Typos

[edenhall]

I'm planning on using this thread to keep track of the typos I encounter as I play. I will try to be as specific as possible and include game versions:
CoC II 0.6.25:

• Kasyrra Suck Off:
  • "Good, good," Kasyrra moans, gently stroking your short hair, guiding you forward. You open your mouth wide, as wide as you possible can, and wrap your lips around her broad head.
  • 
  • Possibly instead of possible.
• Viviane Intro:
  • That hat is identical to the one you found with the rest of that outfit in the forest!|impressive hat.]
  • 
• Convocation of Mirrors:
  • You'll simply need to assume the mirror stance and let yourself by struck.
  • 
  • Be struck instead of by struck.
• Kiyoko’s Cabin Square:
  • Kiyoko's cabin is as much part of the cherry blossom tree that it rings.
  • 
  • I assume this is meant to be as it’s rings but I am not sure as well.
• Goddess Statue Clean Up:
  • You've been flirted with and fucked by any number of mythical people and monsters.
  • 
  • Extra space included between with and and.
• Goddess Statue Clean Up:
  • "Goodness me, where do you think you're reach— oh... ohh"
  • 
  • Missing italics/punctuation.
• Goddess Statue Clean Up:
  • A sudden and acute awareness of the oxygen you've not been taking in crashes down on you, and you're fairly sure you're about pass out.
  • 
  • About to pass out.
• Evelyn Do It All:
  • "Oh. Oh," she moans, leaning back and tilting her head upwards. "Oh, god."
  • 
  • Should it be Oh, gods? Seems most Wsan scenes use god instead of gods.
• Hethia Oral:
  • it gets the job done.
  • 
  • Missing capitalization.
• Hethia Oral:
  • As your bodies remain joined, you gently stroke the druidess' silvery-white hair hair as she returns your affections, biding your time until the turn of dawn.
  • 
  • Hair written twice.
• Atugia Fight Intro:
  • Unlike the throbbing markings on the cultists you've seen, these evoke a solid image, shining brightly enough to clear away the shadows cast by thebuildings.
  • 
  • Missing space between the buildings.
• Atugia Curse Talk Option:
  • Earlier in the castle she mentioned she was human, but you've never heard of magic that could separate someone's head without killing them.
  • 
  • My character has not been to the castle yet.
• Atugia SpookyStory Talk Option:
  • You pick her up and give her a kiss before setting her head back on her shoulders.
  • 
  • My character has not romanced Atugia yet.
• Orlaith’s Square:
  • At its centre stands a single solitary oak tree, two long, upraised branches sprouting from its massive trunk and stretching towards the sun.That must be Orlaith's.
  • 
  • Space missing before That must be Orlaith’s.
• Orlaith Volunteer:
  • "Noone has ever used their mouth on your penis?" you say, giving her a cursory stroke.
  • 
  • Missing space in no one.
• Doireann Threesome:
  • "Good girl, you're taking so deep. She's so happy you're swallowing it all."
  • 
  • Should it be you’re taking it so deep?
• Kiyoko Tail Bondage:
  • All of your pent-up reserves, just champing at the bit to be set loose, do just that in a massive blissgasm that throws spots into your vision and leaves you shaking.
  • 
  • Should be chomping at the bit.
• Evelyn Lick & Footjob:
  • "Mmh," Evelyn sighs happily, twitching her toes."You know, you're the first person to
  • 
  • Missing space after toes and missing italics.
• Kiyoko Doggy Style:
  • "Hee hee. " Yeah, she looks like she can hardly wait; the poor little vixen is practically vibrating in place with excitement and energy. Time to get started, then!
  • 
  • Extra space after hee hee causing the sections below to be in italics when they should not.
• Kiyoko Post-Sex:
  • But your baby-rabid kitsune wife was made for this, a breeding slut in every sense of the term.Ten, eleven, a full twelve months Kiyoko's pregnancy ripens to, her belly becoming monstrously swollen, a massive, taut dome that protrudes before her and drops ever lower with the kit's weight.
  • 
  • Missing space between term and Ten.

 

[edenhall]

• Kiyoko Pregnancy End:
  • The door is unlocked of, course, and you follow the sound into the back of the cabin, up to the plant-overgrown balcony on the second floor.
  • 
  • Comma should be after unlocked instead of after of.
• Kiyoko Pregnancy End:
  • "I knew I'd be having the kit soon; little bastard's been kicking me left and right nonstop the last few days. I just didn't expect to be caught unawares, for things to happen so suddenly.
  • 
  • Should be unaware.
• Kiyoko Play Rough:
  • Kiyoko wails, throwing her head back even more than you were pulling it back already, beating her little firsts against the wall as you pound and rail your kitsune slut-wife with all your might.
  • 
  • Should be fists.
• Herald Fuck Her:
  • The Herald wastes no more time on banter; her slit embraces every inch of you in one motion, tentacles coiling and uncoiling between your base as her body.
  • 
  • Should be and her body.
• Harpy Victory Vaginal:
  • The winged vixen squeals happily as your start to pick up the pace, pounding into her gaping egg-hole like a hammer.
  • 
  • Should be you.
• Cait Sit In (Halloween Event):
  • Of course you know that armor isn't great for conducting magical power, but even clothes can marginally limit how much your can channel. So..."
  • 
  • Should be you.
• Kasyrra Dream Visit:
  • "Lets!
  • 
  • Should be Let’s (nitpicking, sorry).
• Kasyrra Dream Visit:
  • After a moment, one of the demon-girl's scaled hands comes up and gently strokes your short short hair.
  • 
  • Short hair from hairdressing and short the length descriptor create a redundancy.
• Berwyn Intro:
  • "Y-yeah! How else am supposed to get better at this summoning stuff?!"
  • 
  • Should be am I supposed to.
• Arona Breed Guards:
  • One of the guards finally gets hand meaty hands around your cucumber-sized dick, starting to pump the shaft while her sisters begin to form a line behind her:
  • 
  • Should be her meaty hands.

 

[zagzig]

Should be sorted, cheers. I left a few - "oh, god" appears more than a few times so it seems intentional, champing at the bit is correct, I figured the cabin is as much a cabin as it is part of the cherry blossom tree, but the rest should be fixed.

Except for the hair thing, because hair descriptors are well above my pay grade.

 

[edenhall]

Thanks - if there's an easier format to put these in lmk, otherwise I'll continue like this.

CoC II 0.6.26:

• Ragnild Visit Hretha:
  • "Still, Gerik's such a good boy, I can't help myself."Well, that's an invitation if you ever heard one.
  • Missing space between myself and Well.
• Ihzalti Fuck Pussy:
  • Your shaft aren't fully erect yet, however, and prevent your sudden charge from being a proper standing fuck.
  • Should be isn't.
• Cat Harem Join/Don't:
  • The ash-haired bandit beside her clucks her tongue.
  • Should be clicks.
• Shar Appearance:
  • Shar's got a relatively slender waist but very broad hips that stand out beneath her clothe.
  • Should be clothes.
• Lieutenant Jen Intro:
  • "Make no moves miscreant! I am looking for the those who have been harassing Leofric's mighty legion known as the Marked Merk Mercenaries!
  • Remove "the" or remove "those" and add noun to represent the party.
• Kiyoko Sleeping Wake with Tummy:
  • Well, it's undeniable that Kiyoko's a pretty great girl all around — that there's more of her is hardly a bad thing, yes? Yes? Ye gods, her belly is so warm and good all over, it can't be just the sunshine.
  • Is this meant to be Yes gods?
• Kiyoko Heat Scene:
  • Your foxy slut-wife cries out as you finally explode deep into her, her womb drinking deep of the raw life-force that accompanies your virile offering.Over and over you fire off into Kiyoko, your reserves soon exhausted in the face of your kitsune slut-wife's voracious appetite.
  • Missing space after offering.
• Lieutenant Jen Tit Play:
  • No telling how much it would cost to get and raise kids with such an exotic gal like this mercenary... but paying that sort of price might just be worth it to make this sort of play even better!
  • Extra spaces included after it.
• Berwyn Anal:
  • So, you simply smile and remove your garments in preperation for what's to come.
  • Should be preparation.
• Anna Get Fucked:
  • This time her tapered tip finds your prostate, grinding on it with an insistence that nearly has you nutting until the underside of her tits.
  • Should be onto.
• Marefolk Shaman Fuck Pussy:
  • "Me? Gods, I would never do such a thing! Now go on, stick your prick into me, and make sure it gets in!"
  • Extra space between your and prick.
• Marefolk Shaman Follow Her:
  • This doesn’t last for lost as the shaman reluctantly pushes off the treant and walks over to the rock where you first spied her.
  • Should be long.
• Salwah Introduction:
  • Nothing... nothing happened to my mother after I disappeared, did I?
  • I'm not sure if "did I" is meant to be something else. Seems like using "disappeared, right?" or something like that might make more sense.
• Berwyn Reverse Cowgirl:
  • He lifts himself up slightly, and repostitions himself above your shaft.
  • Should be repositions.
• Quintillus Hawkthrone Guest Intro:
  • Though he's seated, your approach lets you see his black fur just as he said; it wraps around his lower legs and forearms like sexy lingerie.Its softness is without question and well-groomed, vanishing into a pair of burlap gloves.
  • Missing space after lingerie.
• Etheryn/Carmen Scene:
  • She is much as you remember her from the last time you met: a tall and willowy woman, save for a broad set of hips, clad in an old-fashioned dress in black and red.
  • My character has not met Carmen yet (likely due to the changes with Atugia).
• Effigies Fertilize:
  • With a mighty need surging through you, it's only natural to grab the second plant-skank's presented rump and plunge your shaft into her, deflowering her with a single, mighty thrust of your dick.She lets out a sultry moan and wiggles her hips, taking as much dick as she can before you pull back and unleash another miasma of heady desire to join the first.
  • Missing space after dick.
• Effigies Fertilize:
  • Their third sister, fresh from a creampie of her own, staggers over and presses herself up against your back.
  • Extra space after staggers.
• I Ain't Afraid of No Ghost Conclusion:
  • Your orc even manages to nap on one of the chairs for a short while—her snoring providing at least some variety to the house's ambiance.
  • Extra space after orc.
• Ninian Provide Muscle:
  • You roll your ideas at the notion and raise a hand to your chin and close your eyes in thought...
  • I think this is meant to be roll your eyes.
• Berwyn Prone Bone:
  • He lowers himself onto the matress, holding his dick in a way that it's left pointing down right between his toes as he gets onto his stomach.
  • Should be mattress.
• Berwyn Missionary:
  • After giving the half-breed's spasming pucker to adjust to your length and girth, listening to him quietly moan and whimper as you kiss him, you start to move your hips again, pulling back and dragging your dick along the femboy's inner walls until your cockhead reaches his tailhole again.
  • Should be pucker time to adjust.
• Berwyn Missionary:
  • You roll your hips as you seed flood's Berwyn's depths, moaning against his lips. Your load of hot, cum floods Berwyn's depths, making the dogboy pant at the heat of your seed.
  • Extra space included between lips and Your.
• Prince Nyze Drone 3some
  • He crosses his arms and gives you a cold stare. But contradicting his disinterested expression, you note that all twelve inches of his vesparan cock are fully erect and already drooling precum.
  • Prince Nyze intro mentioned eight, not twelve, inches.
• Prince Nyze Drone 3some
  • Wanting to get a closer look, you instruct him to take over holding his legs up, a request the drone acquiesces to , albeit with some quiet grumbling.
  • Extra space after to.
• Prince Nyze Fuck Him:
  • His teeth grit once more but this time his back arks and his hole tightens; unlike before, the newly awakened anus isn't releasing you.
  • Should be arcs.
• Honey Golem Pound It Out:
  • She's far too busy slavering over your cock to worry about it. Indeed, the way she's going wild for your dicks, you know it won't be long before you cum.
  • My character only has one dick.
• Ragnild Given Dress Scene:
  • She's blaise about it for all of two seconds until she realises just what it is that you're giving her, upon which the orcess' usual shade of dirty green turns almost positively outright brown about her face and shoulders.
  • Should be blase.
• Ragnild Date Sex:
  • "Oh dear. It looks like you have my at your advantage, you scoundrel."
  • Should be me.
• Ragnild Date Sex:
  • You grit your teeth and do your best to match Rags' efforts in taking the both of you down to pound town — . Despite her strength and the way she's wielding it,
  • Extra — included after town.
• Ragnild Date Sex:
  • Not everyone can be as hardheaded Arona, you know."
  • Missing as after Arona.
• Ragnild Date Sex:
  • In a sudden motion, your orcish loves thrusts her hips downward, using her weight as leverage to impale herself on your shaft all the way to your balls with a meaty smack.
  • Should be orcish lover.
• Ragnild Date Sex:
  • Her fingers practically crush your shoulders as your crotches grind together, , her nethers shuddering around yours in ecstacy.
  • Extra comma after together and should be ecstasy not ecstacy.
• Berwyn? Cuddle:
  • That puts a slight smile on your face and leads you to hug Berwyn back, putting your arms around around the mage and holding him.
  • Extra around included.
• Quintillus/Ivris Scene:
  • he says, one of his ears lowering to further show the awkwardness he's feeling. "I guess got carried away. She's all yours now."
  • Missing I after guess.
• Cultist Reaver Intro:
  • "Oh?" Quintillus steps out, forcing the main to flinch. It seems the two may very well know one another.
  • Should be man.
• Cultist Reaver Intro:
  • Don't worry about; if you live to the end of this day, I'll get real acquainted with you all over again.
  • Missing it after about.
• Cait Temple Survey:
  • "Do you not watch to fetch little Salwah first, sunflower? She is the one out of all of us actually invested in the temple, hmm?"
  • Should be want.
• Ragnild/Hretha Drunk Threeesome:
  • Gently pushing Rags off you , you ease her so that she's straddling your ab-lined belly, thighs and knees squeezing your chest from either side.
  • Extra space after you.
• Hretha Get Ridden:
  • Her hands grip your shoulders, holding you tight as she she-orc analyzes your aroma.
  • Probably should be as the she-orc analyzes your aroma.
• Harvest Valley Cultists First Victory Scene:
  • A glance around reveals that her two bodyguards-cum-litter-bearers are out of it, too — looks like that's that, then. "She's not getting away that easily!"
  • Extra space after then.
• Harvest Valley Cultists Victory Centaurs Question:
  • The little goblin cultist nods empathically.
  • Should be emphatically.
• Zo Equanimity Training:
  • You do as she wants, and spin it once last time.
  • Should be one.
• Zo Intuition Training:
  • Once the finally stone rains down, Zo eases her stance, her weapon no longer at the ready, and the shimmering silver glow fades from her eyes.
  • Should be final.
• Zo Influence Training:
  • Obviously it’s not as easy as just pressing your fingers to the wood and expecting it to me – whenever she does anything, like making wood flex and bend, or healing a slash wound, or whatever, it involves that mystical energy of hers that causes her braided hair to dance behind her head.
  • I'm not sure what it's meant to be but it seems like me may be a type (or it may be my lack of understanding).
• Zo Influence Training:
  • Towards the end of your previous session, you felt like you were really beginning to understand what it was she was accomplishing just by pulling potatoes out of the dirt, and you feel like you’re close to achieving that same sort of technique.
  • Previous session was apple picking, current session is pulling potatoes.
• Zo Down On Her:
  • Her body is too strong and sturdy for you to easy wriggle your way lower – but, you’re also locked face-deep into her cleavage, and there are certainly worse places to be.
  • Should be easily.
• Zo Exertion Training:
  • When she brings her hands together at her side, a gust of winds billows around her, ruffling her clothing, and you feel an invisible force push against not just you, but the hut behind her: the old wood creaks and groans as whatever this is exerts itself on the dilapidated house.
  • My character has already refurbished Zo's house at this point.
• Sariel Post-Cure Scene:
  • Huh, you could probably rain on her parade as to the 'unicorn centaur's origins, but her eyes are practically glittering.
  • I'm not sure of my grammar on this one but I think it should be 'unicorn centaur's' or is otherwise missing another '.
• Zo Down On You:
  • The longer she goes, the slower her hand gets, and the more she salivates down the length of your shaft – she’s probably just a moment’s loss of control away from burying her face in your sack and giving them just a thorough a bath as she’s giving your dick. Zo nurses at your cock, thirsty for the reward your body implicitly promises her if she just keeps going, but she doesn’t go at an intense pace, knowing that it’s not a race and that you’ll get to where you’re going before long.
  • After the sentence that ends with dick, there should be another enter keyed in. Currently the sentence that starts with Zo starts on the next line but it should have a space between it like the other new paragraphs.
• Sariel Rim 69:
  • Her eyes are glittering once she gets a good luck at you— she'd be undressing you with her eyes if not for the fact that you're already literally doing so
  • Should be look.
• Slime Victory Female Fuck:
  • The slime grabs your cock, splitting their lower-half wide apart so they can directly lower it inside until the cool touch of goo presses along the bottom of its length.
  • Extra space after your.
• Slime Victory Female Fuck:
  • "Don't worry, slimes girls always fit whatever size they want in all the stories, right?"
  • Should be slime.
• Gnolls Intro:
  • It's such that you almost don't notice the ambush when it happens — one moment there's but tall grass waving in the wind as you pick your way forward, the next there're several lanky shapes that've erupted from seemingly nowhere.
  • Should be there's.
• Kavi Milk:
  • Even as she speaks, he hands are busy sifting apart the dress that you now realize was making much more of an effort to contain her than you thought.
  • Should be her.
• Zuzaan Help Her:
  • The corded muscle of her hips and back feels like massaging silk-covered stone, as unyielding as Undermountain itself.
  • Should this be "as unyielding as the Undermountain itself"?
• Educational Help Conclusion:
  • Of course, of course. Well, it's about time for you to leave. You give Kiyoko a final kiss on the cheek and Kinu a pat between her ears, then bid them goodbye as you head down and out of the cabin. The sun's still shining down as warmly as it was when you entered the Astral Plane, and there's a smile on your face as you head off into the waking world. With how effortlessly she picked up Behlaran magic, surely your daughter will grow up to be as fine an arcanist as her mother when she comes of age, if not more...
  • Following this paragraph the player is not kicked out of the dream and can still choose actions with Kiyoko.
• Atani Her Mother:
  • "You can just call me Atani, if you’d like. I prefer it! Really!."
  • Extra period included after Really!
• Carmen's Offer:
  • A single glass-paned window — quite the luxury out here in the Marches, even if a bit scratched up — overlooks the castle courtyard where you and the freckled knight first sparred.
  • Another leftover from the Atugia changes (we didn't spar in the castle).
• Carmen's Offer:
  • Tugs awkwardly looks between her current and former employer before settling on standing at attention between the two of you.
  • I think this is the only place Atugia is referred to as Tugs and not Tui so I'm not sure if you'd want to change this or not.
• Carmen's Offer Accept:
  • The sword moves from one shoulder to the other as she speaks, before withdrawing at 'last.'
  • Extra quotation marks included.
• Aunora Cum Talk:
  • She freezes up at that suggestion strangley, since you've seen her naked before, before just shaking her head and keeping quiet.
  • Should be strangely.
• Naiyana Get Ridden:
  • Similarly, after half an hour alone in the tent with naiyana, you would expect her to have licked you clean...
  • Missing capitalization.
• Demon Brienne Dream:
  • She feels so right, so perfect inside you it's impossible to explain, your mind reeling as it searches for answers, your back arching so hard your clenching butt leaves the bed and Brienne wraps an arm under your lower back, holding you safelywhile your member paint your upper body with cum.
  • Missing space after safely and should be paints.
• Zo Preg:
  • If anything is capable of raising a child, though, it is not the house that she lives in. No family of yours is going to live in a shack that doesn’t have a door, much less a proper foundation, from the way it lists slightly to one side underneath its own weight. And you tell Zo as much: as soon as you two can, you’re going to fix up her house so that you can respectably raise a child inside it.
  • The house has already been repaired.
• Garth Gwyn Preg Scene:
  • If nothing else, you helped Cait when no one else would.That, and you've been making sure your get's well-paid for materially at least."
  • Missing space after would.
• Lusina Victory Sex:
  • She squeezes them between her fuzzy fingers just enough to make you wince before moving on to your belly, trailing airy kisses along your tender flesh, letting your squirm in her embrace.
  • Should be you.
• Ahmri Preg:
  • Your cock feels so good, so, ngh, gods damn gooood. Like, hanhh, like it belongs," she moans, looking back over her shoulder and mashing her tits in her hands as her body is wracked by myriad micro-orgasms.
  • Missing a after by.
• Brienne All Night Scene:
  • You can feel her tense, her vaginal walls tightening around your fingers as her quads flex.
  • Second her should be removed.
• Golden Carrot Conclusion:
  • The taeleer also has a floor-mat waiting in front of the entryway, and you and your companions make sure to clean your respect feet before entering fully.
  • Should be respective.
• Sariel & Guards Anal Foursome:
  • The blue-haired-mare grins and lines up, sliding into the bun with surprisingly little difficult despite how broad the head of her stallion-cock is.
  • Should be difficulty.
• Sariel & Guards Anal Foursome:
  • You didn't actually need fresh lube, but it's a lot of fun watching a horny horse-girl hungrily suckly your knob.
  • Is this meant to be suck or suckle?
• Kino Naginata/Archery:
  • Hmm... well. You're not really trained in the use of arms, or at least not formally. While you might have picked up a thing or two ever since your adventure started, it's probably not up to the standard to which Kiyoko wants her daughter to be brought to.
  • Similar to Educational Help there should be another enter keyed in after "Hmm... well." to add a space and make it consistent with the other new paragraphs.
• Kurako Doggystyle:
  • You can't wait wait either, but you want to go just a little longer.
  • Remove extra wait.
• Kurako Threesome:
  • Arona's breaths come out mad hyperventilations, her lungs so full of lust-heat that her exhalations linger hotly in the air.
  • Should this be "as mad hyperventalations"? Also spelling.
• Miko & Mai Fight Intro:
  • Perhaps taking a job like this without perhaps asking for some way to home in on the object she's looking for was a bad idea...
  • Should be hone.
• Miko & Mai Fight Intro:
  • Come to think of it, it's not too much unlike Cait's own passion priestess garb, or at least possessed of the same energy. "Baaah," Cait spits, sounding more than a little aggrieved as her tail lashes irritably from side to side. "Didn't know any other gods were getting into temple prostitutes too. That's Mallach's domain, and where almost all the Temple's income comes from."
  • Extra enter key needed to separate new paragraph.
• Meira Chat Yourself:
  • Mom has her ways and means, so she's able to get me and my sisters practically anything we want, but there's no real way to simple, genuine human interaction on demand.
  • I think this is meant to be "no real way to get simple, genuine human interaction".
• Meira Take Her Pussy:
  • More than she knows. Patting the plush mattress, you invite your 'nuki lover to join you. You does just that, flopping her front up and propping herself on her elbows while her feet remain on the floor.
  • Should be She.
• Meira Take Her Pussy:
  • Meira hikes up her ass again, presenting herself another spanking, but you lean in over her and give her a nibble on the nape of her neck.
  • Should be presenting herself for another spanking.
• Vari Sex:
  • It's lucky she's so wet already because you really don't want to hold back now, not when she's asked you so kindly to give it to her as hard as you've got.
  • Should this be She's?
• Kurako Oral:
  • Everything goes cold for a moment — not unsurprising considering your environs, but it tells you that she's stopped.
  • Should be environment.
• Kohaku Metal?:
  • All right, you getting the picture here.
  • Should be you're.
• Kohaku Sex:
  • Kohaku makes a muffled noise that may have a yes or no; her ears wiggle back and forth.
  • Should be may have been or may be.
• Kinu Sick Event:
  • So long as it doesn't get worse, she won't be in any danger. I'm not too experienced at these things, but I do know something.
  • Should this be somethings?
• Kinu Sick Event:
  • With that, Kiyoko stands, stretches her limbs, and heads out the door, her tails tails trailing behind her.
  • This is probably meant to say how many tails Kiyoko has at the time.
• Komari Meet and Greet Conclusion:
  • Approaching Komari, you inform the den matron that you've done as she asked and made good your introductions.
  • I think this should be made good on your introductions.
• Kohaku Tease Ears:
  • Not that you stop — quite the opposite, in fact, as you toy with the toy with the tips of her ears and scratch at the bases and insides.
  • Extra toy with.

 

[Leykoss]

Oh boy

 

[edenhall]

CoC II 0.6.27:

• Kohaku Full Nelson:
  • You're supposed to be toying with her like the cute little fox that she is, and you're doing just that. Why, is anything wrong? Aahn!"
  • Missing quotation at the beginning of Aahn.
• Kohaku Full Nelson:
  • You want to be close, to make the adorable petite thing in your lap feel good
  • Missing comma after adorable (ultra nitpicking, sorry).
• Kohaku Full Nelson:
  • She squeals and squirms stop you, feeling warm heat flood her insides as you paint her walls white, and you reassuringly move your hands to her shoulders down and hold her in place while the two of you ride out your release.
  • I'm not sure what word was meant to be used, but "She squeals and squirms stop you" is missing something (ex. squirms to stop you or squirms atop you.)
• Berwyn & Cait Threesome Fuck Berwyn:
  • Berwyn seems to be enjoying getting fucked almost as much as catfolk friend is, moaning loudly and eagerly pushing his wide, girly hips back against yours each time you thrust forward.
  • Should be as your catfolk friend is.
• Berwyn & Cait Threesome Fuck Berwyn:
  • His big, fat lupine dick twitches and flexes inside Cait when your shaft rubs against his prostate, milking that little ball right into priestess' waiting womb, filling her with pre-cum.
  • Should be the priestess' waiting womb or your priestess' waiting womb.
• Berwyn & Cait Threesome Fuck Berwyn:
  • You thrust your slender hips forward, hard, burying your length inside you girly, half-lupine summoner, causing him to cry out.
  • Should be your.
• Berwyn & Cait Threesome Fuck Berwyn:
  • You grunt hard, and your dick begin to spasm and convulse inside your lover.
  • Should be begins.
• Etheryn & Atugia Massage:
  • The scattered dullahan hops gingerly back over Etheryn, grabbing three fat candles from her back.
  • Should this be backpack?
• Etheryn & Atugia Massage:
  • "Ah! You guy's lips are really warm. It feels nice,"
  • I think this should be your guy's?
• Attitude Adjustment Quin Talk:
  • The taeleer mentioned he'll need 500 hawks to pay for the whole thing.
  • Quin didn't mention 500 hawks and in fact mentioned that he'd pay for it out of his pockets (unless I am misreading): Quintillus does, however, return to the more pressing matter. "Given you and I are good friends... I'll cover the cost of the armor. Once you're good to go, just grab me and we'll swing over to visit that orc's smithy."
• Kinu Post-Illness Meeting:
  • A look of straight-faced determination etched on her features, she's imitating Kiyoko step by step as the two of them go through various forms with the polearm. All in all, while she's not vibrating on the spot and could stand to have better posture, at least she's not bedridden anymore.
  • Extra enter needed to separate the new paragraph.
• Kinu Post-Illness Meeting:
  • Kinu squirms and looks extremely guilty. Smiling, you kneel so that you're on eye level with your daughter, and embrace her in a big hug.
  • Same here, should either be brought into one paragraph or needs another enter keyed in to keep the spacing consistent.
• Kinu Post-Illness Meeting:
  • Her parents love her, her brothers and sisters too, and experiences like these are who she discovers other facets of her personality and who she is.
  • I think this is meant to be how, not who.
• Hotaru Miko and Mai Talk:
  • Most of it you can get, but the sisters' speech can get pretty thick in places and that;s on top of the fact that Belharan is not their native language.
  • Should be that's.
• Hotaru Story:
  • Hotaru thinks a moment, then nods. "Sure, I need to keep my mouth moving anyway. "This one's not from my homeland, but from neighboring Macah; nevertheless, I think it's a good enough story to tell.
  • Missing end quotation after the paragraph ending with anyway (or extra starting quotation in the new paragraph starting with This).
• Hotaru Patslut:
  • Hey ears are filled with messy fur, thick and full-bodied but not neat cottony balls like some other kitsune you've seen; they're more jagged tufts that jut a little way from the fleshy, fuzzy rims of those vulpine ears.
  • Should be her.
• Hotaru Patslut:
  • Making little fox-noises in the back of her throat, Hotaru sags back against you and buries the back of your head against your chest, pulling your thumbs out of her ears in the same motion.
  • Should be back of her head.
• Nakano Intro Scene:
  • "Ah." With a small sigh, Nakano steps up to the doorway and gives you a small, sharp nod, his tails swishing in his wake. "I suppose it can't be helped. Come on in."
  • Extra enter key needed to separate the new paragraph beginning with "With".
• Rindo Gentian Scene:
  • [PC Name], if I may take my leave. I can hear my duties calling me, and I have dithered too long; Mikoto will be upset with me."
  • Missing starting quotation mark which makes her quote not italicized.
• Rindo Impregnate:
  • Mmm, that's her womb right there, isn't it? Or so tight, yet throbbing so desperately — maybe she felt like she couldn't have a child because of her circumstances and hence kept putting off her hunger, but she's safe as your concubine now.
  • Is this meant to be "Oh so tight"?
• Rindo Impregnate:
  • Breath comes hot and heavy from between gritted teeth as you ram yourself inside of her concubine with each pass, reaching deeper and deeper as animalistic fervor grows.
  • Should be your concubine or her [vagina descriptor].
• Rindo Impregnate:
  • One hand tends to the scarred half of her face, while the other teases her ears; on her part, her fingers desperately reaches for you even as she seeks to lock her legs about your back, trying to prevent you from drawing away.
  • Should be reach.
• Rindo Impregnate:
  • Well, she needn't worry — you'll take care of both her and the fox kit you're making together not merely until the danger to her has passed, but for as long she wants.
  • Should be for as long as she wants (missing a second as).
• Rindo Impregnate:
  • Together, you rub circles in Rindo's lower belly, fingers pushing into the flesh as if desiring to feel your shaft deep within her, or perhaps her womb... but you just really want to hear her exhausted yet cries as you stoke your poor concubine into deeply and richly accepting your seed.
  • Seems to be a word missing after yet.
• Hellhound Intro:
  • You've barely make it thirty feet past the entrance when the first sign of danger rears its ugly head — you'd swear you saw a shadow in the corner of your eye dart past you, clinging to the murky darkness behind the columns.
  • Should be made.
• Miko Impregnate:
  • In the scheme of things, this little episode probably isn't life-threatening or detrimental in the scheme of things if Keros himself was willing to brush off her complaints just to see her squirm.
  • Extra "in the scheme of things".
• Miko Impregnate:
  • She's clearly not all there any more, tongue hanging loosely out of her mouth when she's not kissing you, ravenous, animal noises rising from her throat as she struggles for air; so much of her energy's going into this act of conscupid mating that she's forgetting to breathe.
  • I don't think conscupid is a word and I'm not sure what it's meant to be either.
• Jael'yn Fight Intro:
  • "The throne room's just ahead," Etheryn says, glancing from you the door at the hall's end to the white pool seeping under its crack. "What's going on in there...?"
  • Should be from you to the door.
• Jael'yn Breed Her Victory:
  • Now that it's properly revealed, the scent of breeder-cunt washes over you with enough strength to get you salivating... and your prick to actually aching with desire.
  • Should be begins/starts to ache or is instead of to.
• Kasyrra Winter City Doggy Her:
  • Her meaty tail wraps around your lower back and caresses you, holding you tight and ensuring you won't slip away before your duty is done. |You bottom out against her cervix and keep pushing, thrusting forward until you're balls-deep in her cunny, leaving Kasyrra winded even as she grinds herself back into you.
  • Paragraph separating issue and rogue | included before You.
• Kasyrra Winter City Doggy Her:
  • She gently — lovingly, even — takes your cock in hand, stroking it reverentially. "How would you like these to be bigger?
  • My character only has one cock so should be this, not these.
• Rift Intro:
  • Ryn's ears wobble, and she laughs at herself.
  • Extra space after she.
• Baron of the March Accept:
  • Elthara pips up, saying, "The city will help, of course. Coordinate with Daliza, baron, when you're ready to get underway."
  • Should be pipes up.
• Drifa Rescue Victory:
  • Her anxiousness is palpable. It's like trying to hold a conversation with Ryn when you first met.
  • Extra space between sentences.
• Drifa Invite to Wayfort:
  • The fort is guarded and is not nearly as densely populated as Hawkethrone. Plus, it's an ideal place for her to conduct her search.
  • Should be Hawkthorne.
• Drifa Opinion Talk:
  • Regrettably, the hug does not last forever as detaches herself from you and takes a step back.
  • Missing she before detaches.
• Agni Boredom Talk:
  • "That’s not to say that life isn’t, or ever be, not worth living.
  • Should be will ever be.
• Agni Grow Dick:
  • She skin flushes – an unusual sight for her, given that it’s difficult to make her warm – and her right hand goes to her pelvis, her index and middle fingers splaying across the skin of her crotch, just about her pussy.
  • Should be Her skin flushes. Also is the last part meant to say just above her pussy?
• Agni Hellhound:
  • She’s still at the entrance to the temple, watching out for any incoming intruders, her arms crossed and her eyes peeled; when you and Agnimitra start making your towards her, she breaks her focus to turn towards you two.
  • Should be making your way towards her.
• Agni Hellhound:
  • You have more to give her body was prepared to handle, and it gushes back out against you, dumping just as much extra load against your own thighs as you put in.
  • Should be something like "You have more to give her body than it was prepared to handle".
• Vatia Camp Introduction:
  • You're sitting at the campfire with Brienne and Etheryn when your when you hear an unfamiliar noise.
  • Remove when your.
• Agni Hellound Join In:
  • The hellhound woman is on her back, propped up on one elbow while the other gingerly holds Agnimitra by her left asscheek, while Agnimitra sits with her bare crotch pressed tightly against her partner’s as she wetly fucks the hellhound’s tight twat .
  • Extra space before the period.
• Agni Hellhound Join In:
  • Her hips move so casually as she saws her cock in and out of the hellhound’s pussy, as if she hardly even realizes she’s doing it , causing the guardian to sharply exhale through her nose.
  • Extra space before the comma which is also causing issues with the paragraph spacing.
• Astrea at Waystone:
  • With the way she’s slumped forward with her head down, so might very well be asleep – she’s had a very difficult life recently and you don’t doubt that it can all catch up to her in a hurry.
  • Should be she.
• Matiha's Tower Second Map-Square:
  • Long, thicky ivy vines sprawl across whatever ground is beneath the fortress, wriggling their way through the loam and tearing the paths up as they go.
  • Should be thick.
• Rush Matiha:
  • "Don’t touch Berwyn, andKILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THOSE FUCKERS!"
  • Missing space after and.
• Matiha Fight Victory:
  • It feels almost like gravity: an invisible force, dissimilar to wind, pushing against you and forcing you away from the rune as its energy is leaked from the rock, and the closer you get to the rune, the more intense it becomes.
  • Should this be not dissimilar to wind?
• Matiha Post-Victory:
  • With Elexis and her fate resolved, you and your companions return to your initial goal of locating Matiha – and it isn’t too long until you find her.
  • Extra space after you.
• Matiha Post-Victory:
  • You nonchalantly glance Berwyn’s breasts. You ask him if he... might have misremembered a thing or two.
  • Missing at after glance.
• Matiha Post-Victory:
  • You and Wynne were all over the inside of that fortress, and you came to a room that... well, you wouldn’t describe it as a ‘heart,’ but it differently felt different from the rest of the fortress.
  • Should be definitely.
• Matiha Post-Victory:
  • "But now," she continues, looking down at herself – at her crotch and his decidedly-flaccid, un-tented pants.
  • Should be her for Wynne.
• Matiha Post-Victory:
  • "It’s not out of the question, that’s for certain," Wynne says, rubbing her chin with her thumb again. His eyes go back to Matiha’s. "What was the second thing?"
  • Should be her for Wynne.
• Matiha Post-Victory:
  • Her eyes are as wide as plates and, true to her word, she can’t bear the thought of looking at you – or at Berwyn, now that she’s made her fantasies known.
  • Should be Wynne after my choice.
• Matiha Post-Victory:
  • If Matiha were uncomfortable enough about the topic to run away, she would have done.
  • Missing it after done.
• Matiha/Wynne Polyamory:
  • Wynne says, turning towards you and affectionally pressing her nose to yours.
  • Should be affectionately.
• Matiha/Wynne Polyamory:
  • She turns her heard shyly towards you – not all the way, but enough that you can see her left eye from her profile.
  • Should be head.
• Matiha's Revenge Conclusion:
  • And Matiha is standing right behind him, carrying two more, one in each hand – and with a small bookshelf hovering in the air behind her, kept afloat with the same magic she uses for her bust, presumably.
  • Should be her for Wynne.
• Matiha's Revenge Conclusion:
  • You ask her and Matiha what they’re doing.
  • Extra space after her.
• Elyon Alissa Talk:
  • "Oh, fine.I know it may sound wrong of me to say it, but when I think back on it the demoness arriving in the palace and corrupting everyone may have been a good thing," Elyon muses. "I know this opinion may by unpopular, but I still feel it needs to be said."
  • Missing space after fine, also should be "be" instead of "by".
• Elyon Alissa Talk:
  • By arriving and bringing things to a head, she allowed the scab to be finally ripped off and the wound be allowed to heal.
  • Missing to after wound.
• Lyla Her Talk:
  • " It’s likely that your imagination is not too far off, " you say.
  • Extra space before It's.
• Lyla Her Talk:
  • Her lips become silent as his gaze gets lost in the flames once again.
  • Should be her gaze.
• Lyla Sex:
  • Lyla unties the straps of her armor and the copper plate falls from her chest, revealing the pale skin that hid beneath as her flat belly and her small, ivory colored tits. come from behind the metal to garnish the sight.
  • Errant period after tits.
• Lyla Footjob:
  • "Ow my... you really are a cum slut, aren’t ya?"
  • Should be Oh my.
• Lyla Fuck:
  • Now you better be up for a good fucking, mister . Is that okay with you?"
  • Extra space after mister.
• Lyla Fuck:
  • Lyla takes you by the cock and leads the way with a firm grip around your hard meat pole, reaching the end when she places you in front of one of the trees nearby.
  • Extra space after cock.
• Lyla Fuck:
  • Lyla pushes gently at first, your back ring shyly opening to welcome her tip, but once your insides swallow the knob, every care is thrown away by a powerful thrust .
  • Extra space after thrust.
• Lyla Fuck:
  • "You wish, mister ,"
  • Extra space after mister.
• Lyla Fuck:
  • You hear Lyla panting and her grip tightens as her balls knock on your cheeks.
  • Extra space after your.
• Lyla Fuck Face:
  • Lyla pulls out, stepping away without warning, making you ass gape at the sudden emptiness that takes you by surprise.
  • Should be your.
• Lyla Fuck Face:
  • You feel her warm tip rubbing against your cheek, quivering when her hand wraps the shaft and starts shaking it at a fast peace. She lets a loud moan followed by her back arching, then her toes curling on the ground, and lastly by a hot touch flowing through one of your cheekbones as Lyla’s cock starts dripping cum all over it.
  • Should be pace. Also should be lets out a loud moan.
• Daliza Her Family Talk:
  • When the Godwar broke out, Dracia and the other island holdfasts were first to be attacked.
  • Should be Godswar.
• Mai Fire Gems Talk:
  • Th' elemental interplay o' th' scenery is what really interests a gal like lil' ol' me, leastways more than the obligations that my predecessors had to survey these lands.Knowing where everythin' is helps a lot with many kinds o' divinin', especially when yer dealin' with folks who ain't as skilled as Miko an' me.
  • Missing space after lands.
• Kiyoko New Year Sex:
  • Summoning up a surge of strength, get to your feet, sending a hyperactive, breed-hungry mother-wannabe falling forward all your lap.
  • Should be you get to your feet.
• Kiyoko New Year Sex:
  • Barking and yipping away a beast in heat, Kiyoko has to splay out her arms in front of her just to keep balance, her hips and butt jiggling and trembling with each each earth-shaking smack of your balls against her soft flesh.
  • Should this be like a beast in heat?
• Kiyoko New Year Sex:
  • To a kitsune den mother like her, there's no greater joy than kit-making, and her body's isn't holding back in rewarding your kitsune slut-wife for doing what she was practically made to do.
  • Should be body.
• Daliza Flirt:
  • "She's protective. Doesn't like people getting to close uninvited."
  • Should be too.
• Daliza Missionary:
  • The little red tuft of her bush brushes against your rock-hard belly, ticking your skin while the elf rises on her knees.
  • Should be tickling.
• Zhara Wayfort Bedroom Sex:
  • "Yeah get her!" "Right there, Champ!" "That's how she likes it!" or "Ohhh I wish that was me!"
  • Missing italics.
• Zhara Wayfort Bedroom Sex:
  • The wingleader herself is laid out with her head on your pillow, her arms cradled around her egg-belly while your most recently creampie leaks down her thigh.
  • Should be recent.
• Anna Wayfort Upgrade:
  • I'm sorry, we've just been waiting like an opportunity to re-expand for ages, and I bet this'll encourage the other farmers to return to their fields too.
  • I'm not sure what this is meant to say, maybe like an eternity? Or for an opportunity?
• Wayfort Upgrade Return to Daliza:
  • A visiting hornets saunters up with a little basket of goodies, handing out what appear to be thin crackers glazed with honey.
  • Either remove the A or make hornets singular.
• Rift Cultists Interrogate:
  • Tollus' little posse isn't exactly the best at stealth — if nothing else, they've starkly visible against the white and blue of the rift with their black robes and all.
  • Should be they're.
• The Wyld Hunt Conclusion:
  • "Back in the day, the bridge than spanned the fjord was still whole,"
  • Should be that.
• Kaina Victory Talk:
  • "I am Kaina, daughter of Jacquard and 'When The Snow Falls Upon Grass, All Hearts Become Open'." The draco-taur — Kaina — explains, tongue trilling fluidly. That's one hell of a name. "Or Gwen, for short."
  • Is this meant to be Gwen? Apologies if I'm just dumb, I'm not seeing where Gwen is coming from when her name is Kaina.
• Kaina Intro:
  • As far as sexual equipment, Kaina has it all; Nodules and ridges run the length of a draconic cock, with a thick rounded head that ends ultimately in a tapered tip that looks custom made for filling wombs.
  • Super nitpicky but nodules should not be capitalized.