood should be clearly differentiated.

Free Roo also has the added benefit of an extremely wholesome sequence of events that will never be open to slavemakers.

For the time being, I'd like to post this( again?), since when you buy her (and depending on Freedom/Slavery) you have different teasers of content available to you in the moments before she's officially on the roster. This particular scene is purchasing her as property, and ordering her to undress.
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Do you know which mix of alignment and free/slave interactions would better suit a stoic Steele? Like a hard Steele but a free Roo, or a Kind Steele but slave Roo? I know that Brute Steele's are described as stoic but then that would lock me out of Bianca and all her content.
 
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Super excited for RooCrew. And the fact that DZ is spreading the good word of breeding all the waifus is great to hear. DZ, I salute you. o7
Also really happy to hear that you have something planned for Roo and Reaha. Can't wait to see what you do with that. Any interest in having Roo and Sera meeting? Because that sounds fun to me.
If not I understand. Can't have her do something with everyone as I am sure you would like to actually finish at some point. Either way super excited to see what you do.
 
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